| Update soon!!!
you know who!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!- Thu 23 Aug 2007
that was great aswome more more more more more more more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
bye,bye!!!!!!!!!!
slm_candle- Wed 22 Aug 2007
| Hey i love it. Update
Kimonno Rose- Mon 20 Aug 2007
I like the idea but to be honest the story needs more detail. It's kinda boring right now. Add some more to it and really describe the scenes to where someone can picture it in there head and you could have a great story on your hands.
Beta's help too if you ever want to.
I am not criticizing your story....I am only offering small suggestions to make it better.
you know who!!!!!!!!- Sun 19 Aug 2007
write more more more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JANE!!!!!!!!!!!!
(ADRIANA)
elvira- Tue 14 Aug 2007
| Inuyasha!!..you bastard!!!...how can he do that!!!..more chapters please!!!..i have to know what happens next!!
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