I just started to read this story and omg i really want to know what happans its so good

DIE INUYASHA !!!!!!!!

your stories rock! I am so anxious to read what happens to Inuyasha.
Please write more.(^_^)

Aww Emotional Fluffy Chapter ... Update Soon

Hrm.... I'm not really sure where to begin. Your plot idea is good, but you seem to be stuck with some grammar ans spelling mistakes. For me, they are very distracted.

The plot development is a bit quick, and the chapters are a bit short. If possible, get a beta reader? That person would be able to help you with certain syntax problems and spelling.

Overall, good.

I really like this fic. Good theme, I think, good plot line so far, you seem to have a little trouble with homonyms, but I've seen worse. Update as soon as possible, please.

this story is kind of sad , with all these things done to kagome and i hope inubaka feels some serious pain.

AND CUE the KILLING OF INUYASHA!!!!

I am sorry to here of the passing of your grandmother. I can feel your pain. It's like when I lost my mother a few years ago.

You have an interesting story going on here. I did see a few minor spelling and grammar errors but nothing to detract from your current course of your story. Keep up the good work. Add some characterisations to the main players of your story and background info also.

Nice going, I would love to see the ending to this story and not left out in the twightlight zone of forgotten stories. You are off to a good start.

*hugs and smiles*

So Now Sesshomaru Nows Good ... Sorry About Ur Grandmother ... Update Soon And Be Strong ...

Thank u so much for updating ur story i love it! please do continue. Ur doin a great job with it. Thanx

This is a great story! i'm glad that its actually going somewhere- some stories just drag on and on, and this one has something new happening in every chapter. i cant wait to find out what happens next! keep it up! :)

AND NOW.... sesshy discovers what INUYASHA'S been DOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

more please really like it. I want to know what is gonna happen next.

beging you moor plz

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hm Interesting Update Soon!!!

Hey awesomeness in the form of a fanfic update plz

i hope u pdate thes stroy soon i wonder who wants kagome dead will she meet fluffy soon or what please, please please update the story soon

Yes its great. Keep it up. I know you might feel down about your reviews but dont stop you got tallent and I`ll not st\it here while its wasted dont belive anyone that tells you other wise. I`m happy you have written this peice.