Honestly, I was really enjoying this story until Sesshou decided to TELL Kagome that she would be the mother of his children, without meaning it in the romantic way. And I am terribly disappointed at the ending. I'm not trying to flame or anything, but that's just the honest way I feel. Right up until that point I really was in love with your story, but after that spot the whole thing just kind of seemed to crumble.
I suppose you aren't even around anymore since none of your works have been updated since 2004, however, so all hope for further storyline is lost. :*(
FluffyFox- Fri 01 Sep 2006
Man I love this story...you really need to keep it going, it's getting really good!
GoddessInu03- Fri 21 Jul 2006
OMG that was really good! stupid Naraku what is he up to. i read your story on fanfiction but it was working and im surprised u were on A Single Spark. but anyways update soon i love where this story is going!
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