(ok this iz bout the 15th time iv written,'i know im late but- but here we go) ok i know im late but(thats realy getting annoyin) luved ur story and write a sequal....if u havent all ready ps: peace+luv+respect=happiness

make a seaqual (sp?)

You ended the story nicely, didn't drag the end, happy that Shion survived alive. *smiles*
The other characters came along better towards the end.

And I think that you should write a sequel, if you have ideas for it.

I would love for you to make a sequal.

Of course you should write a sequal. Maybe you could have them having another pup. Then you could make them have to deal with Shion being jealous of his new sibling(s) or something--just a suggestion.

I totally loved reading this story! I would totally love it if you'd like to post it on my website?

www.justexpressing.com

Aw, the end? darn it... But great all the same ^_^ Keep it up!!

Aw, one chappie left? darn... Anyhow, I can just imagine how sess did the deed, mwahahahh, Man I do love that sadistic ball of fluff ^_^ anyhow, keep it up! ja!!

really good story line, although i did help a little, ha, ha. you should keep writing more, you have a talent for writing stories. i would like to read more of your original stuff, you just might get me hooked to fan fics after all, lol. congrats and veeeeeery goooood job!!!
love, your sis.

poor shiori!!..*crys*...but it makes the plot the more jucier!!..more chapters please!!

Oh no! How could you kill Shiori?! (okay: why must you put Hiten kill the pup?)
I agree with Sesshoumaru, Hiten and Monten too, must pay!
It´s so sad... How will they survive now? Won`t Shion miss his sister? Will he die, too?

Your mean, mean writer...*pouts* Update soon!

I am soooooooooo happy that you update and soooooooooooo mad that there's a few left. at most wahhhhhhhh add another twist plz

great story its so sad that shiori died

great story its so sad that shiori died

Damn men who think all women are whores!!
Anyhow, story's great, please update soon! Ja ne!!

i love it and can you PLEASE hurry up (not trying to be mean though, it's just that the story is awsome)

aww!!!..so sad!!....more chapters please

love this fic!

i adore this fic! Keep up the good work!

his was cool!!..more chapters please!!

Now by a few you mean a few min or a few hours or even days neways i'm going to bed but I will read this story cuz it rox out looud so night night and love your story.

Just a few spelling errors to correct.
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Knew- to know someone
new- something new
Higurashi
damn- not damb
Sesshomaru

hey good job. i hope ya update soon.

I like your story it is some thing new for them

Hey just to say something great job and where's the new drama come in?

I love this story! pleeze continue.

I was wondering when Koga and Sesshomaru were going to have their little argument. I liked the way you had Koga come apologize to them. And Kagome's little pregnant belly dance was cute. Excellent chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

~SIGHS~ i think i like this chapter the best so far oh you want to know why I'll tell you because.........


ITS ANOTHER CHAPTER. LOL sorry its three in the morning and i haven't slept yet but well post soon.

hugs and puppies

First off, I'd like to say I love the plot of your story. It is absolutely superb and mind blowing. About time to see a good plot around here. Your grammer and sentance structure need a bit of good work but other than that, I love this story! Please continue to update it. =DD Good work!

Nice job! I am really enjoying the story and can't wait to see what happens next.

For your first fanfic..

Your doing great.

I love your story and can't wait to read more of it, I hope you keep up the job well done. You have done a fantastic job on this story, I'm going to be sad to see when it end's, hopefuly it wont for quite a while.

this is awesome!!!.....more chapters please!!!...love this!!

great chapter i can't wait to read more!!!!!!!! =)

hey i love it please update everyone will be super happy.

This story is Awsome

that was great cant wait till the next chaps

i love your story and i can't wait for more!!!! why do mom's kow everything..?? =)

I like your story.
At times It is nice to read a story that goes on fast, as I think yours does.

Poor Kagome, being terrorised by the pups. How much more clawing she can take? Sesshoumaru took it all quite calmly. If Kagome and Sango are to meet again, could you make Sango come over to see how Kagome is doing? She seems quite fleeting so far, only meeting accidentally along the way...

Waiting to see what happens next! Keep up the good work! ^_^

this is an awesome stoey!!..more chapters please!!!

good start to ur story beppy!!! u have to get unblocked though because now i want to know what happens next. maybe an idea for part of it would be to do a flash back to what happened when she told inuyasha, and then he could cnfront sesshomaru about what happens, maybe. see what u think. good work tho keep it up!!!

Loved it. Take your time and the writer's block will fade. Perhaps you will have a dream that inspires you. In the mean time, maybe you could have Kagome's mom find them in bed together. Anyway, I am looking forward to your next chapter.

i really luv this story i wonder what fluffy friends will think about the his relationship with kagome i hopw u update the story soon

AHHHHHHH!!! Darn, Kags is gonna have her hands full... Anyhow, I can't wait to see how he's gonna try to get her trust back ^_^ Please update soon! Ja!!

This is a very good story line. I love it. Please continue. I can't wait to find out what happens next.