luv ur stuff! please update!

You really should appreciate your own work sometimes!! Surely you like some of the stuff you write! This made ME at least, veeeeery happy, I don't think I'm going to be able to stop grinning anytime soon. You did a great job!! Keep writing!!!!!!!!

I enjoy reading this story of yours. The way you have written this story is remarkable.

Well, I for one am happy with the chapter, way beyond happy. Last chapter, he struggled with his feelings before accepting them. This chapter was a full, blown-out giving in to them. T'was beautiful! I just hope that Kagome lets no one plant seeds of doubt or discord in her mind. I'm sure they'll try, but she must stay strong and confide in Sesshoumaru when they do. They are each other's anchors. I hope at no time she trys to "save" him by going back to the future with him having to live 500 years to join her again. I've never liked that plot in any story. For her it would only be a short time, but for him, 500 years of pure torture! Very insensitive on her part and the writer. I hope Jaken does away with Amaya because it seems that Lady Satori is going to be enough of a bitch and troublemaker without Amaya adding to it. Plus there's Urasu and the Southern Lord. I may be wrong, but I have a feeling that somehow Sess's mother and the witch are going to eventually team up. I'm glad Isamu was not harmed and killed the bad guy. His loyalty to Kagome is heart warming. And so is Miyoko's. I like your weavings so far of an intricately plot filled story. Keep it coming!

This is a magnificent twist on the original story line. This is perhaps the most original fanfiction have read thus far. Believe me, I've read quite a few. I love the story, love your writing. Keep up the great work Ivy!

More and more I like the way you're twisting the anime into a different direction for the characters. Instead of Rin, Kag is Sess's ward. Rin is now Inuyasha's ward and wow, able to purify shards! Fascinating! I caught where Naraku has taken an interest in Sango. And what you did with Shippo is mindblowing! I hope he and Sango are soon free of Naraku's control. We know the history of Kohaku unless you have something different for him, too. I wonder if you plan for Kag to be kidnapped by that witch's henchmen while she's out riding. I just hope Isamu isn't killed. He seems a nice character. I like him. I anxiously await to see how you further twist the anime.

Your writing is such a sweet blend of intellect and poetry. I don't know how you do it, but you do it so well. And you take your time with your story it is worth waiting for an update because the quality of your work speaks for itself. Great job! I look forward to your next chapter!

I thank you on bended knee, I'm so grateful. You updated and it was a beautiful chapter. Sess does not seem to be OOC at all since the anime only hints at his personality. I'm excited at how you're introducing the characters and I like the way Kag is slowly beginning to have feelings for Sess. Whatever your future plans for her and Yasha, just please oh please don't let her transfer those feelings to him. I just want them to be friends. I'm tired of reading stories about her being heartbroken over InuYasha and Sess coming along to pick up the pieces. That gets old after awhile. I just like them to be close friends. Oh well, I'm sorry. It is your story and you are a talented writer. Please update more often.

Well..... It took a year for the last update. Here again it's been almost another year, so isn't it about time for the next update? I don't like waiting a year between each update; so if/when you do your next update, could you make it a very, very long update that will completely finish the story? Most readers tend to lose interest in a story if it seems to have been abandoned with no promise of more updates. Sorry if it seems I'm fussing at you, but you have to see from the viewpoint of the reader.

I hope you have not done what so many, many other writers have done. They put their heart into writing a good first chapter and then they are never heard from again. Please, tell me that is not what you have done. It's been since 8/9 and you have never updated. I like this change to the anime. So please return to this story and continue it.

i like your idea of whatifs. sess is interesting in that in the anime ( i have never read the manga) his character has never really been explored is ergo there is quite a wide parameter of personal characteristics to choose from. also inuyoukai traits were not explored - only that they are dog demons so presumably there is also a lot of dog traits to choose from (Ithere being so many variety of dogs).
i can't wait to read more of this story. pls pls pls continue to write as i find this a fascinating exploration of what ifs.
my only concern is the age of kags - i presume she will age to the point where she is not jail bait before lemons occur????? and there will be lemons pls later on?????
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I added this to my favorites to check daily for updates. This direction in the anime is absolutely delightful. I'm anxious for more.