your kidding right? right? Yes I'm having trouble grasping it! Please write a squel or something to set of some curious fires please.It can start out as your own fic without the challenge so something can happen!
Well at least give a filler chapter, for all the curious fires.
Kega
holycheese- Sun 04 May 2008
WHAAAAT?!done!!?...is there a sequal AT LEAST?!D:
holycheese- Sun 04 May 2008
yay!shes leaving!(on that midnight traaain to geooorgiaXDah...sugar)the drama!the tears!the funnyness(cookies!:D) i love ieeeeet!
holycheese- Sun 04 May 2008
holy cheese!sesshomarus...AN ASS!tell me kagome at least like LEAVES him right?or things get better?:O
Shiori_Baka- Thu 17 Jan 2008
the story is good but the ending is confusing does he chase and find her does he relies he loves her how does she end up....you could probably do a sequel..
akira342- Wed 09 Jan 2008
OMG I HATE YOU! YOU CANT JUST END IT THERE!! *sobs*
.... but it was a great story :(
tif- Sat 20 Oct 2007
he deserved it. now maybe he will realized what it feel like to lose someone who really loved him. they always say you only realized how important they are when that person is gone...
shikonmiko- Sun 12 Aug 2007
U MUZ BE JOKING!! PLZ CONTINUE!! GOD!! AT LEAST MAKE A SEQUEL FOR THIS STORY!! I BEG U!! though i muz say it is an AWESOME story!! =)
Mizuumi no Shinkirou- Tue 07 Aug 2007
I think this is a great story! I'm sad that it's over, and I do hope that you write a sequel, even if it's just to tie up a few more loose ends, like where in Europe she goes, does Sesshoumaru try to bring her back, those kinds of things. There were just a few little grammatical errors I caught, like uses of 'there' and 'your' when it should have been a different 'there/their/they're' and 'your/you're'. But I truly loved this story very much!
Thank you for writing it!!
D- Fri 03 Aug 2007
liked this story, are you going to make a part to or leave it as is?
Jasmine- Fri 03 Aug 2007
Hi this this great!!!!!!! When is the next one coming out. I can't wait to read it.
Noacat- Sun 29 Jul 2007
Seems a rather awkward place to end it -- but it is your story, after all. Still, a little more wouldn't hurt. Maybe a sequel... *crosses fingers hopefully*
Irihi-chan- Sun 29 Jul 2007
LMAO
Sesshoumaru deserves it -_-'. Bastard Anyway... GREAT CHPT!!!! UPDATE SOON **on knees begging**
Irihi-chan
elvira- Sun 29 Jul 2007
so she finally left...good...poor inuyasha....more chapters please!!
*Crazy Asian*- Sun 29 Jul 2007
NOOOOO!!! I can't believe it is over! Please tell me you are going to write a sequel!! PLEASE!!!!
angela- Sat 28 Jul 2007
omfg!!!!!!!! the story's finished u have to write sequel!!!!!!!!!pleas pleas pleas pleas pleas pleas pleas pleas pleas pleas pleas pleas !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
v a l k y r i e e e !- Sat 28 Jul 2007
awesome story...please make a sequel! :)
HAZEL- Sat 28 Jul 2007
WHAT?? THATS IT?
UM OK
THANKS
sins- Sat 28 Jul 2007
i lobve the storry though the sudden ending kinda put me off i woulld of loved for sesshoumaru to finder her some years married to anyone and feel all he shit kagome felt! pleas emake another story soon!
So way! That ending cuts off so many potential chapters! Please, pleeeease don't end it there!
Is there going to be a sequal? Please say yes. Send me a message saying yes or no please.
Tallon Lenox- Sat 28 Jul 2007
I love your story it rocks!! I want to ask do think your next chapter could be about Sesshoumaru when he saw kagome's note untill he gets to inuyasha's. any way keep up the great work. Tallon
Katherine- Sat 28 Jul 2007
Aww its over!! T_T Im sad now you should do a sequal this story was really good. And if you dont write a sequal please right another story!! I would be so happy so if you do email me kay?
-Katherine
harana- Sat 28 Jul 2007
what!? done! it was soo good too!
but that's okay, i'm not complaining, since i think he deserves that to be left out, just like he did kagome, but seriously...for readers like me, it's kind of sad that it ended so easily too...sniffles.
tho i do look forward to more of your fics! so keep it up!
psychogirly- Sat 28 Jul 2007
noooo u cant just end it here!!!!!! plEASE do a sequel or sumthing pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee.
Seryu- Sat 28 Jul 2007
Great story!! Please, Please do a sequel. I mean continue the bastards suffering. I want him to feel what she felt 100 times worse.
naru- Sat 28 Jul 2007
Your kidding right??? You have to make kagome getwith another guy.!~!!!!! You can't just END it. !!! BOOOO!!! Your killing me here.!!!!! Good job thought!!!! LOL>
anon- Sat 28 Jul 2007
it's over so soon?! It was an awesome story...and I loved the end. I do reccommend that you do a sequel...pleaseeeeee
alatera- Sat 28 Jul 2007
Well she finally left . We know he's not happy about it. lol Of course, I think most of us wanted to see him be remorseful , but with his current attitude that might take a long time. He seems to view her as "his", but he is not "hers". I just wonder if he's mad that she wrote on his visor or that she's gone?
Alaine- Sat 28 Jul 2007
she hasnt truly left him because they are still connect through marriage and i hope after this trip she would become stronger
BeautifulDeception- Sat 28 Jul 2007
NO! It Cant Be Over ... Go Kagome Tho!!! Well I Would Love A Sequal But If That Wont Do I'll Jus Use Mi Imagination!
itachiiyoubastard- Sat 28 Jul 2007
BOOYAKASHA!
*SMILE*
tif- Sat 28 Jul 2007
its interesting isnt it when you lose the person who has always been by your sides its only when you realize you dont wanna lose them and realize all the things you did wrong and find yourself regretting.....
megan- Sat 28 Jul 2007
I love the store keep up the good work. I also think you have nailed sesshomaru's character very well
so bittersweet
::cries::
totally not expecting that ending, but thats what makes a good fic, ne?
:]
...almost like you're preparing for a sequel *HINT HINT!!!*
:p
i loved what she wrote on the sun visor, at least it got him to become all possessive but too late and too bad for him. so yeah, great job and like i said before...i love this story =)
alaine- Fri 27 Jul 2007
i hope she finally divorce him and another man comes into her life i kind of hate kagome because she always comes up with excuse for him its not like she cant live without him
Vicious Grin- Fri 27 Jul 2007
wait... so it is over?
I'm so confused!!! was he really being nice? what did she write on the sun visor thingy?
I think I missed something....
>.
Oh Good Chapter ... She Better Not Be Falling For Him ... Its All A Set Up ... He's Only Doing It So She Doesnt Leave!!!! Kagome Dont Be Blinded By Love!!!
Dark_topaz- Fri 27 Jul 2007
she needs to leave him and he needs to wake up.
hazel- Fri 27 Jul 2007
-sings-
theres a stranger in my house!
it took a while to figure out!
lol
elvira- Fri 27 Jul 2007
damn...fucken asshole...are they going to be happy?..more chapters please i need to know!!
heather- Fri 27 Jul 2007
it's called a vizer i'm not sure i spelled that right but it is the right name
sakuyo's smile- Fri 27 Jul 2007
that mirror thingy is called a sun visor.
jeanette- Fri 27 Jul 2007
It's called a visor.
Mel- Fri 27 Jul 2007
sunvisor
Mel- Fri 27 Jul 2007
sunvisor
alatera- Fri 27 Jul 2007
Its called a sun visor( according to Wikipedia.org).
Amber3- Fri 27 Jul 2007
sun visor lol
piper1871- Fri 27 Jul 2007
Kagome needs to pack up her bags and leave, but not before Sesshoumaru sees the bruise he gave her. If you make Kagome stay at all, than that makes her pathetic. Sesshoumaru needs to pay for what he did!!!
Miss Artemis- Fri 27 Jul 2007
DAMN IT! I hate SESSHOMARU! I hope he dies! Come on Kagome, kick him in the family jewels so he can't reproduce children and leave him! >. So mad. (continues seething)
*Crazy Asian*- Fri 27 Jul 2007
It is called a visor. I cannot WAIT for the next chapter! I absolutely love this story. Keep up the awesome work!
"the mirror thingy that hangs over head that you can pull down to shade your eyes from the sun" is a sun visor. :-)
Sun visor?
naru- Thu 26 Jul 2007
Update!!! It follows the video and the song really good. Good job and keep it up. Update soon k?
larissa- Wed 25 Jul 2007
why does kagome continue to still love him? hell, if he was my man i wud dump him in a heartbeat! oh the nerve of that man making her arm purple! great update ! but as much as dont want to admit...i still want em to be together! but dont let kag 4give him so easily and make sesshy SÛFFÈR!!
Katherine- Wed 25 Jul 2007
Aww I just finished what you have so far and Sesshomaru is a big meany!! But I still love you story so update soon please
Katherine- Wed 25 Jul 2007
Aww I just finished what you have so far and Sesshomaru is a big meany!! But I still love you story so update soon please
alaine- Wed 25 Jul 2007
i cant belive she still give him a chance she should have divorce him right on the spot in the end i hope she doesnt end up with him and does shippo appear at this story/
Katherine- Wed 25 Jul 2007
Aww poor Kagome and mean Sesshomaru well I hope he finds out what he's missing and what a terrible person he's been
But anyway I just read the first chappy and I must say It was great so I'm gonna read the rest now ^-^
Good Story ... Me Likes ... Kagome Deserves So Much Better Than This ...
I cant tell you how much I love this fic!
--favs--
woot!!
and the long chapies are nice ^.^
Major luff for this fic.
I hope she dose that to every guy but him and she brings them right were he can see....then he snapps when shes danceing with a drunk inu xDDD!
yes...I have problems thank you -w-~
~suki- out
Mangoesgirl- Wed 25 Jul 2007
HA ~ Kagome got her butt scanned!! Lmao ~ Hmmm... i didnt get the sentence.."Kagome followed with her eyes the direction in which he was pointing it. " Where was he pointing the cellphone at anyways??? Update soon please!
larissa- Wed 25 Jul 2007
omg!! that wuz awesome! sesshy is such a jerk! i feel sad 4 kaggie! sesshy catches kag dancin wit anotha man? thats great! now sesshy will get jelous . PLEaSE ÚPDÃTÉ por favor!!
tiffany- Tue 24 Jul 2007
yeah i hope she starts acting cold towards the bastard
Miss Artemis- Tue 24 Jul 2007
*cackles manically* MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Way to go, Kagome! Show that pathetic-excuse-of-a-man that he doesn't control you! I wonder who she's dancing with? I hope it's one of the InuYasha characters like...um...Miroku. It doesn't have to be in a romantic sense. I can just see it being him. I hope Kagome verbally thrashes Sesshomaru down. Example: Sesshomaru and Kagome exchange heated words before Kagome snaps at him: "go to your whores" and starts to dance with that man again. Tee hee. That would be hilarious. Leave Sesshy in the dust.
Can't wait for next chapter!
-Miss Artemis
i totally love this story =) i can't wait to see what you have planned for the couple and how kagome is going to fight back against the cheating and all. and nice club scene...rubbing herself all over a guy right in front of sess and all ;) good game!
Amber3- Mon 23 Jul 2007
Wow this whole time i thought u were basing this was based off stranger in my nhouse by tamia. :P oh wells
naru- Mon 23 Jul 2007
Don't worry. There was no mention of a wedding so I could tell the difference. Update soon. Good job onthe story by the way. Ja.,!!!
hazel- Mon 23 Jul 2007
Kikyou is right about Kagome! Where is the strong Kagome at? this weak and ......ugh Kagome needs a cut buddy lmao
Mangoesgirl- Mon 23 Jul 2007
Great job!! Although most of the time, i don't really care for Kikyo at all, i actually like her this time! Promise me Kagome's gonna get her spirt back and kick Sesshoumaru's ass off his high horse?? ^^ Update soon please!
reina- Mon 23 Jul 2007
oooh, i'da kicked fluffy's ass *glares*
Miss Artemis- Mon 23 Jul 2007
Bu-Bu-Bu-Bu-But why InuYasha? (Gives puppy eyes) Can't it be anyone else? Ah well (shrugs her shoulders). At least it's better than Sesshomaru...for now. But I do understand why you would pick him. The two of them HATE each other and it would bring the right incentive if Sesshomaru's hated half-brother is going out with Kagome. I hope Sesshomaru get what he deserves.
I liked Kikyo in this one. She was straight forward and blunt. Maybe a little too blunt at times, but at least she got her point across to Kagome fairly well. I'm glad she was able to make Kagome see that she needs to take control of the situation and to better herself. ^^ Please update soon, I love this fic!
-Miss Artemis
itachiiyoubastard- Mon 23 Jul 2007
Thank you for the clarification! I still wanna punch Sesshoumaru in the face though, or in other places that will collect a lot of pain when hit with the necessary amount of force. Update soon and orgasmic chapter as always!
^__^
yeah, I still pretty much want to punch sesshoumaru. haha
This is sooo good! I've been thinking about writing a fic like this but I'm so lazy! I'm glad that you are writing it and I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update again soon!
......- Sun 22 Jul 2007
This is depressing. *sniffle* but very good. I'll be waiting torn-ish for the the next chapter. > Still, really goood and really sad (so far) fanfic!
naru- Sun 22 Jul 2007
Update!!!! I love Stranger by Hilary Duff. !!! Its so good and made such a good story!~!!!! Update soon. Ja
Yuki- Sun 22 Jul 2007
I hate Sess so much right now!!!! Argh! What a complete prick! I totally agree that he should suffer. Kagome should leave him without notice and eventually serve him the divorce papers. And maybe find another - maybe a big time business competitor that will sweep her off her feet? I would have to say that Naraku (thou evil) is freakin' hot would be an excellent, yet twisted choice.
itachiiyoubastard- Sat 21 Jul 2007
Are they married or just living together? Sesshoumaru is a total prick in this story and I want to kill him for it. Update soon. ^__^
Miliy- Sat 21 Jul 2007
i hope kagome left him for another man at the end and sesshoumaru suffers and kagura met a tragic end
Seryu- Sat 21 Jul 2007
You got me hooked!! I'll give it to you I have seen Sesshomauru portrayed like a bastard, but you have surpassed them. Please tell me that she is going to wise up and leave him. I cannot believe he would take her to his mistresses house, and then in the very presence of her family flirt with a family's friend. Then to top things off be annoyed by her presence. Wny the hell be with her then? I feel bad for Kagome. Please do something for her like give her a back bone so she can dump his ass!!! Cannot wait for the next chapter!!!
Jenn- Sat 21 Jul 2007
Kagome just needs to leave him now. thats all i have to say.
jadeprincess- Sat 21 Jul 2007
Good job on the story so far, I can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully Kagome will come to her senses soon.
alaine- Sat 21 Jul 2007
i hope she finds someone else likes he's rival in business like the fanfic pyratic victory anyway i hope he pays of being a cold heartless bastard
kagsbigfan- Sat 21 Jul 2007
Too lazy to login right now. I love this story so far but I get so emotional and angry that I don't want to read for fear of Kagome's heartbreak but I'm curious. I love her to death and when someone breaks her heart I become VERY ANGRY. I can't believe Sesshomaru's nasty atitude towards his own wife. I think she should ask for a divorce and move out where she doesn't leave a note but as time passes he realizes that he misses her. She finds someone who loves her unconditionally, preferably Bankotsu. After a few years there's an accidental meeting between them where Sesshomaru wants to get her back but he has to works so hard that he almost becomes hopeless when she continuously refuses his advances and he meets Bankotsu. I love it when the guys suffer. I'm just a vengeful person if you get on my bad side. Update soon.
Mangoesgirl- Sat 21 Jul 2007
Wow...Sesshoumaru's a fucking prick...cheating on Kagome then flirting with someone she knows...damn... Update sooon!!! The fic is awesome!
Miss Artemis- Sat 21 Jul 2007
OOOOOOh, I hope Kagome makes Sesshomaru pay big time. He is such an ass! It's unbelievable! I think she needs to drop this disgusting, unfaithful, sorry-excuse-of-a-man and get a real boyfriend that will actually love her. He seems so cruel and uncaring, like a robot. I wouldn't tolerate being treated that way and by nature, I'm a nice, calming person who usually avoids confrontation of any kind. I hope Kagome finds the strength to move on from the little...*ahem*.
I agree from the first chapter, Kagome should make Sesshomaru realize just what he's going to miss after she's gone. He's going to wish that he paid more attention to her. I wonder how you're going to write this; it's exciting to just ponder on what authors might write with their stories. I hope Kagome divorces (are they married? if not, I hope she DUMPS him instead) him, goes dating after a few weeks of crying (maybe even just days), and finally gets into a relationship with...I don't know...Kouga? Bankotsu? Naraku? That way, when Sesshomaru is with that slut Kagura or whoever, he'll see her with another guy, happy, and suddenly realize: wait. I need her. I love her. But he then realizes that he will have to work QUADRUPLE hard to win her and her love back. I say Kagome needs to drag it out of him until he's on his knees and begging her to come back.
Phew. Wow. I haven't been this riled up over a story in AGES! You are an incredible writer, bringing such strong emotions with your words. You can cleanly tell us how much of an ass Sesshomaru is and make us feel sympathetic and bad for Kagome and make us hate people like Kagura. I must say that this must be the first fic to ever make me DISGUSTED with Sesshomaru. I've read ones that made me feel sympathetic to him, angry at him, and understanding to him, but never disgusted.
A job well done. Please update soon!
-Miss Artemis
Vicious Grin- Sat 21 Jul 2007
urgh. the unfaithful boyfriend and no one to run to. i hate when that happens!!!!
but awesome story. i actually wanted to spit at my computer screen thinking somehow he could feel it. haha
-VG-
MichikoMagic- Thu 19 Jul 2007
I really like your story update as soon as possible.
Mangoesgirl- Thu 19 Jul 2007
Bravo!! Update soon!! Totally awesome!! Brought tears to my eyes. ^^
HOPEFUL- Thu 19 Jul 2007
I'm hoping Kagome will go home, throw out every single item that will give Sesshoumaru the benefit of a memory, pack up her things and leave to become strong and independent on her own. I'm also hoping Kagome will start a new life with a professional job where she is a force to be reckoned with, make friends, and eventually find a new love – one who loves her unconditionally. I'm definitely a fan of the Sesshoumaru/Kagome pairing, but in this situation it’s only fair that Sesshoumaru feels the pain. Your story has a heart wrenching start, but it held my interest as I was reading it. I’m looking forward to your upcoming chapters – here’s to hoping!
alatera- Wed 18 Jul 2007
Well its labeled a romance, but reads like an angst. Its very interesting . Honor? He has no honor at the moment. What has happened to change him? At this moment I think the best idea would be for her would be to leave him. Sounds like they are in a relationship but not married. I mean she should go home and pack and go home to mother. Leave a note. Be interesting if he showed up to the barbeque anyways knowing she left or not. Well till next chapter.
alaine- Wed 18 Jul 2007
that was so sad i hope that she dumps him in the end
*Fluffy Lover*- Wed 18 Jul 2007
OMG i love this story! you have to keep going. keep up the awesome work!! can't wait 4 the next chapter!
I love it!
PLEASE! You have got to continue! Very interesting!
Keep up the good work!
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