Wow!!! This is another great story you have here... I started from the beginning and couldn't stop until the last chapter... Awesome storyline... Poor Kagome having to deal with 2 Sesshomaru's... Wish i was in her place.. LOL...
I will most certainly add this to my favorites,, along with the Author...
Plz hurry and update.. I can't wait to see what happens now...
Wow,, Inuyasha and Kagura that was an unexpected pairing but cool all the same....
Well take care and hurry with next chapter..
Mari
studdedmisfit- Sun 30 Dec 2007
wow thats all i can really say. wow. its so different than anything i have read. i really love it the only part i dont like is inuyasha and kagura. but other than that it really is a beautiful story please keep updating please write more soon
Jean- Sat 29 Dec 2007
I'm not sure I understand why Kagome was holding younger Sesshoumaru off. I thought she wanted a future with the Sesshoumaru in the future. If so, shouldn't she let things progress as they were alluded to by older Sesshoumaru? He clearly had intimate knowledge of her which could only have been obtained in the past. So I have to just say I don't get it. Incuded with this thought is why did she throw herself at Inuyasha if she wants to be mated to older Sesshoumaru? Other than that, your borrowed lemon was great. A well executed seduction and love (?) making encounter between a very experienced partner and a skittish female.
gracy- Thu 20 Dec 2007
please update soon. loved it great story! make sure sesshoumaru feels guilty
Jean- Thu 20 Dec 2007
OMG I have waited years for this story to be updated. I used to have the chapters printed and I finally gave up last month and sadly threw it out. I can't tell you how happy I am that you have written a new chapter. The author name is different, the other was Existence. The latest chapter has taken a twist. I was thinking that Sesshoumaru would end up hurting Kagome physically when he became out of control or something of that nature. I did not think that he would not be able to recognize his own scent. Granted there would be the puzzle that he knew he had not been intimate with her, but still wouldn't he know the scent? I hope your muse stays with you as I am very interested in where the story will go next.
cocoke5- Wed 19 Dec 2007
more more the story is real good and now she is a dark miko i can not wait for more of the story and see what happen next to them all will she come back and be with them in the future. up date soon the story is real good.
YO!- Thu 08 Nov 2007
I hope you update as soon as you can. This story is developing really well.
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