| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Silver Volken Raven- Wed 24 Oct 2007
| Okay, i read this on FF.net, and I likes the story! It sucks that your can't update it on FF.net , I'd really like to know what happened next
jasmine- Wed 10 Oct 2007
| please write more
Diane- Sat 06 Oct 2007
| Well at the moment it's confusing since chapter 1 is the same as chapter 3 & you really don't have much idea of what's going on.
| chapter 3 is on page one
sesshysbabygurl- Fri 05 Oct 2007
| Love your story but i was wondering if you ment to put the third chapter first and where is the first chapter. any way its really good i love the way you did the lemon well so far anyway its cute the game they played.hope to see an update soon.
Jen- Fri 05 Oct 2007
Hey!
Just wanted to let you know, u posted ch. 3 instead of ch. 1
I love these high - school fics. They're always so awesome! This story is awesome! :) I was wondering if you'd like to post it on my site:
http://www.justexpressing.com
SesshysKagome- Wed 19 Sep 2007
| This is a sweet story. I love this take on the future after the shikon jewel. I want more so much that I might pull my hair out waiting.
bluemoon_175- Mon 17 Sep 2007
| Your story sounds really good, but you really need to put spacing in there. Because if you don't put some spacing it can hurt some peoples eyes, and they wont read your story.
Inuashley- Mon 17 Sep 2007
| Like the story, still really hard to read. I will be your beta if you like
Inuashley- Mon 17 Sep 2007
| Like the story, still really hard to read. I will be your beta if you like
| I think that you have a great idea but the way your organize is in a way that makes people not want to read it because it's all jumbled. I didn't want to read it because of how it looked, so I'm not trying to be mean or anything but you need a beta reader.
Inuashley- Sun 16 Sep 2007
| Hey, I like the story but it is really hard to read. Please make paragraphs.
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