Just read through your fic, hadn't tried it before. Very interesting, though a little confusing at times. I loved this last chapter though. Very well written. My only suggestion is that it would be fantastic placed at the beginning of the story...there are things that would make much more sense that way. (I know it's hard to revamp how things are posted here without reposting the entire thing. Friggin tedious!) Looking forward to seeing what happens next and how their relationship grows.

fantasitc!!!

Simply awsome!!!!!!!!!!! Do hurry with the next chapter!!!

Really like this & am looking forward to the next part. I do have a small correction to the Naraku bit at the bottom of chapter 9, I think you meant baboon cloak as in monkey instead of bamboo as in the plant pandas eat. Hope this helps.

hey this is good but what's gonna happen to Naraku, i hope something horrible.

OO! you are evil! I don't know what to think of sesshoumaru but naraku better get his ass BEAT!!! I enjoyed your story read it non stop. now i wanna know what happens next dammit!! can you please email me when you update? thank you
ja matta
moon smurf

wow! awesome chapter. hey i was wondering would you like to post this on my website?

www.justexpressing.com

i really liked this story and when will more be up????? ^_^ >-

I love this story, but I'm worried about the jumps betwen some of the chapters and the lack of detail I sensed with Sesshoumaru in this world. Your story is brilliant, so please, please don't think this is a flame or anything cuz it isn't. I love your work...I would just like to see you expand.

Another thing that got to me (I know I know...I sound really bitchy and picky at this moment...so let me apologize now cuz I want you to keep up on this story asap!) doesn't what Sesshoumaru is doing with Kagome have an effect on him? I mean, he sounds like the "more ready" of the two, yet doesn't seem effected in the least that they haven't gone further in their coupling, so to speak. There is no sexual frustration or anything...and to me, this story calls for some, but that's just my opinion...it is YOUR story afterall! lol!

Please, don't let this discourage you...I love this story you've written and the way you portray Sesshoumaru and kagome's relationshiop, because we all know Rome wasn't built in a day! lol. I think you have the ability to take this story above and beyond...so just e-mail me if I can offer any help at all!

Now that it's 2am and I have to be at work at 9... I think I'll end this extremely long review and get some shut-eye. Keep up the great work!

mistakes? you made mistakes? i was so caught up in the story i didn't notice any.

Like The New Chapter ... Update Soon!!!

I'm not going to lie, I find Sesshomaru creepy as hell. He seems sinister somehow. I do like how you have so many unanswered questions, it's interesting and I am excited to read the next chapter. I just can't help disliking Sesshomaru.

I love this story cant wait to see what happens next
What wil inuyahsas reaction be? Please update soon