plz write more
Megan Consoer- Tue 29 Apr 2008
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Dark_Twinkle- Mon 14 Jan 2008
Like no way, if you are going to conitune the story, please make Kagome more resistive towards Sesshou, make him work hard to win her back
She seemed to have gone thru hell just after he dumped her. I hope you make it hard for him to win her back. Plz
| Aw damn, i want to read more!!! Please update soon
Sessygurl- Sun 16 Sep 2007
| Ah! More please!
Ava 365- Mon 03 Sep 2007
| Keep them coming girl! Does that ranting sound familiar to you? NO? How about... if you don't post next chapter soon I will use tetsusaiga! KAZE NO KIZUUU!! There, don't say I didn't warn you. XP Luv' this story so far
| OK, so I had skipped this story until now, somehow the summary didn't call to me. But just now I gave it a chance and I must tell you that I LOVE it! I can't wait to read what happens between the two! And I love the way you make them move on after they break up, that is what happens in real life, and also that Sesshomaru isn't a womanizer. There are some spelling mistakes though or typos... Keep up the great work!!!
I love this story just like your others. Since the next chapter may be the reunion …you must make it longer like one of the other reviewers suggested.
I’m looking forward to the updates…soon please *grins excitedly*
Great job :-)
*Hugs and smiles*
toni- Sat 18 Aug 2007
| next chapter is the reunion... should make that long
| Nice chapter, having Kagome reflect on her life before and after Shippo. Having a baby tends to change most people for the better. Good job. I can't wait for the next installment.
toni- Wed 15 Aug 2007
| i like it! it just making kagome looks so lousy
Kohana- Wed 15 Aug 2007
well i'm reading it for the first time and think you should keep going! I think its a very original story! you don't get many were Sesshoumaru leaves her because of a habbit usually its a girl or a miscomunication. Keep up the great work LittleDragon!!
~K~
Hime17- Wed 15 Aug 2007
I like it You should finish it.
10/10
^_^♥
Hime17- Wed 15 Aug 2007
I like it You should finish it.
10/10
^_^♥
gen'ei honsho- Wed 15 Aug 2007
| Don't give up LittleDragon. We are all here to express our enjoyment of the Sesshomaru/Kagome relationship. I love what you are doing in this story. Your story was just posted today. It's 7 am here in Houston and I just got on to read all the updated stories before I continue writing more for my story. Shoot! My story is posted on a site where I can see how many people have read my story. I've had almost 6000 hits and I only have 24 reviews and that hasn't stopped me from writing. So please, don't give up.
Lady Kamiko- Wed 15 Aug 2007
I think it has great potential.
Just lacks detail.
Update soon.
| I'm enjoying it so far and I really encourage you to continue the story. I live how the plot is different from the usual Kag/Sess fics, it's a nice change--so use it to your advantage! I don't think you should make it easy for them to get back together-but mix in some kind of drama! **MUAHAHAHA** j/k
wow great start. It is unusual for authors to make Kagome the one who messes stuff up. Very interesting!
I would love to see your chapters get a little longer (I know, it is hard to write long chapters... because after a while your hands get tired and all) but it would really let the reader get sucked into the story. Since I think this story could go far, longer chapters would help a lot. I don't mean like 20 pages, if you could up it to like 1,500 words or so, I think that would be great!
Anyways, great work so far. I look forward to seeing how this fic develops
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