that is soo mean, you did a really short chappie, and its on a cliffy, please update soon!

MoniQ

yay updates i love updates bring on some more updates please

love your story, could you please keep sessy's mom around instead of killing her off, please, also if you don't mind please update soon, pretty please??????

wow dat is wow so kags beast is makin har lose on perpous must find out da outcome to dat please update soon

Hey great story can't wait to see what happens to kagome and sesshoumaru next. post soon.

hugs and puppies

i think its good ^_^ will u have more up soon i wanna know how there fight goes who will survive i wanna know lol
ja ne
TheRyu

I love your story keep up the good work!

2 ppl kicking each others ass reminds me of DragonBall. lol. The chapters r so short that it feels like theres no progress...Kinda monotonous. But i do like your ideas in this fic, you just need to add a little more plot and not just zoom through the chapters.

love it, great story can not wait for you to update again. soon please???

Nice start to the young pups training. I wonder why Arie's sister would want to kill her young and why would Inu no Taisho allow such a thing or allow her near his family? Interesting.

Nicely done...*hugs and smiles*

Looking forward to the training of Kags and Sess. Also, wondering how the father will take to his newest pup. Very interesting. Keep up the good work.

Well done! *hugs and smiles*

dat is interesting so basicly sesshy-kun is goin to be dating his adopted sister i like please update soon wit longer chaps please

This is a unique story. I like so far. I think you should keep Arie alive because I believe she can be a pivotal character later on in the story. Nice start to what may become a good story.

*hugs and smiles*

please no kill!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I ususally do not review but I don't want her to die!!!!!! Instead of killing her you could make it seem like she died, but no body to prove it and her show up later after Inutaisho is allready dead. It's probably a dumb idea, so yeah. Have fun writing!

hmmm... I say kill now. But if you do kill later, for the love of god, please don't name the pup rin. keep rin human. I find it too cheese when rin changes. But I like it when Kagome changes. Guess I'm just picky...

~you decide
~zen

I say kill off Arie a few weeks after the pup is born alive and healthy due to an illness. That way the newborn pup can feed from Arie and get weaned (even if it is a bit earlier than normal). Also, this would have Kagome taking care of the pup while Sesshoumaru trains to be the heir to his father's land.

this is awsome!!!..more chapters please!!!...take the time you need to work out the problems with your family...

ja-ne!!

Sorry to hear that your having a problem within your home. I hope it goes okay.

Nice fiction so far, you certainly have me hooked and ready to read more, no doubt about that.

I hope to read a new update from you when you post it.

Ja Ne!

Cool I like the idea and the plot is well written..... Update soon.

Why did you end it, itwas getting to the good part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jane, Vamp

hey, so i like ur story, but thought i'd give u input. You are rushing your story. it has a good plot and story hidden behind the rush of it. Everything is happening so fast the reader can't let things siink in before you're two steps ahead, so slow down, expand. play with your story a lirttle.

like the story hope u update

great update. i'm happy that she was accepted... :) ...looking forward to the next chapter.

Your doing a good job on this.Just keep it up.Update very soon

This is by far the bestest ( ;) ) fic ever! Love it!

~zen

wow, this is a really godd start. I've never read a story like it. :)

You need to do a bit of editing, and add a little meat to this skin-and-bones story. It is a good idea, though. You might want to get a beta to help you with editing and ideas. Don't be afraid to add details.

I like the originality of this story. I have not read one like it yet. I can't wait for the next chapter.