When are you going to update this story.
Please don't leave me hanging !!!
sobs into my pillow :()
rowdysgirl- Mon 12 Nov 2007
are you sure you really want me to go over this for errors? i did that for one author and she ended up having to restructure her whole premise. lol - i'm dangerous when i go into editor/proofreader mode. I will give you a couple of small things:
dashes - should have a space before and after unless they are used to hyphenate a word, in which case there are no spaces.
... an elipse should not have any spaces before and no spaces between the dots. i've heard arguments on both sides regarding a space after an elipse.
you misspelled bringing in the 3rd chapter, you have brining.
a dash shouldn't be used at the end of a sentence, an elipse is the correct punctuation mark to use.
let me know if you want me to go on. LOL
janer
rowdyjaner@yahoo.com
More please?! On both of your stories. I like them a lot. I really do. XD Totally greatness! Keep up the good work!
~TH~
I really like this! I think you have so far portrayed Kagome and Sesshoumaru very well; I can't wait to read more.
Suicide- Mon 29 Oct 2007
Well, Sesshoumaru's bargain does not look too promising... he 'might' know the location? lol. A 'possible' location? Wow, he sounds so SURE of himself.
Anyway, I like this story; it's really funny. Plz update soon. ^-^
Sleepy Tuna Fish- Mon 29 Oct 2007
O_O woah! great story! Yummy. Lemon yes? :o!
JJ- Mon 29 Oct 2007
Please continue!!! ^_^
lilmoe31- Mon 29 Oct 2007
OMG, thank you so much for updating. I simply love this fic. Great chapter by the way. YOU SO ROCK!!!!!!!!!
miki-chan- Sun 28 Oct 2007
In all your stories you do a credible job characterizing Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Keep up the good work, the story is great. ^^
-miki
Mrs_Sesshomaru- Sun 28 Oct 2007
Oh & I TOTALLY agree, "Tales from the House of the Moon" by Resmiranda-sama is THE most awesome fanfic ever written! Congrats on a super start to what I'm sure will be a kick-ass story!
Mrs_Sesshomaru- Sun 28 Oct 2007
Me likey! Yup, you have a new fan. If you have an update list, please add me to it. Oh & I only found 2 gramatical errors. That's great for 3 chapters! Keep up the good work.
ivyyyy- Sat 20 Oct 2007
holy crap this is good.
continue please(:
like, really soon.
Please update soon, I like this story alot.
Good work
Shalicia- Thu 30 Aug 2007
Please Update Soon!
Great Story....((yayy!))
I really like the way your story is playing out so far. I can't wait to see where this goes.
I love this fic, I think you've done an awesome job, here. And Sesshy's hot even in human form. Please update soon.
lilmoe31- Tue 21 Aug 2007
Oh My, I have not the words. That was a great start. I love Kagome being all drugged up thinking about licking Sesshoumaru's finger, that was hilarious. Please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens when she comes off those drugs.
candy- Mon 20 Aug 2007
Loved it.........it's sooo good. Sess is great in this and I like what you did with his character. Cant wait for the next chapter...keep them coming
I haven't been able to process everything that is wonderful about your story yet. Normally I take a while to really come up with a good review, but I was so... Giddy, for lack of a better word, after reading these two chapters that I had to write something for you to tell you just how much I enjoyed reading what you have written. I will write another review once I have collected my thoughts properly because there is so much that is wonderful about your story, but I wanted to leave you with this. Absolutely beautiful and well thought out. Thank you. Until later.
~Ivy
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