I love this fic! It's very creative. Please update it as soon as possible =D.
annemarie- Sun 07 Oct 2007
love the chapter :) once again you leave it at a cliff and wanting more. lol thank you for sending me a message telling me about the next chapter. cant wait till the next one!
Hmm ... So I'm Guessing Naraku And Bankotsu Tried To Kill Or Injure Kikyo ... Great ... Shippo Is Not A Happing Camper Well I Can't Wait TO See Whats Going To Happen Next Update Soon!!!
DANG IT! Freakin cliffhangers...everything was getting hella good too.
Well, despite the suspense I greatly enjoyed reading this chapter. I'm quite intrigue and drawn towards the aspect that Naraku or any of his subordinate have yet to discover the Shikon with Kagome's presence.
Also, out of curiosity is Higurashi senior aware of their ancestral heritage in regards to the tama? I was wonder since in the anime he’s filled with a load of knowledge no matter how farfetched some may be. But hey, legends are allows basis on event that have taken place during some events or time periods. Hope to read your next posting of to this chapter really soon. Thank you for the lovely update.
amanda- Sun 30 Sep 2007
please hurry and finish the story it is very catchy
by the way my boyfriend, my best friend, and i are leaders of our own inuyasha club
im kagome
my boyfriend is inuyasha
and my bff is sango,
of course we have alot of other people in our club and they have their own characters too.
well any ways i cant wait to read the rest of story
rowdysgirl- Sat 29 Sep 2007
ok, you have to keep writing this story until it's finished. i HAVE to know how kagome gets away from that piece of crap, naraku. hurry hurry hurry!!
crystal lilith- Mon 10 Sep 2007
this is an interesting story you've written. I am really drawn to this genre in general as well as anticipate for the scenes to come. Thank you for the lovely read. Lillie
Love The New Chapter ... I'm Guessing Naraku Found Out The Truth ... Hmmm Sesshomaru Won't Be Too Happy To Know That Naraku Was Taken His Bride Away Update Soon!!!
annemarie- Sun 09 Sep 2007
OMG I LOVE YOU!!!! this is a great story and i cant wait till you post your next chapter!!! plus your chapters are long, that is soooo cool !!! if it aint to much trouble can you send a message my way when you post the next chapter?? i would be sooo thankful!
So Sesshomaru Knows The Truth ... Hmm I Wonder If He Figures It Out What Really Happened And About Kagome And Kikyo ...
Laughing Cat- Tue 21 Aug 2007
Wonderful story. You write in such a way that my heart aches for what Kagome is going through. I hope you don't mind a little constructive criticism, but the flow of the story might work a little better if you checked your tenses; at points, you'll skip from past tense to present tense, staying in it for a few words or sentences before returning to past.
Chaos_Queen77- Sun 19 Aug 2007
Hmmmm, so the plot thickens, Dun...Dun...Dunnnn. His treatment of his wife is so mean. i mean yeah he's a demon in a situation he does not like but still does he realy have to be so cold, it is not her fault. It makes me want to cry too. Any ways good fic and i hope to see the next chapter soon.
Chaos
Ohhh I love it ^-^ I'm suprised you don't have more reviews. I just wish Kagome wasn't so meek. Its just not the spitfire we're all so used to seeing. Keep up the good work and update soon please!~
Wow another chapter. Thanks. The development is good but it felt like the 2nd chapter was a bit slow and dragged on a bit. I look forward to ur next chapter.
eternallove_495- Sat 21 Jul 2007
TOO BAD, I THINK KAGOME IS THE JEWEL, WRONG MOVE NARAKU!
fluffy- Fri 20 Jul 2007
Looove it. Omg this story is going to be awesomeee! Haha, I'm like at the edge of my seat right now... new chapter new chapter! Please? :P
Can't wait for the next update (literally). soo plz make it ASAP xD I'm desperate! ^.^
faye- Fri 20 Jul 2007
Pretty good plot line.. Hope to see how it develops further soon, please update
Oh This Is Good ... This Is Real Good!
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