this is really one of my favorite lemon fics. what i love about this story the most, is not actually the lemon scenes, but the storyline itself :D The lemon parts are great, but the drama is the main reason why I read the story.

Chapter seven's the best. I really felt the emotion and the thudding of my heart (hahaha) as I was reading the parting scene. so sad...

can't wait for the last chapter! please please finish!

I have read this story since you posted it, and i have to ask: aren't you going to post the last chapter? really? you're a great author ad the sotry is really good, but I think you really should post the last chapter :) thanks for your attention

PLEASE UPDATE !

I lovers this story 3

oooo!! i love ur story so far1 its getting really good and im really curious as to how ur going to end it. please update!!!

I think I already left you a comment on this chapter. I just wanted to give you a gentle nudge. What are you waiting for? Some of us are waiting for the last chapter! Get the lead out woman!!! LOL Just kidding! Well, not really. ^_^ Please update soon! Really soon!

Helloooooooo? R u comin back? Did u die? Anybody there?! Pleaz don't keep up waitin 4 another month.

OMFG i want to thank you for writeing this this like the best story ever and could you plz write more i want to see if sesshomaru goes after her so plz write more

i love this story so much :] sessh should just give in a go after kagome. update soon!

dude, i heard that ss has to close down- you gotta post the fic on another site man!! please!
alot of the others are posting here http://www.dokuga.com/
maybe you can to?

my heart was literally aching when i was reading the end of the chapter..

this is so...ahh i cant even find the right words to explain how good this story is!!

the lemons are amazing!
and the plot, though simple, is enough to keep me going.

you cant end it with 8 chapters!!
its too good to come to an end!!

all i can say now.
is
good job!!
i loved this chapter..
and i love the story even more as a whole :]
keep it up!!

Can't wait for the last chapter:) keep writing.!

update soon!!
this is different from what i've read before, i like how it was Kagome who walked away, makes her seem stronger **^_^**

This is a great story; I'm so glad you won =) I think you do one of the best jobs at portraying Kags and Sess. Update soon!

Very very interesting.....wonder wut sesshy would do next?....its just so addicting lol plz keep me updated!!!!! ^_^

omfg! I'm about to cry! He's gonna go after her right? right!? he has to! I love ur story update sooooooooooon plz? I'll mail u cookie or somthing! plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
5/5 starz!

An excellent chapter. Sesshoumaru was right to warn Kagome, yet Kagome did the right thing by agreeing with him and walking away. Now Sesshoumaru has to either face the fact that he has feelings too or they will stay separated and Kagome will at least be able to mourn his loss before she spent more time around him. You just can't help who you fall in love with.

You have done a rare thing indeed with this story.

It's SMUT with a compelling plot. I CARE about how this ends. I am sooooo frickin' impressed.



You have created unimaginable tension between Sess and Kags that builds to almost the breaking point AND you are generous with AMAZING lemons! And they are not just lemons.....this is a deep conflict, not just sex. This is damn good writing and I am so pleased when I find a story like this.

~bows to author's greatness~

please update this story soon, lest your readers suffer some strange affliction....

once again, AWESOME read! I'm clicking on one of your other stories as soon as I finish this review....

Amy

Wow! I don't know what to say, but this fanfiction seems to have a lot of thought in it (besides the amorous actions). Anyways, please continue this fanfiction. I like to read what happens next. ^_^

no! not another cliffie!! and it's hard to believe that this next installment will be the last, but the ride has been more than enjoyable. and i'm sitting on the edge of my seat for ALD. great work as always!

DUDE!!! THAT WAS AMAZING!!

Sesshomaru has to run after her! He has to! But I have a feeling he wont...Noo!! >


Please update and keep it up ^_^

WOW I JUST STAYED ALL NIGHT I GOT CAUGHT UP ON UR STORY AND DAMN THIS IS PLAIN HOT AND WELL MORE LIKE REALLY SEXY TEMPTING HOT LOL BUT I LOVE THE LIL HEARTBREAK IM JUST HOPING YOU DIDNT HAVE TO END THIS SOON BUT I GUESS IT WOULD SATISFY THE TORTURE OF WAITING FOR UPDATES LOL BUT I JUST WISH U LET IT GO ON FOR A WHILE BUT YEAH DONT MIND THO MY SUDGGESTION ITS JUST THAT ITS TOO GOOD TO END TOO SOON BUT I JUST WANNA INFORM U UR A GREAT AUTHOR SO PLZ UPDATE SOON LOVE YOUR STORY HOPE U DONT STOP CUZ U GOT A REALLY AWESOME TALENT WHEN IT COMES TO PLOTS AND STORIES LOVE IT BUT YEAH UPDATE THX!!!!!

That was a great chapter. I especially loved the lemons not because it was sex but because it was so intense between Kagome and Sesshoumaru and it gave you a brief peek in how they became closer. I really like that. You did a great job with this chapter and cant wait for the next one to come out! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Elle... a cliffhanger and a sad one to boot?
*cry*
Wonderfully written, of course, very emotionally affecting... but I know you'll be the subject of a mob scene as we all picket at your home... "more" "more" "more"...

Penultimate huh? He is going to have to grow quite a bit if this is going to have a happy ending... right now he's still in "No, I can't want her" land... in one last chapter you are going to have him overcome that *and* want her for his own?

I can't wait to read it....

How does .. um, tomorrow sound? :P

A bit too soon? Okay then, tomorrow night! :) Or at least sooner, since I'm sure you know where you're going and how you're going to complete it...

I am not good at waiting, I admit it.. especially when it's something that I like, something that is as good as this.

D: Your story is beautiful! I don't know what else to say! More please?!

this story is amaging please write more i love it good job. update soon !!!!!!!

Give Sess enough time and he'll figure it out. But what will he do?

Great chapter! Very sexy, very emotional.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

You... are... awesome!!!! I was on the edge of my seat at the last part of this story! I'm glad she left him! It'll give him a chance to break out of his denial! Ha Ha!! Can't wait for the final chap!!!

Love your story^^ hope you update soon!!>.

Great story and update soon!!!!

HI ^___^ It's really good to see that you have been developed this fic..yeah!!!
O_O The final of this chapter was amazing!!!
But just one thing..If Kagome was not poisoned, and doing with Sesshy with pure consciousness, then how she almost did with Koga?
I hope you can uptade soon, and just a question, do you think about get this fic any longer than what you have think previously?
Keep going ^___^

More please!!

ah! and the plot thickens! w00t. keep at it, cus ur smokin'!

I loved this chapter and can't wait to see everyones reactions! Please update soon.

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOTNESS! I love it so much! Great, super, awesome, job on it!!!!!!

-K.B

You're writing is beautiful! Many of the fics I choose to read (generally with lemons) tend to seem too abrupt but I really enjoy the more sensual aspects of this story. I hope you will continue with it in the future. Best regards!

LOVED it, more like. UpdateUpdateUPDATE!!!!!
With lots more lemons.
3
Falling.Angel

so is he going to return her to inuyasha? or is he going to realize that he likes her?

HOT! More please!

may I just say, HOT HOT HOT! hehe. this is VERY good. I look forward to the next chapter very much.

well, well that's an interesting little development. i can't wait to see hat happens next. thx for the chapter.

I absolutely loved it! XD

MUAHAHAHAHA!!! Now they know!!!!!
Wow...i've been waiting for this chapter for soooo looong!! And now that its here, I cant stop reading it over and over again!
I guess that next chapter is the separationg :( I hope it comes soon ::hint hint:: ;)
Hope to read you soon!!!!!!!!

aww they like eachother! can't wait to see the drama coming now

Talk about the mile-high club. ^_~ I love this story, and I love your lemons--but following the progression of how they relate to each other is my favorite part. I can't wait to see what they'll do now.

Wonderful chapter! =D

Loved the lemonz! And the plot was short but very 'to the point'. I can not wait to read more...lemons XD Joking

Keep up the good work ^^

That was HOT! Great job, ahh I love it when Sesshoumaru gets surprised ^_^

Very good chapter! I'm curious to see what happens next! Please update soon!

Nice chapter..didn't expect that Sesshy would be so nice helping Kagome ^__^ It's great that you are going to make a full history...and not just one-shots..keep going!

Oh boy, this should be GOOD... Sesshy is going to HELP Kags find the antidote to the poison?? R-I-G-H-T... why do I get the feeling that, by the time they find it, he's not going to want to use it on her? *smirk*

Darn it, woman, you've got me doing that guessing thing again! Sheesh, you'd think I'd know better by now!! Then again, I know you get a kick out of all the guessing - admit it, you're probably snickering at this right now, aren't you?

Anyway, I'm loving this story just as much as I've loved your other efforts - and looking forward to future installments. I will miss updates to A Latent Destiny, but will enjoy seeing more of this little gem!

Thanks so much for making my days a little brighter with such delicious reading material!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

What a great chapter! And like always, I can't wait to read the next one. They're going to spend lots of time together! Yay! Can't stop smiling just thinking about it. lol
Take care!

I loved the chapter - I wasn't sure what honor was going to compel him to do.. mate her, leave, take her with him - but this was unexpected and wonderful.

And we were right - far better to further the plot and not have a lemon (no matter how well done) then force one into every chapter and slow things down.

I thought it was well-written, the dialogue flowed well, and it was unexpected. I have one complaint - but then it's the one I always have; it was too short, lol.

No, it wasn't really, I just like to keep reading. Thank you for a wonderful chapter, and looking forward to another as soon as you can write it. :)

This was great and I can't wait for the next installment!

I Love This Story!!!!!!!!! I need to clear my date book and just sit down and read Latent Destiny. You are a wonderful writer, and this story makes me smile, in a romantic, lust-filled, can't-wait-for-the-next-chapter way. Thanks for writing.

Fantastic chapter! I get so excited when I see an update for this fic! Keep up the fantastic work!

Very entertaining chapter! I was on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happened. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, where there will be more lemons, perhaps? ^_^
You always do a really good job, I can't wait for your next updates.

This is a very enjoyable story. It's a little different and I like it. A very interesting problem our favourite couple has gotten themselves into. I should be so lucky as to have a problem such as this *winks*

Nice job...update soon!

*hugs and smiles*

great chapter! So now Inu is out of the way! *grin* I can' wait to see what will happen next... What is the antidote?...
Please update really soon!!!

First of all, congrats on the Dokuga, it was well deserved.

I enjoyed the chapter very much, although I admit I had to read the previous chapter to get up to speed but once I fell back into place with it, I was cool. It must have been a lot for poor Shippo to be the only to know what was happening to Kagome and try to protect her. Inuyasha can be so dense.

I'm intrigued by the way you're writing Rin in that Kagome and Shippo have never met her. I can't wait to see that development.

Finally, I understand about A Latent Destiny. It seems very layered in how you're going to present it and I'm a bit sad that it's on hiatus but considering all of your works that I've read so far are phenomenal and intricate, I'd rather you put it on hiatus and come back to it than abandon it altogether. Thanks for the update on that.

Rock on!

I love your update. Good job. Really. Update as soon as you can. Please.

I'm really enjoying this story. Your portrayal of Sesshoumaru is great! Please update soon.

I cant wait to see wha tthtye have to "discuss". Anyways it looks like Kagome is stuck with Sess for a while now. Wonder whats going to happen between the two of them. Awesome chapter and cant wait for the next one to come out!

Congratulations on your first place Dokuga award!

Now there is even more incentive.. I hope :)

And since there really is a plot, not just a string of PWP encounters... yes, by all means, update with chapters that have erotic scenes and/or that don't - whatever fits the story.

If the next chapter should be lemon-less, then go for it. We -- the vast majority of us -- are not reading for lemons, there are plenty of lemons out there if one only wishes to read erotic fanfiction. We read because we enjoy your writing and the story.

So, back to work with you ;) and once again, congratulations on your award.

Loving this fic!! *__* I thought that would be just some lemons plots..with no conections with each other, but I see that are a kind of development ^^ that's make me really happy!! Can I say some ideas that I would like to see on the next chapter?? Well...first definitely I prefer to wait a little longer to another lemon plot ^^ but this time, Kagome could be a little more naughty towards Sesshy ^__^..Love the way that things turn out more emotionally..would like to see more that !! Great Great job!! I know that you have others things to do..off course!! But please uptade soon as you can ^^ thanks

Great chapter Im glad you finally updated this! As for the next chapter I think expanding on the plot would be a good thing, I mean lemons are all fine and good but lemons with plots are better.

hrm. i want to know what is up inu's bum, whether or not a lemon happens.

I loved it.. now there really isn't any getting away from it. I would prefer the next chapter up more quickly without the lemon to further the plot (and yes, there really is a plot, no way to avoid it - with Shippou growing up, and Inuyasha's behavior, and Sesshoumaru's... kiss.

The poison that was used, I think was intended as a one time arousal to cause Kagome to submit, but it seems to have had an inadvertent effect; just as Shippou's desire to protect Kagome has him on the path to growing up, the poison appears to have trip-started something within herself -- and there would be no reason for poison used on *her* to increase the pleasure of *his* release... Sesshoumaru wasn't the poisoner after all.

Yup, a plot. And a good one if prior works are anything to go on, and I think they definitely are.

I was feeling rather bad at guilting Elle into writing more, but this is, I think, turning into another story that will find itself very much enjoyed - and I don't mean solely or even mostly for the very well written lemons; if it goes the way it seems to be going, we are really going to have a treat.

Excellently done!

OMG!!
I don't care if theres a lemon just keep on writing!
your absolutely fabulous

OMG!!
I don't care if theres a lemon just keep on writing!
your absolutely fabulous

I can't wait to find out what Inuyaha says!

Either way would be fine, I just like the story and love to see it continued ^_^ Keep up the great work!

Love it! The part with Shippou was really sweet...but the lemon...aahhh

nice haha great like always looking forward to the next chapter :)

MAN I AM SOOO HORNY RIGHT NOW AFTER THAT LOL!!!! well not that you needed to know that but least you know you and your muse are doing a great job! I hate waiting so long for a update but I need lemoness lol so I'll have to wait although if I have a great Idea for a lemon I'll email you one. Hope inuyasha doesn't suspect or try to put the moves on Kagome cos necrophillac's should stick to fucking the dead and not taint the living! lol Love shippou getting older, hmmm and well I just love the whole thing now I must take care of my 'little problem' hehe jk wish a sesshy could teach me how though..mou lucky Kagome. Well update soon Elle

Loves Arry

Whoa I'm sooo sucked into this. I honestly think a lemon free chapter may be in order if you wish to further develop the story, but after that........ I expect some serious bowchikawowow haha.

I can wait for more lemon i want the next chapter now, wait i want lemon i can wait for the next chapter, wait i dunno!!
I WANT BOTH!

omfg... does he no?!?!?! you have to tell me, the suspense is unbarable! I CAN'T TAKE THIS!!! if inu gets to violet, sesshoumaru-sama might have to beat the shit out of him... cus he's cool and has that kind of great timing. or maybe kagome should spill the beans... that thing with shippou is friggn sweet btw. awesome possum fanfic! update soon

This was and exelent chapter. I had read the first three chapters and thought it was really good. I didn't think you were going to update this one, but I'm glad you did. Although I would love to see more lemons, I'm almost willing to sacrafice it just to see what Inuyasha has to say! LOL
Great story. Please, please update soon!

By all means.....keep writing.....this is an addicting story to say the least. Keep it up.

MidnightStar

I absolutely love this story. I love the fact that both kaogme nad Sess have to hide their secret because thats where all the tenderness will occur. I also cant wait for their secret to come out and will they move on to the next level? Like admitting their feelings to each other or will they call it all off?

Anyways great chapter and cant wait for you to update!

I would suggest that you look up digression in the dictionary. It does not mean what you think it does, based on the title of your story.

"Digress: to deviate or wander away from the main topic or purpose in speaking or writing; depart from the principal line of argument, plot, study, etc."

I think I'm willing to wait for another lemon. daha!
I want to know what Inuyasha is going to do.
meep!

Holy shit! Good Gods, woman, nice lemons! (I cant belive I just typed that).
Update quickly!

Your story is absolutely awesome. Gosh, which one to choose...
new chapter up sooner with no lemon or new chapter up with lemon but you have to wait for another five months for it?

Oh the choices- lemon or no lemon. I say the sooner the better, your fanfic is awesome even without all the smut. Ooh, I wonder what Kouga thought after he came to, to see that his hot and willing Kagome was nowhere to be found, unless he woke up while Sesshy was giving our favorite miko a 'lesson'.
And does Sesshoumaru actually hold some -dare I say- feelings for Kagome. Before I was an Inu/Kag fan, but after reading your story, I'm Kag/Sess all the way.

I love your story. I also love your lemons. but it is the plot that gets me. Now InuYasha is in the forest waiting. I want to know what he is waiting for. Does he know? Does he know about her problem? Is he kicking her out for Kikyo? So I would like to see the story get updated quickly just so I can find out what happens. Good job BTW bravo.

Sweet!!! Inuyasha's dense but he's not THAT dense...

Good job on the lemon...

Absolutely awsome chapter! *grin* I love it! I can't wait to read more. is InuYasha suspecting something (which would explain his reaction) or he was like that because of something else? What will happen next? Arr so much questions but have to wait for the answers *whimper*
please please update soon I really love your story!!!

This story has been nominated to the Dokuga Awards 1st Quarter! The Dokuga Awards is a yahoo group that honors Sesshoumaru and Kagome fanworks (fanfiction and fanart.) Voting is currently underway and will end on Feb. 10.

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/dokuga/

Awesome story. Please update soon.

Very good story . . . I love it . . . The way the characters and story flow together are amazing . . . especially the plot . . .

Good work

hellooooooo? Anybody there? Have you died? Did a youkai eat you?

i'm really loving this. goodness, you make me want to write smut too!! haha, wonderful writing as always. continue soon!
-hasu86

That was great! Kouga's part was very well-written. Did he remain unconscious or did he wake up and decide not to move until they left? Maybe it will be Sesshoumaru seeking Kagome out next time! Can't wait for more!

HOOOO boy, live in Florida and THAT was hotter than anything I've experienced. Sweet damn on a stick. For some reason I though AMD was going to be a two-shot, but I'm really, overly excited that you're continuing it, especially since it's full of so much hentai goodness. Lordy! Another amazing chapter. Take your time with updating, considering how good each new chapter is. Your fans aren't going anywhere! ^_^

Ok..chapter 3 done reading!!
WOOOOWW!!! That was just...wow. I cant imagine him helping...that was just too sexy and i need to read more!!!!
:chants: more hentai ideas for elle, more hentai ideas for elle, more hentai ideas for elle ::ends chants::
:D

Hmmm, no sex today!
But aparently as much as you try to denied it you are going to make a story (and if I may express my opinion a good story) out of this.
I am realy curious to see where this story is going to get.

WOW!!!! I just read both chapters...and let me tell you that i loved both of them!!!
Even though he slightly influenced by the poison, he stills FEELS that way ::drools on the sight of sesshoumaru::
I have to read mooore!!!
Can you alert me for the nexts chappies???
thanks~!!

Wow that was Just Wow too hott for words I'm all achy now in a good way lol. Hope you update soon and Woman don't ever say you suck at lemons Your freakin great and amazing at them plus a bunch more adjectives that are for all things good well see you when something hentai pops up in that wonderful head of yours

Loves Arry

great short story thus far cant wait for the next chapter :)

Absolutely love your story! can't wait to read the next chapter. right now I'm going to go see if you have any other stories I might like.

holy fckin shit.. O_O i luff u .
u just made my dam nite... *rolls around on bed* *drinks strawberry banana smoothie* .. .la noche es perfecto XD

i really like this story. please write some more,

OMG! OMG! OMG! I didnt think this would be a great fic but as soon as I read it? i was like DAMN! This is awesome! I loved this chapter. I wonder what will happen the next time when Sesshoumaru and Kagome will meet? Will he satisfy her desires like the first or leave her to her own devices?

Great chapter and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Hot!

Can't wait for more.

This was amazing! I'm a bit crap at writing reviews, but I loved this one. The lemony parts were great, and the premise was one of those 'what if's?' that actually makes sense.

Thank you for this naughty, naughty little bit.

Whoaaaa you ARE a hentai! Haha keep up the good work!

I am so happy you updated!!!! Great new chapter, you shouldn't be worried about your abilities in writing lemon scenes. Despite the lewdness of the situation, they're quite tasteful compared to the run-of-the-mill lemons, which indeed is a good thing ;)

That was intense. So Shippo is growing up. Is he doing so because there is incentive so close by? Kouga is going to be so persistent now Kagome will never be able to convince him she does not want to be his mate. Sesshoumaru walks away with a stiffy, how noble.

This is just...really interesting. I love the role that Shippou is playing, being the main support. I like him in this more mature of a manner. And they way that Kagome and Sesshoumaru act toward each other is just so...raw. I missed this story. I'm glad you decided to continue it. I can't wait for the next installment. :D

Hentai away...hentai away, let's see what happens next.

Wow. I mean, WOW!

I would say your lemon skills are very much up to par, friend. Very hot. The first chapter got my attention. The second was a bonus, and the third, I must say, definitely hooked me. Already there is some feelings going on between the two, Sesshomaru acting as if he really cares about Kagome, despite the way he mulls it over in his head; and Kagome wondering what he's up to, while feeling guilty for 'forcing' him.

I'd say this is a great story so far, and although you seemed a bit concerned that it was non-consensual type sex, I'd say you handled it well. At least it wasn't one person forcing the other, but merely neither of them being able to control their urges.

I'll be keeping an eye out for more updates. It's great!

When will you be updating? You said you'd continue this fic. Hurry!

Nice. I like the use of Mukotsu I rarely see him used in a Sess/kag fic. You can certainly do a continuation if you ever feel the urge.

It's me again. I'm gonna keep bugging you until you update. This poor old heart of mine can't take the suspense and tension of waiting and waiting and waiting. It's been since 9/1. You haven't forgotten this story have you? I'm just an impatient person. I'm anxious for more, more, more.

Please oh please. When are you going to update? I'm on my knees pleading. This story is like the most delicious piece of chocolate candy. You eat one piece and you're addicted. I keep looking thru all the mess on my desk hoping to find another piece of your mouth watering, oh so sexy, chocolate update. UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

I really hope you haven't abandoned this!!! I can't wait for an update.

Cold shower anyone? Whew! Two hot couplings equals one aroused reader. (fanning myself while drinking some ice cold water) Can't wait to see what's coming next. Just whatever it is, please happy ending, let them be mates. Don't need a long story for that.

I really like this so far. It works as a short but I would be thrilled to see a plot form. I am rather fond of your characterization of Sess.

it was so cool. I thought you were going to make them longer

As usual, you deliver. I'm glad this is listed as incomplete. I think it could easily be made into a nice long story. I initially read it on aff.net so was not sure you planned on expanding it. Thanks again

this fic is really interesting..and so damn sexy. you can write good lemons..i'll be waiting for the update! let's see how sess can resist kagome...

And you said you needed to brush up on your lemon writing skills. HA! Judging from the puddle of drool on my desk, there is nothing wrong with your skills at all. I'm, once again, sucked into another one of your stories which seems to be developing a plot despite your efforts. While the onset of each lemon appears to be against their will, miko powers and his undue concern for her seem to indicate a change in motives. I believe any further imporvement to yout lemon skills will set my hair on fire. That said, I'm still looking forward to the next installment.

nice i loved it lol i cant wait 4 more lol now i have to take a walk or something a cold shower or somethin lol wow ^_^ YAY.....wow i need a shower lol ttyl

first off, yes, it's a good thing that you create an email alert for this fic. so far, it's been worth it. it's a nice break for me to read your fics, after days after days of reading nothing but my books for my nursing classes. *sigh* it's nice to not have to think so much of what i'm reading. i can just sit back and enjoy what i'm seeing. your lemon writing skills are coming along great. i was wondering if you're going to try writing a little foreplay action. i mean, kags and sess have just gone at it. i find well written foreplay hard to find and i think that it sets up the mood for the act itself. or maybe i'm asking for too much or is a stupid request? anywayz, the most important thing is that i'm enjoying the fic and that you're doing a good job with the lemon. and take your time! it's better you post up something good in which you took the time to write. i look forward to the next chapter.

hehe that was hot =D please update...what was wit Kags? she was sooo sex driven o.o probably the side effects of mukotsu's poison? anywayz...UPDATE

Hmm...thanks for thinking you needed more practice. I'm getting quite abit of enjoyment in the most delicious ways just reading this. I believe you've got the gift. It's one thing to write lemons but to make good quality lemonade takes talent. Jen

You say your not good at lemons? Thats a lie. Yours are good. mine would be like. thrust thrust oh ok sex ok done.

Oh Kami twas amazing my story is roughly resembled to this but not a lot at all mine was supposed to be a one-shot but everyone wanted it to go on just how I want yours to go on plus your lemons are so much better than mine no fair! hehe ,this fic and all of your other ones too is absolutely sexy and just different being so humble elle lol soooo give me more!

Loves Arry

I want to see how are you going to make Sesshoumaru brake his resolution about not touching Kagome ever again. That will be so hard for you to do.
About the lemon: you are good but if you say that it want came easy to you than please practice more cause we like it and we (your fans) are going to be with you no matter what.

I want to see how are you going to make Sesshoumaru brake his resolution about not touching Kagome ever again. That will be so hard for you to do.
About the lemon: you are good but if you say that it want came easy to you than please practice more cause we like it and we (your fans) are going to be with you no matter what.

*changes panties* I think you've got a talent for this! ;) I vote for more lemons in your stories! Or just more lemon stories like this one. XD Will there be more chapters? This could turn out an interesting story... :)

a wonderful story. i really enjoyed both segments, and I really do hope that a third installment is in the works. This one could go on for a long time, in my opinion. please, keep up the great work!

Ah Dear Kagome Always The Damsel ... Well I Hope There Is More To Come Since This Mere Digression Is Going To Continue Until It Cant Be Stopped ... Update Soon Please!

I cannot wait for them to meet again.

update soon please!

The e-mail alert was much appreciated. Another saucy lemon! Very good. I would like to see the aftermath now of their first "digression", such as what is on both of their minds and what Kagome tells InuYasha what happened. And then more sex ;) hahaha.

I'm sure I wrote this before, but I love this story! So good! Oh, and hot!
Can't wait for more!

Oooh maaaaann!!! The first chapter turned me on. This second chapter burned my insides. WOW. Never say you lack lemon writing talent. (wiping brow) I know you said you would add more chapters and I hope you do. Just please oh please, don't send them in separate directions. I'm selfish. I like happy endings and I want them to be together. By the way, you used one of my favorite scenes in the anime. I've always wished they had done more with that scene than they did. I'm panting and waiting for more.

The imagery is vivid and the addition of Sesshoumaru's thoughts makes the "lemon" very special.

you don't need to worry, your lemon-writing skills are improving. both parts were very well written. and I love this story, it is so fun. I just watched that part of the series not too long ago.

Your general writing skills have always been good, but I've noticed that you are making fewer errors than you used to. you probably have a beta already, but if you could get a second one, just to do the final look-over before you upload, they would probably catch those last few errors. But it's not all that important, i mean, i found only 4 grammar/syntax errors in both parts and that is amazing. Good work. You are really a good storyteller.

Nice story ^_^ I am interested to know where all this would lead, will they have a next encounter, fall in love, or simply continue to hate each other? Curious indeed ^_^
Anyhow, please update soon, ja ne!!

There, now see? I always said Sesshomaru was much more than a sex machine. He had caring and tenderness for a situation that was way beyond their contol. (why can't that happen to me?)

That just proves that you should just "say no" to drugs. But really this is cool. Sometimes you just want the sex. No cigarette burns in the flesh or slapping around but just heart-pounding, flesh-slapping, wall-slamming sex. I t relieves tension. And that's all good.

Need to catch my breath. Til next time, Deb.

That was a good story. I dont know if your thinking of writing another chapter but i sincerely hope you do. Awesome chpater and really loved it. :)

I really like this. The fect that they aren't able to control thier reactions towards each others presence it is truely enticing. It makes me wonder if they will continue since it looks like the poison has worn off. well only time will tell. he he

Well written as usual. It was great!! I love you works so much ^^!!

Please up-date and thank you ^^

P.S. more more more lemons ^^

That was excellent, Elle. I've enjoyed your works immensely and I'm glad I came to this site or I would have never seen it.

That was excellent, Elle. I've enjoyed your works immensely and I'm glad I came to this site or I would have never seen it.

oh my god please update as soon as possible oh and loved the lemon it was great

Oh. Yes. Indeedie. I loves it. Give me more. This could turn out to be a good plot due to a mistake not of her making but drugged by the incense. Why not go all the way and make her become pregnant? That would add even more spice. Whatever you decide, just keep it coming.

Yessss! This we likesss, Preciousssss! *drools* Moooooooore!

hey! it's been awhile. i only have enough time to read this start of this fic. interesting...i'm not an expert when it comes to a what constitute a 'good lemon' but i liked what i read. at least you're giving lemon-writing a shot. i think you are pretty good at it. can't wait to see what the 'morning after' conversation will be like. lol this wouldn't be categorized as a pwp would it? cuz it does a plot intertwined w/the lemony goodness right? how long is this fic?

MMMMMM, the pervert in me is sooo satisfied. You are good girl. Everything that has you signature is soooo yami and this is the yamiest thing you wrote for the leaque of us the perverts of the wild world.
I don't think that you need practice but if you insist I can only agree with you because so I can read another wonderfull story writed by my favorite writer.
I only hope that this story has many chapter with as many lemon in it and that at the end you will agree with us all your fans that you are a very, very good writer.
Now if you have an notice list for this story I will be more than happy to be on it (plese, pretty please, I beg you on my knees).

WOW!!!!!! That was sooo cool!!! What's happening next!!! sorry for lack of anything knowledgeable, it is late and I couldn't sleep, so here I am mezmerized by another wonderful piece done by yourself.

Ok now, do you really think you need practice on this subject? Me thinks NOT!!! Now where's the rest? Wonderful job!!! JEN

Hmmm ... I Love It ... Update Soon ... Me Likes ...

Brava! Well done...very well done *smile*...no surprise.

EP

That was AWESOME! I love how you can make a situation you'd never see in Inuyasha and play it still in tune to the story and keep the characters intact, with their indecisiveness and remorse. I absolutely had stories with lemons at the beginning that ends with 'WOW, we barely know eachother and just had sex, we're totally soulmates!'. Thank you so much for breaking the mold on these types of fics ;)

WOW!!!!!!! That was INTENSE.
I need a shower after that hot scene. More you deffenatly need to write more.

Im not usually big on reading lemons but since it was written by you I figured it would be good.
I honestly dont know how people write lemons. I would never be good at all the details.
& this would be intresting if you continued it.

Im not usually big on reading lemons but since it was written by you I figured it would be good.
I honestly dont know how people write lemons. I would never be good at all the details.
& this would be intresting if you continued it.

That was really good! Very creative, and I love you you tied it in with an actual episode! Please update soon!!

i liked it alot!! the whole i need him but i cant....very hot!!!

PLEASE continue and thanks ^^

This is a new take on the PWP...But it does have some plot...I like it.

I do believe that 'A Mere Digression' is the best title ever. So symbolic, simple, and catchy!

i hope there is more to this i mean this was great i want more plz lol ^_^ more more more more lol pretty pretty plz :3

ooooooo sexay! I do hope that there will be more.

Holy wow! i think i just creamed my shorts. woah! please post the next chapter soon.

Chaos

*le sigh* I really should be sleeping now but I have this little problem ands its name is Desire.

You see, before I went to bed I checked on my favorite website and found out an author I loved to read stories from had posted something. Imagine my joy to see a lemon!

So silly old me decided to read it before bed. And now I can't sleep because the dastardly Desire is cackling madly and wont leave me alone!*mutters* lets see how she handles a cold shower!

Sugio, as always!...at least I HOPE thats how you spell awesome...lol. Chow^^
~Chaos

An excellent point in canon to divert for a lemon. I enjoyed it, Sesshoumaru and Kagome enjoyed it despite themselves. Now, however, each will beat themselves up with guilt and/or anger. I was confused as to whether Sesshoumaru had two arms or one and just what the furry appendage was that was going around her waist. At first I thought it was something else entirely--but then I thought even Sesshoumaru's couldn't be that long to go around Kagome's waist, supple too (haha).

HOT! HOT! and HOT! ^-^
What more can I say. I'm in love with everything you write.

Are you kidding elle of course it was amazing before I even read the summary I saw it was by you so I instantly clicked on it knowing it would be good it to my lovly perverted happiness it was a hot sexy lemon yummy can't wait to see what happens next this resembles my fic but different on how Kagome is like that. A very nice job update soon

Loves Arry

HOT DAMN!

* Clears throat* If you'll excuse me I need to go change. Um...that was so hot... wow * Fans self* Changing now.

OMg that was so good you gotta make a sequal or something

Very well done. The whole Sess/Kag situation was nicely handled and you stayed true to the characters. The lemon was hot and the recklessness of them both was delicious! Keep up the great writing.