you have to right more its so good i NEED to no whats going to happen. please please please please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

you have to right more its so good i NEED to no whats going to happen. please please please please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

you have to right more its so good i NEED to no whats going to happen. please please please please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

you have to right more its so good i NEED to no whats going to happen. please please please please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

cool cant wait what happens

Kagome should totally show up at the cabin that would be awesome... any ways if she doesn't... oh well, hope to see another chapter soon.


chaos

im in a hurry but this story is really good please keep on writing more lol.
Sharilynn

More please! You did great.

omg this is geting so big,please write anothe one i really wont to see what going to happen.
Sharilynn

write more pleaze

hey this is a great story please write more i really like to see what happens next

This is a good story please right more i would like to see what happen next

i like the story and can not wait for then chapter and see what happen next. up date soon.

I've enjoyed your story so far, the plot line is good.

The only problem I'm seeing is it can be hard to read your story because of all the grammatical errors. What I mean to say is that I have a hard time trying to figure out whose talking or thinking most of the time.

I really think you should invest in a beta or maybe read some stories written by Kiba, KogasAngel, MuteShadow, or Beautiful Silent Death. These authors have excellent grammar, and I think just looking at some of their writting would help you out a little in making your story an easier read.

Again, its not meant to be mean. Its just constructive critizism. I really do like your story, I just think you have a better chance t getting more readers if you correct the grammar.

Keep up the great work.

Sweet! Excellent, keep up the great work.

Sweet! Excellent, keep up the great work.

yeah she dont need inuyasha dump him lol this story is going really good please write more.
Sharilynn

I love how they both have the same classes. My best friend and I had all of the same classes except for two and there were seven altogher. I have a feeling that Inuyasha wont make to the weekend with kagome. What day of the week is it? I think it will teach Inuyasha a lesson if he caught Sess/Kag kissing or about to or in a compromising position. For future it would be nice to have some kind of event like a dance. I love what you hav thus far. Keep up the great work. Thanks for the fat updates!

good job loved it update soon plz.
can't wait to see what happens next.

man your good how can you write a story in one day,man i sure couldnt lol,well your doing good so keep the writen
Sharilynn

well man you write fast lol,these are really good please write some more.
Sharilynn

mmm i wonder if they will get to be alone again. i think inuyasha is having 2nd thoughts about kikyo. since sess&kag are gym partners, maybe they can do exercises or games together.

I love it! I cant wait for more!

i love this story and the fact you update so fast. i would love it if you posted it on my website www.justexpressing.com

i love this story its like HA INUYASHA IN YOUR FACE!!! I would totally love it if you posted it on my website www.justexpressing.com

Ah! Please update!

omg update update update!! id love it if you post this story on my website www.justexpressing.com omg such an awesome story ^^