You left it there! Huff. I hope you get a chance to update soon. I realllly want to see what happens next.

this story is very beautiful. I like it very much. please update as soon as you can ; D

Omigod!!! You have GOT to get the next chapter up!!! YOU'VE GOT TO!!!!

*mouth agape*
WHERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
It's gotta be a crime to leave off like that.
*slams head on table*
HURRY BEFORE I HURT MYSELF HORRIBLY!!!

I absolutely love how this is going and can't wait to see how their relationship developed.
Incredible chapter and I can't wait to read the next installment!

simply brilliant woman!

You never disappoint.

EP

wow. that's deep so far!! cant wait to read the next chapter!!

Great job on this chapter - I love the ending, evil cliffy though it may be xD

Hee hee~~ an update! And update! I do so adore your story! :D

So wonderfully sensuous yet still full of innocence! I love it! More please!

^_^

I absolutely adore your stories! And I can barely wait for the next chapter! I so want to know what's going to happen next!

Beautifully crafted chapter. There's not a word out of place. You display a wonderful understanding of Sesshoumaru's unhumanity and Kagome's human instincts at work, which leads them to the current situation. Brilliantly concieved and executed. I could tell that not all of the blood on the page was theirs - some of it was yours. There were only a couple of places where a comma would be appropriate and one spot where there should have been a semi-colon instead of a period.

If I was grading your work, I would give it an A+++. If you were selling your work, I would buy it in a New York minute!

Jane

Wooooo Hooooo!!! New chapter. Ooooh, it was really good too. I love your stories. I look forward to every word. Great work! :)

Details of what really happened and you stopped in the middle of the story! I was hoping that her first time with Sesshoumaru was not a frightening experience, but it is looking that way.

you are mean... have i told you that recently? cause if i haven't consider yourself told... evil cliffie

update soon... and mirror and guide... please?

man, i feel sorry for kagome and jealous of her at the same time. lol. neway, i really liked this chapter and i can't wait to read more. ;D

Oh my.. Sidhe; everything I said in my email, the one I just sent -- read it and then apply a multiplier to it.. of at least 10. That is how good this chapter was. I find myself desperately wishing the whole scene had been written, I was utterly immersed in what was happening.

Your gift for creating the mood, and writing dialogue and description; both - and not needing either unless you choose one or the other... is extremely good.

We knew of this from prior chapters, but seeing it play out in "real time" from Kagome's and Sesshoumaru's point of view, was an amazing experience - we could FEEL what they were feeling; you paint in colors that are so shaded and melt into each other such that there is no break; the reader is immersed and feels and loses themselves in your portrayal of what is occurring.

I very much, very, very much hope that you have the next part close to ready; how this develops, and Sesshoumaru's induction of Kagome into what Inuyasha categorized in an earlier chapter as the "heady world of Youkai sexuality" (your phrases stick; because they aren't cliched and because they convey what you want them to perfectly) -- how that "induction" goes, especially in light of Kagome's trust but also her realization that Sesshoumaru isn't, as you put it, tamed... will be a thing of wonder to read.

We already know it works out, from the prior chapters... but the how of it; you had reminded us that he wasn't in the headspace to comfort her on this first night; how she will handle it, and how they will come together -- he now knows that she is his.. she still hasn't quite (in this chapter - she is only 15 after all) understood that she is in love and has picked her own mate in him.

I know I leave you long reviews.. but there is so much to talk about and so many details that are just.. perfect.

If you schedule allows for it, please don't make us wait too long for the next part... this story has been a favorite from the start, the last chapter was -- so perfect, the mood, Kagura's discovery, the marking.. and this chapter took it up another few notches in a different direction, but losing nothing in those already established.

Phenomenal job.

Sidhe, we miss you!!!! I lived in Texas for a while, it was fun, until I sat in a fire-ant hill and my teachers wouldn't let me count with my fingers.... XD I was in second grade, so all I wanted to do was play.

Good luck with the thinking and working and make sure you don't burn your brain out!

I was just rereading this, and then I clicked next and realised it was a new chapter and did happy squees. Great job on this one - I really enjoyed the way Sesshoumaru got around his father, and the POV of Sugumi worked really well.

I love this story! Cant wait for the next part!

Also, I think you mafke one on their first time -_^

Never doubt yourself, because you write beautifully. And this story is sexy, funny and wicked: a true joy to read.

This story is really nice and very erotic ina sense. I love the hair cut that u gave Sesshomaru and the tongue ring. But my favorite part waz where they had sex in the clubh. Hope that u update soon.

Still confused on the whole "doubting self" thing, but totally, ecstatically happy you're writing again. :) Going Sidhe-less is painful, I can assure you, but don't let the birds get you down! Or however that saying goes.. Always the devoted fan.

Great to see you posting fics again! I just wanted to let you know that you are one of my favourite authors and hope to see more of your work! I loved this chapter -- especially the whole tattoo as tribal identity thing. . .very cool! One question, though. The final segment of chapter 4 seemed to be almost a mini-epilogue (or am I reading things into it?), so I hope that you have more planned for Progression and your other GREAT fics! Anyway, please update soon!

you're back!!!!! i so happy!!!!

update soon

ps you gonna update idito's guide and mirror soon? please with naked sessho on top?

I"m so sorry you've been doubting yourself. You have tremendous talent as an author - please don't ever assume otherwise. The emotion that goes into each chapter, whether it be of humor or love, loss or sly wit ... It's always felt by the reader. This is something that cannot be taught, and you have it. I'd probably read a travel brochure if you wrote it!

On to the chapter - I really liked the insight into their relationship that this gave me. The marking was so creative, too. I never would have thought of having her make his markings, and the softened skin making her markings permanent was a great way to go about reciprocation. I'm also glad that Sesshoumaru's father was able to redeem himself. Can't wait to see where you take this next.

Great chapter. I was wondering if you had a picture of the tattoo or the design Kagome marked on Sesshoumaru? I loved the way Sesshoumaru confronted his father with so little words.

I find the scene where Sesshoumaru bears his marks to his father especially endearing. His declaration; "You lose" was so brilliant and prideful - it captures a son's surpassing his father in the most crisp and devastating way. All the more awakening for the father, who's finally come to realize his faults and misgivings. That was utterly breathtaking. Please continue!

I THINK THAT YOU ARE A EXCELLANT AUTHOR . I AM SO HAPPY THAT YOU HAVE STARTED WRITHING AGAIN. I ENJOY YOUR STORIES RO MUCH .

i love the whole plot line of the story. you are an excellent writer, you blew me away with the way you describe everything! i hope you get time to update soon and i'll keep an eye out for the next chapter!

That bar scene deserves an award! Wow, that was crazy for sure. I adore this fic. I'm waiting on your other ones to be updated now.

I wasn't going to write another review but then I noticed that thing Helleboros wrote. I think we can categorize it as "confusion mixed perhaps with envy" -- at least that would be my blurb on THAT review.

There is nothing confusing - Kagura's commentary adds, it doesn't detract. The structure is very good, very readable.

Look at the people who are praising this story. Would you not take Demonlordlover's opinion over that other person?

I tend to be myself fairly, well, demanding is sort of ugly, but more choosy, I won't read things that aren't well written, and while I'll try to encourage writers who have talent but aren't quite getting it right, I won't lie and say something is wonderful if it isn't.

THIS however IS wonderful. The dialogue flows believably - it is well-written, and as soon as you start to read the story you cannot stop. There are no flaws that jerk the reader out of the world of the story -- no errors, no syntax issues, spelling is all good, grammar is all good -- and most importantly, the story is creative, it *isn't* cliche, and it is so very involving.

The sole, single and only complaint I have.. I wish there was more of it. But that doesn't relate to the story, only to my desire to read more. More of this, and more of the other story .. I want to see where Sesshoumaru as Tora (wow, talk about inventive, amazingly so, brilliantly so and very much deserving of the award it won -- I only wish it had been updated so we could have nominated it again.. it's brilliant, as is this story.

If your life allows - you must be very busy, real life often doesn't give much free time -- please come back to us and update these amazing stories. You have a true fan base.. I looked at the nominations and everywhere this story could be, it is.. and deservedly so.

There will always be someone who will have something to say - perhaps they believe it, perhaps they don't; who knows. But I promise you this; the story is absolutely engrossing, extremely well-written, and easily falls into the top percentage of anything I've read.. there are very few stories that are well-written, contain no errors, have grammar, syntax, story, dialogue, creativity, flow, structure, and the "something" that indefinable something...

The story has it.

Oh my.. this story is my first venture into your work, Sidhe, and I am kicking myself for not having read anything sooner. You write cleanly, wonderful plot progression, perfectly balanced. I love it. I'm glad I've found someone else whose work I enjoy, it's not easy to find stories that are so well-written, and are at the same time adult; I can't wait to read more, the other stories, and more of this as soon as you care to update it.

Just perfect.

*room suddenly explodes with fire works and confetti* YAYAYAYAYA! You did great! No, great is too simplistic a word to describe the awesomeness which is Progression. Fan-fecking-tastic is closer but still not right. *sigh* I guess I’ll have to make up a word to depict this spectacular piece of literature. How about….Stun-Mag-pressing? Sounds a little weird but oh well!

Don’t let two measly reviews get you down! (I read them. We WILL talk….lol) Just know that you have the support of your loyal, kinky, sex-deprived (or at least I assume they’re sex deprived, because nothing can match your Sesshomaru standards which we’ve all adapted) fan base. FIGHT ON!...I can’t wait for more ^^

~Chaos

awesome chapter. i really like this story... it's actually been a while since the email update was sent... but i'm a little out of it and finally got to read it. WAY WORTH THE WAIT!

Okay. I feel as though you should be praised. This story is unfucking believable. It's awe-inspiring. Seriously. I feel like this is the most amazing Sesshoumaru ever. I love you. Seriously. I really hope you keep writing because I feel the need to do a certain inu lord. :)

Entertaining, but the shifts of view-point make it a little harder to follow than it might otherwise be. There's no actual coherent plot, just a random collection of impressions. I'm afraid I found Kagura's pov somewhat underwhelming, since what she thinks/doesn't think is pretty much irrelevant in terms of the dynamics of the Sesshomaru/Kagome relationship.

Girl, you've returned to us on a flash of brilliance. I can't wait until this is finished so I can read the whole thing to get the full flavor of your prose. I'm sure I've said it before, you have an incredibly original imagination. Absolute brilliance.

Jane

Wonderfully deviant! I ooohed at the bar scene. Naughty Sesshoumaru for giving Kouga a peek! LOL I can't imagine what Kagome's reaction would be.

I'm so happy to see that you've returned! Your stories are so well written that they just suck the reader in. And the way you write Sesshoumaru? Gives 'sexy' a whole new meaning. :) I hope all is going well with you after your move and all. And I know how hard it is to do anything when suffering depression, having gone through a bout of it myself last year. It sucks, but it makes you that much stronger when you pull yourself out of it. Anyways, enough of my babbling, I look forward to reading more!

[a.n. – well…it’s become apparent that Sesshomaru has once again managed to take control of yet another story…] yes because we all know hes a drama queen! lol thanks for the update email thingy but to tell you the truth i forgot what this story was and had to read it over again (though i didnt mind=P) mmh so that was all kagura's pov of finding out sesshy and gome? i got lost some time in it but that was cause of your broad vocabulary lol thanks again for the update ~Happy Writing~

Very Kinky. Inuyasha was too self involved to notice.

Good Lord!!!! I love it! That bar scene----HOTT! I can't wait to see where this is going ^_^

YAY! You're back! Another amazing chapter...

i love it! i swear i was smiling the whole time in chapter 3! please update soon!

Ah! That was so so so so so good. The bar stool sex was positively deviant missy! Amazingly delightful too. I love everything you've written Sidhe and this story is no exception. Keep up the good good work!

omg u got to update soon this story is so great i just luv luv luv it i wonder what will happen next please please plase update soon

This story has been nominated to the Dokuga Awards 1st Quarter! It has been nominated and seconded to the following category: Best AU/AR

The Dokuga Awards is a yahoo group that honors Sesshoumaru and Kagome fanworks (fanfiction and fanart.) Voting is currently underway and will end on Feb. 10.

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/dokuga/

The story is certainly interesting so far. I'm looking forward to the next instalment. I bookmarked the pg. Yay me!

cant believe u started a whole nother story no matter how much i like it.TCIGTDD ways your first that i read then Through the Mirror where sesshy is a kitty XD now this one *cant think of anything to say*
dont mind my useless rambling i do enjoy reading this one and plan on following it til its done (how ever long that maybe jk) may i be added to the mailing list? my e-mail is shoibhan318@hotmail.com

love this story! please update! Your Sess is a smexy beast!

I was so happy to see another chapter of this! Can't wait for another one.

yay! you updated. i like your fic.

wow! i think this is the first story ive read that has had so little dialoge between the characters but still had me totally engrossed! fresh style, smooth flow...nicely done!
tilayha

A very interesting story. I like the fact that Sesshoumaru was being nice to the "left out" girl and ended up pursuing her. I don't think dialog is necessary in a story. I enjoy "hearing" the thoughts of the characters.

I love it I really do. I'm not sure how old you are so this may be before your time but that quote you used. "Have you ever danced with the devil in the pale moonlight." Its from Batman....the one Tim Burton did. So when I saw that quote I automatically thought of the Joker dancing in skyscraper with that reporter chick. It was made back in the 80's
Just thought you should know that. I do really like the story though, keep it going.

I was wondering how you were going to continu this fanfic... I had thought it was a really good one- shot. I loved it! Hope to see the rest soon! ^_^

Hey, I really like where this is going, so keep up the good work!! By the way, where have you been? I have been lonley without AIGTDD...I need the comic relief! Just get around to it when ya can, 'k? Good, thanks for updating!!

Later

Oh my goodiness! I must say that this story was absolutely fabulous! Wah! You have more in store! ^_^

It's amazing. Truly is. I can't express how much I love your writing. And strangely, I love the lack-of dialog very much. It's a lot more insightful. Write more sooooon!

i'm so glad that u update the story and i really luv this chapter whoa! they been doin it for five years i hope u update the story

So glad to know your back. Bascially, Progressions already has Kagome and Sesshoumaru together and we're just looking through the character's point of view regarding what they know of past events? I like it. It has style and a lure to it that makes me want more.

I wasn't sure you were doing a second chapter to this story, but I'm glad you didl it was awesome! Keep up the great work!

soo sweet! i love it keep writing!

Great story but is it a oneshot?
I'm still waiting for the updates on Mirror and Idiots guide. I hope ypu'll update one of them soon

is that the end? i like it! i hope that's not the end

I like it already. I don't know, but you make Sesshomaru even more attractive than anyone else I've read. You make him hotter than he already it. >. Gah!! I hope you get out of your rut with Mirror. I'm addicted to that one.... ^^; I check it nearly everyday. So good luck and do your best!

WOW!! *eyes bugged open, jaw sitting quite happily on the ground* I can hardly wait for you to continue with THIS ONE!! I can see it being just as great as .... wel, all of your other stories!
When you update, could you send me an email?
I don't want to miss a single chapter!

phoenix_wolf502@yahoo.ca

i love the story so far and i hope you keep writing it and i also hope you get over your writers block with TTM. update soon!!!!!

i love it . I can't wiat to see what happens next. keep up the great work. hope to see more soon.

Wow, what a superb beginning. I love the tone of the story; somewhat retrospective and nostalgic. It's oddly sad, like a sinner looking back on his transgressions. I'm sure this story will bloom beautifully.

Loving The Story It Was Jus Soo Well Written ... So I'm Guessing There Will Be No More? I Wish There Was Though I Would Love To See What Would Happen Next!

I like this, it's a sweet sexy start to a new story... but will you PLEASE update either Mirror or Guide soon? Pretty please with a nakey Sesshoumaru on top? Thanks!

got me interested and curious. i'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

Beautiful story. I'm definitely captivated because I can't really see where you'll go with this. The romance is there, so what comes next? ;) Great job.

love it so far and can't wait to read more.

awesome... please continue.. very seductive...

i love your writing. i swear to god, if you wrote a phone directory it would be entertaining!

I was wondering why we have not heard from you in a while. I must say this story got my attention. I look forward to reading how Progression will develope. Until your next chapter.

YAY!! More Sidhe stuff!! You're the greatest!!

I really like this. A lot. I can't wait to see more!

Oh wow! I'm actually gonna start a story you wrote from the very very beginning when you start it!

I so love it. Can't wait for the next update.

Great story! I loved it! I always love your stories!

Shadow Girl

It's a wonderful begining of the story, totally intoxicating in a sense. I can't wait for your next chatper in this story and the Idiot's story as well.

And you've hit the nail right on the head again.

Sweet, juicy, I'm hooked and loving it

I enjoy reading your work a great deal. Lacking in cliches, although I will say after combing through the entire archive in two months, what attracted me most about this current work is how you portrayed the original 'villains' (particularly Naraku) no matter how brief, yes it's OCC but I love how its been done.

It's refreshing all the same and I'd love to read more. Kudos also to the readable structure and how natural your characters tend to act. Nothing feels forced.

Keep writing and hoping to read more of your work soon.

I'm just so happy to have anything of yours to read!

Nicely done! I'm happy with them being together, but I'm a bit jittery about the western lord not knowing about their relationship having been mentioned. I'm REALLY hoping you weren't alluding to a heretofore unknown engagement being popped on them! Then again, I trust to follow where you lead!

The beginning of yet another awesome fic. You are truely one the most talented writers I have had the pleasure to read the writings of.

***Wicked Evil Smile***

Another halcion journey begins...BRING IT ON...

Welcome home...

EP