I LOVE IT OMG PLEASE wirte mor ei want ot know omg @.@ if you don't no cooooookies for you you know you want the cookie =D
Megan Consoer- Thu 08 Nov 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write aome more chapters?
faye- Tue 06 Nov 2007
aww poor Sesshoumaru! Now Kagome has to boot out InuYasha. by the way, are they related in this story. can't wait to read more!!
seilent mime- Mon 05 Nov 2007
aw that waz so good!!!!!!
Koiishi_Beloved- Mon 05 Nov 2007
I had to catch up, but I'm SO glad I did. I really love this story and it makes me laugh too lol. Great job! ^__^
-KB
Koiishi_Beloved- Mon 05 Nov 2007
I had to catch up, but I'm SO glad I did. I really love this story and it makes me laugh too lol. Great job! ^__^
-KB
Alissa- Mon 05 Nov 2007
That was awsome! Bring on the next Chappie!
marqusiah- Fri 26 Oct 2007
i hope u update the story soon i wonder what will happen when jaken find out about them please please please update the story soon
marqusiah- Fri 26 Oct 2007
i hope u update the story soon i wonder what will happen when jaken find out about them please please please update the story soon
Tana-san- Wed 12 Sep 2007
Are you sure you don't have talent for sex scenes? Because this seemed like a good beginning at foreplay if you ask me. Step it up a notch and prove how creative doing it in a car can be. I never had any complaints. The back of the front seat and the back of the back seat are extra good for getting him in deeper and for traction...as is the roof of the car, makes the thrusts harder when you got something to push off of. Oh yes, the memories of my youth and I married the guy. He's still got it. Although we gave up the wild places and paces cause of my disabilities but when you got a guy who loves you as much as he does, the conventional sex is just as good. Have a good day. JEN
crabbybrat- Wed 12 Sep 2007
Jaken + a taste for high fashion = a disaster waiting to happen. I like where this is going! X)
Mwahahaha...
mikiwashere- Tue 11 Sep 2007
hee hee Fabulous... {::evil grin::}
Howdy MomoDesu! I just read the three chapters you have posted for "Walking Away", and I must say that it was a case of love at first read. This is the first story that I have read that has actually made me feel kinda naughty and I cannot stop smiling! I never would have thought that a story would have wrangled that reaction from me. The concept of this story, while originating from certain well loved scenarios, one is so original in how it has been used and combined. I stand in utter awe. I look foward to seeing what you will come up next.
Later! **giggles**
I love your bravery, your writing skill..but equally, once reading this,I wonder what other treasures remain hidden in your hard drive. Oh stop it pervert, I mean that OTHER HARD DRIVE....oy vey...some people are just such eternal pervs...
EP
Amoraluv- Tue 11 Sep 2007
Its real cute
Sirinya- Tue 11 Sep 2007
I wait weeks for this chapter and you leave us at that cliffhanger! -shakes fist- lol I love it. Update soon! ^^
Steven - who else?- Wed 05 Sep 2007
Can't believe you didn't tell me you posted this. You made one typo on the 2nd chapter. Besides that, the story is awesome. I wonder how many reviews you'll get from people who are gay. I think there's a familiar line in the coming chapters, but maybe you forgot about it. Oh well. Great fic though - love the idea. Man, Inuyasha sucks though. Harsh.
Hehe... I wonder where Miroku's coming in... and whether or not this will turn into a total bisexual fic. THAT would be new. (as if this wasn't enough originality)
Tana-san- Tue 21 Aug 2007
Alright, so I see your apprehension in posting this one but phooey on those that can't handled alittle bit of Sesshoumaru having other "quests" in his life. I've read worse and even tho he just isn't to me to be the type, who am I to say what will make a great fic? Time will tell. Although I am assured to with you doing the writing, another great fic is in the making. I like it and want to see more. SEE ME SMILING? Just don't make me read about him and Jaken doing the wild, passionate monkey dance, OK??? If it's in the plans, post an warning because I just can't seem to want to read his beautiful hunk of man flesh jumping a toad!!!! LOL Of all people for you to hook him up with... that's just hilarious!! Jen
Ooh! New chapter! Nice and fast, too.
Hmm...Sesshoumaru, you are such a player! Really! He already has a boyfriend, yet he is sucking face with someone else.
::le sigh::
What shall we do with him? And Inuyasha doesn't seem to be getting a warm welcome.
[snickers]
Great chapter! I absolutely love Sesshoumaru's plotting ways and Kagome's... ... ... Kagome-ness!
So perfect!
Well, update whenever you can! TTFN, Ta Ta For Now!
--Ashley
Loved the story so far the only thing that I would comment on is making Jaken Sesshoumaru's boyfirend it didn't fit well with me but that just may be me other wise it was really well written and a good plot line so far and I hope there are lots of twists to the story.
Loved the stoey so far the only thing that I would comment on is making Jaken Sesshoumaru's boyfirend it didn't fit well with me but that just may be me other wise it was really well written and a good plot line so far and I hope there are lots of twists to the story.
AccidentalGoddess- Sun 19 Aug 2007
Hmmm...a bi Sesshomaru. What interesting possibilities. I think about half of my friends are actually bi...and from what you've written it sounds like either you are or have friends like mine. It's been enjoyable and authentic, a very nice change from how it's often portrayed. Looking forward to what you do with this!
hee hee...I like this one so far! You've only posted two chapters and yet it already sucks me in. Great Job >_ )b
-NN
toni- Sat 18 Aug 2007
i think kagome should refuse inuyasha!
candy- Sat 18 Aug 2007
ummmm I really cant picture jaken.....perhaps a description or something would help me believe it more. I do like it though, cant wait for the next chapter
serasvictoria666- Sat 18 Aug 2007
Not that Sesshy being gay really bothers me, it's just the idea of him being with Jaken. He's well, not hot like at all! I can't even imagine him as a hot guy. And if Sesshy was to be gay, he probably would be with someone as hot as he. But that's just what I think. And it is your fic, so what I think doesn't really matter. ^-^
But I still look forward to the rest. I really do like it so far. It is really interesting and well written.
YAY!YAY!YAY!
I love this one so much!
I can't wait for the next bit! Hahaha all you people who don't know about it!
(Just seeing if anyone else reads these things...)
Lobe you!
Suicide- Sat 18 Aug 2007
*gulp* Sess and JAKEN? ... ehehe. i see your logic, but ewww. lol. i hope Kagome dumps Inuyasha soon. ^^
Sesshy's Rose- Fri 17 Aug 2007
I would love to read more of this...it's very well written and the plot, though not fully revealed, sems to be original. Please continue...I'm behind you all the way!
serasvictoria666- Fri 17 Aug 2007
Very funny first chapter. But Sesshy and Jaken... together... yikes. I have a bad taste in my mouth just thinking about that!
lol But I did enjoy everything else. Kinda left me thinking. Can someone change that quickly. I know of a guy who was gay and than started seeing a friend of mine, a girl, and started saying he loved her and wasn't gay anymore and stuff like that. But later he started cheating on her with other guys.
Anywho, I hope that's not what happens here. I always love reading your fics, so I look forward to reading the rest of this one. XD
ElliMaco8- Fri 17 Aug 2007
Wow! That was great I alway wanted to see Sesshoumaru as a gay guy before he falls in love w/ Kagome I tinks it's kind of cute. so please continue with your awsome work of this story, Your doing great.
Chaos_Queen77- Fri 17 Aug 2007
Hahahahaha! she socked Ayame. That was the highlight of the chapter other than Sesshoumaru and Jaken. *ew... Shutter* Any ways good work.... keep it up and post the next chapter soon.
Chaos
Sarah- Fri 17 Aug 2007
I never thought I would enjoy a story in which Sesshoumaru is at least initially gay...but I think this sounds like fun!
Please don't spread out the time between posts too much please! I'm glad you decided to post this.
Oh Man!! When I first fread the summary I thought, ' Hmm that sounds fun!' Boy was I right!! Funny Funny Funny!! Poor Kagome always gets herself into so much trouble.. and Sesshoumaru! Gay! PPPFFTTT!!! Can't wait to see how this all turns out. Update soon!
::le gawk::
Sesshoumaru...and...Jaken...
...and...and...
...
Oh my. That's about all I can say...'Oh my.'
Well, excellent job on the first chapter. Ooh, Sesshoumaru as a model. Totally hot!
And poor Kagome; she always seems to be stuck between a rock and a really hard place.
And Jakotsu is in this fanfiction! It doesn't matter what fanfiction he is in, he is always the funniest. Oh, I love it.
Wanna know my secret? When I first started watching Inuyasha, the Band of Seven was just being introduced. For a while, I couldn't figure out if Jakotsu was a boy or girl. I mean, he has a girl voice in the show, wears a butterfly hair pick-y thingy, a purple-pink kimono, and seemed to have a crush on Inuyasha. Only when Sesshoumaru tore his kimono did I realize Jakotsu was a boy.
Any way, I think I am getting annoying and over stayed my welcome.
Keep up the amazing work. You truly are a genius. [I just finished reading Dirty Little Secret for the tenth time, at least.]
Laterz Gator!
--Ashley
I lobe you too!
It's about time this one came out of the closet! (hehehehe it's terrible witicisms like that you so adore, I know.)
Keep going!
Hmmm. well... I like it. I thought it was great when Kagome let one fly on Ayame. GAH! What a BITCH! Kind of a shame that Sesshou appears to be gay at the moment... but I know that will have to change a bit since this is a Sess/Kag fic. Anyway... can't wait to read the next chapter.
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