Very sad but interesting beginning.

Really great. I love it. Was easy to read because the grammar and spelling were so dead on. It was also really fun to read. I'll be waiting for more!

Great first chapter! Not the "Kykio and Inuyasha Betrays Kagome" start, either. Nice work, nice grammar, great spelling (Not that I would know). Please continue!

I love this! Inuyasha didn't die in the end, making this NOT a cliche!
I LOVE YOU!
I hate cliches.

First chapters very seldom are able to capture my full attention, but I must say that this one did and very quickly. I hope to see an update to this amazing story very soon.

...wow...

um...i don't know what to say except that i really really liked it. XD
the first half had me on the edge of my chair wanting to know more of what had happened. but then when it came to inuyasha's part i wanted to hit him so bad; i could feel the anger from kagome just by reading the story, lol (that's how good it was :P)
i hope you continue with this story, it is written extremely well and since you did not put a summary on it i am curious to see where you'll take it :)
god bless and my best wishes
BubbleGumIceCream (writing name)
Jody (real name)

I like what you've started. I'm looking forward to reading more. A great start!