Reviews for New School, Old People by nokia_twin_sis2
Fluffy- Wed 09 Jan 2008
RadioActiveOrange- Mon 24 Sep 2007
RAO yori.
Megan Consoer- Thu 13 Sep 2007
nokia_twin_sis2- Fri 13 Jul 2007
Zyren- Fri 13 Jul 2007
first, softmore=sophomore
second, please dont fill a chapter with song lyrics, a few lines is okay if what its saying is relevant to the scene but the whole song is just evil. Also at the beginning of chapter two, in the first line, you called Sora 'Sore' lol
BTW Im not tryna be mean or flame you b/c i do like this fic and i can see that it has a lot of potential and i like you to continue
lIgHtNiNg_PaNdA- Fri 13 Jul 2007