| aww so cute, wish it was longer though
| that was great you should write a real long story with lemons in it
Cassie- Thu 30 Aug 2007
| Wow such a beautiful song, I listened to the song while reading the story and they both are so touching, the song befits the story. I like the song and I downloaded it to realplayer. The only thing that is could you please reconsider and write another chapter please I would like to read when Sesshomaru sees Kagome walk down the isle and the priest says what he's gonna say and they both say theirr vows and you know what happens after that.......... and the honeymoon. Please Please think about it... I'm sure you would write an awesome story. I really love happy ending and your story so do deserves an happy ending and a lemony honeymoon finish......Please think about it and let me know what you think......^____^
Ana- Tue 28 Aug 2007
| OmG!!! I luv it! Gary is sooo cool! Keep up the good work!
| Continue please?
Psycho968- Thu 23 Aug 2007
GREAT story, is that it? well plzzzzzzzz rite more! i no high school can b tough, my sister is in it, i am still in jr high, well anyway GREAT STORY! i LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!! here is some advice, do NOT let any bad reviews ruin your story, just rite more chapters and they will regret it if they were good, it has happened and i have deleted a LOT of good stories because of it. WELL G2G! LOVE the STORY!
P.S. i am not saying u ever will get any bad reviews, there are just people like that :D :P
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