your grammar&&spelling sucks.
atleast try and proof read it. or ask a beta for help.

O...M....G.... hahahhahahaahahhahhahahhah.. i am literaly falling out the chair crying laughing so hard.... im actually on the floor where i fell .....oh my god.. you have made my day

Yay! Marie, you put Kono in there, so do I get to help with chapter two and three?

funny!!!!!!!!! laphing so hard she cry's please update soon

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha can't breath hahahahahahah!!!!!!~! still can't breath that waz hahahah so haha FUNNY!!!! you should so make a chapter 2 please update soon or i will cry hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha start's to cry from laphin to much

This is the funniest thing I have read in weeks. I haven't laughed this hard in a long time. I loved it keep up the great work.