lame atk? wtf? o.O Too OOC for me...

That was a good chapter i loved it you have to write more soon

if there is an others chapter please hurry up
really nice story

Bravo, Bravo i love this story so far plz update soon

more please!

ONFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!u hav 2 hurry wit another chap!!!!!!i mean its spring break...well it least it iz here...and if ur young enough 2 hav spring break.....wuteva jst write another chap!!!!!i cant wait 2 c wut sess sayz 2 kags and how she reacts!!!!!u hav 2 hurry and write another chap!!!!!
ps:peac+luv+respect=happiness

cute

AMG I Was JUST Going 2 Start a Song-Fic About the Song 'Tale As Old As Time' From This Movie!!!! Darn....I Guess I Can't Do It Now.... :(

This story is nicely put together, however; there are some problems with it.

The story seems inconsistant, why did Sesshoumaru want to be back before sundown, then order that Kagome was to attend diner with him, I thought that something was going to happen to him at sun down, which is why he wanted to get to the castle.

Also, when Kagome first goes to sleep it says that she takes off her clothes, leaving only her undergarments. But later when Aerin makes her change it say that she takes off her uniform.

I think that if you were to read this over, or get a beta, this whole thing would be fixed quite easily.

This is a great story so don't think that I am being mean or rude, I am just trying to help you make your story really good.

:)