good until you add characters from another time. It threw off the mood of the story and developed into something I myself am not attracted to. But maybe others are.

update!!!

please update soon! this is really good!!!!!

Good start and setup, it definitely makes you want see what happens and definitely look forward to the humor.

oh shit

update soon k

Woo! Love it, adding it to my favs =D

Awesome! You keep typing on !!! cool story too can't wait to see some Kag/Sessh action!!

update soo~n

K_I_B

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i cant wait for the next chapter when they capture her

Hello ^_^

Hmmmm....... this is getting intresting. Like the new caracters you have introdused.

Yes they are in love but i hope you will make him work for it.

Keep up the good work.
Love ^_^

this is awesome!!..more chapters please!!

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It's not bad. It introduces a new character but theres nothing goin on so it feels like its dragging. Also, at the end u wrote END and thats weird. Its like the end of story, theres nothing else. but i look forward to the next chpaters.

hope u contuie it is a good start

hope u contuie it is a good start

this is awesome!!!...more chapters please!!!

I only have one Q.....WHO SAID YOU COULD STOP WRITING? ~mutters~ If I find them they will sufer ~starts to whine~ I want more. ok ok I'm better now I just haven't slept yet so a little wacky at the moment don't mind me. But for real post soon. k?

hugs and puppies