I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Hey!!! I really like the story. I wish Sesshoumaru would know about Kagome's child. Please update soon. BTW, I'd like to be on the mailing list.

thank you sooooooooooo much for ot putting kikyo as a hoe or something like that its getting boring seeing them just tease on her yay and on kagome you make her come in to easily she still loves but make it harder for sesshomoru

thank you sooooooooooo much for ot putting kikyo as a hoe or something like that its getting boring seeing them just tease on her yay and on kagome you make her come in to easily she still loves but make it harder for sesshomoru

oh when is kagome goin' tell seshoumaru?

Love The New Chapter, Damn Inuyasha For Interrupting Every Damn Thing ... Well Can't Wait To Read The New Chapter!!!

no, i think not, not yet anyways. it's to soon. so LOVE THE STORY and can't wait for the next ch!
Leira ^.~

I cant wait for your next chapter...it really make me want to read the rest of your story.
Update please and thank you!

yes i think you should

i love this fic

wanted to let you know im enjoying your fanfic greatly, keep posting!

no........you shouldnt....but if you do, it should be at the end of the story

Your story was great but what i want to know is why did you stop at such a great and interesting. Total suspense. I rate this story as a 9.

go for it!

I love your stoy. Sad but sweet. I think you sould put some lemon but in the you sould do what you feel will make this sroy better.

Please continue this soon it's really good:)

please update ASAP!! please put a lemon in the next chapter!! ^_^

hey so far this has been a great fan fiction and... if you mension me (kk) i'll review a lot i promis but i can't ate your fan fic because i'm not a member of this site but it's like my fav one to read fan fiction on!!! by by now ....KEEP WRITEING PLEASE AND DON'T FORGET TO MENSION ME!!!
kk

Ok, so so far. I made it to chapter three and I love it. I had to stop for I was at work reading it on my cell. Thank you's to the person who decided that internet should be put on the cell phone! Lol. Well, I'll be back to read some more later.

evil...evil... evil! you need to update!!!

YES!!!!! hehehhee to make seshh think of wat could happend if they married wahahahahaha

Aurgh! Soooooo many cliffies today. But hurry up with good, juicy chapter please?

~zen

You can put a lemon in if you want... by the way its a good story.

I like this story a lot. finally, a different plot line! keep up the ggos work!

put me on the mailing list!!
you shouldn't do a lemon until later, only until when Sesshoumaru learns about his son and also when Kagome can trust him more, then i think there maybe should be one, it's all your choice, you are the writer..

So, about the lemon... The last chapter ended with Kagome about to tell Sesshoumaru that he left both Kagome and Kazuya... I think that when Sesshoumaru hears that, he should be overjoyed, overjoyed enough to want to consummate the news with Kagome... and they could get into it... but then Kagome could stop it saying it is too soon... or that Rin could hear... or that they need to talk about things... and then after talking they could finish it out....

Anyways, that is just my opinion. I am sure whatever you come up with will be ten times better ;)

As always great work.

~Kanazawa

OMG I am like crying that you left the chapter right there... that is crazy!! Sesshoumaru should know... and I know that Kags is having trouble telling him, but come on.... crying...

Definitely make up time. She has suffered long enough and he seems very determined to make her happy and will keep his word.

i hate you. UPDATE QUICKLY. and no you shouldn't put a lemon in it you should just have the mention of it.

meanie.. *glares* LOL jk update!!!!!

ummmm.. YES! XD XP pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeeee?????!!!!

ummmm.. YES! XD XP pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeeee?????!!!!

this is awesome plz update soon

Lol ... Yes Lemon ... Awww I Hate Cliffys ... Update Soon Please!!!

oh so Kazuya is very sick!! hope it is curable!!!!! i love ur story and yes put a lemon!!!!!!!!! update soon plz

i loved chapter 7, we finally find out where kazuya has been...probably some sort of lung disease or cystic fibrosis that keeps him there. i hope everything in the story works out of the better though, but it's always good to have some sort of drama in the story since real life isn't exactly sun shine and flowers in bloom all the time, there needs to be thunder storms and darkness to balance everything out =D. Anyway enough with my talking, good job and can't wait for the next!

Hey i really love you'r story. i keep checking up on it to see if u updated/Becuz i really want to knw how sesshomaru is gonna take it. Knowing that he has a little boy. U knw. And also been wanting to knw what is going on with their son. But i can wait. I will check every day to see if u update.'
Cant wait for the next chapter.

If you need a beta I will do it. e-mail me at: chica2otome@yahoo.com

I Realli Do Like This Story!!! Its Realli Good ... Umm Could U Add Me To Ur Mailing List Please ... Mi E-mail Is Ilovemuzic09@yahoo.com ... Anyways Update Soon I Realli Want To Now Whats Going To Happen Next!

Another great chapter! I was just wondering though where the dream begins? Is it the whole chapter, or does it start from when Kagome and Rin get back from shopping?

That was a pretty touching scene between Kags and Sess in the bedroom.

P.S. So, by any chance, was Katsuya kidnapped/ stolen?-- must find out... update soon :)

I sincerely hope that their son is still alive. Death would be so unforgivable and I could see Sesshomaru not ever forgive her for taking his chance of being with his son. I hope that somewhere along this story we find out that due to a tragic incident, he was left in a coma, or that he was taken from her by force because she was not able to take care of him. Maybe even that he was kidnapped and never heard from the kidnappers, that her own son, mature in some way, left her, ranaway, or disowned her and turned his back on her. Something crazy, but at least he is alive with the possibility of the family reuniting and become happy, of course, with some struggles along the way.
I hope you update soon so that many of us finally know the truth and see a happy family in the near future.

OH COME ON!!! U R FREEZING UP THE STORY!! GIMME A LEMON OR SESSHOU ACKNOWLEDGE OF HIS SON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-waves hand excitedly- Ooh, ooh, I have no life! And I DO love to beta. owo

-cough-

I really like your storyline so far, and your depictions of the characters. Looking forward to future updates!

...Nice to see a PG-13 fic on this site, too~ -grumbles about perverted teenagers-

no no no, I thought there was a chapter 6 and then there was an A.N.... whhaaaa!! Oh I hope you have the chance to update soon. I am in love with this story, even though it feels like I am raking my heart across hot coals as I read it. ::clicking 'favorite stories' button::

OMG OMG... I know I said that last chapter but OMG... so heart-wrenching. The tears shined in my eyes as I read about Kagome helping Kohaku...

And Rin visiting Kohaku-- so cute!!

And what about Kazuya!! I want to know but I'm afraid it might be too much-- oh and I love his name so much.

Okay- next chapter

OMG-- almost crying. The scene with Sess outside her door whispereing comforting words to her-- so poignant.

And Kagome... poor girl... what has happened in your life. I almost don't want to know... little Kazuya you sound so cute....

oh poor Kohaku!! The man that shot him was a bastard!! P.S. How do you know so much about the inner workings of a hospital-- that was well written.

I loved the scene where Sess apologized to Kagome-- and the fact that she got it one video-- priceless!

I am surprised that she seemed to acquiesce to his apology so quickly, but it seems there is a lot of room to grow, for the both of them.

Also-- what happened!!?? I don't want to find out, but I can't wait to find out-- does that make any sense?

Okay next chapter!

cry cry cry... that was heart-wrenching!! Just what happened to Kagome! Did her little boy really sick/die... is that why she works at a hospital... is that why she is so sad around Rin?

Must find out more!!

P.S. The description of Rin and her 'painting' was beautifully written. I laughed at the childishness of it all.

Wow, good premise for a story! So Kags gets to grant any one child a wish-- nice.

Although I gotta wonder what Sess is thinking at this point about there meeting.

On a different note, you said that Kags had a kid with Sess... is that child still around? And could he possibly be Shippo?

Well, only way to find out.

P.S. Great starbucks scene- great detail, I felt like I really was there :)

Maybe intentional but in this latest chapter, she said" My son has had....". present and past tense. I know something has happened to him but am not sure whether he is dead or alive. Could be in a coma, hmmm... but he was in pain till present sounds like. Oh well till next chapter. Just wanted to point that out. Otherwise lovin it!

Maybe intentional but in this latest chapter, she said" My son has had....". present and past tense. I know something has happened to him but am not sure whether he is dead or alive. Could be in a coma, hmmm... but he was in pain till present sounds like. Oh well till next chapter. Just wanted to point that out. Otherwise lovin it!

keep up the good work

wow i really like this story it has that wierd but good beginning

The story is getting more interesting and I like where it's headed. Please update and often. I think in your next chapter, Kags and Sess should have a heart to heart confession time, preferrably alone in a nice quiet setting with no interruptions and then let the 'baby mama drama' begin at this point. Just a suggestion..it's your story!

I'll be waiting with bated breath. :)

Great job...keep up it going.

Hey, great story, I'm really not into AU's but I really like this one. But it mentioned a couple of times that Kagome had a kid, where is he/she?

I like the way you're writing this. It is an excellent beginning, and I can hardly wait for more.

GOOD

I mentioned that you should get a beta and I am also listed as a beta on this site. If you want me to be your beta reader I would like to do it.

I REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVED IT.Now time for another one.

haha, your story is excellent!
cant wait till the next chapter =]

You have a good story, but I suggest that you invest in a beta-reader.

YOU KNOW I'M GETTING LIITLE BIT IMPATIENT FOR THE PLOT TO ADVANCE... GOOD STORY

Finally a man who knows how to get off of his high horse and applogize (sp?) So now what comes next??? And is the kid shippo hers or was her's named shippo and what happened to him.

ohhhhhh Shes evil.........I hope there will be more Sesshy bashing in this story.....keep up the good work

I wanted to cry when I found out that her left her with child even though he didn't know and that she losses that kid when he's like 6 that's so sad. I want to know how he'll react to finding out bet he considers himself a jerk then. well till next time.

hugs and puppies

I AM SO HAPPY U UPDATED VERY QUICKLY!!!!! HOWEVER I'M LED TO BELIeVE THAT U KILLED THEIR SON!! i guess it does enhance the plot but..... i justhope u get her pregnant with his very soon

I like your story and would like to continue to read more, so please update often as time allows.

Great job so far :)

nice chapter.....Hope the rest of you story is as good as the first 2 chapters of your story...........

Can you add me to your mailing list??

Dreamer69@Sailormoon.com

thank you

What happened to her baby?Humm cant wait for next chapter.

great stoey cant wait to read more :)

FLAMESSSSSSSSSSS for your marshmellows shall not come from me. LOL. Though seriously I did like that. So please update. PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

I cant wait till your next chapter

LOVING IT SO FAR!

i love this story please update soon

I like where your going with this so far. You're right, it is different, but a refreshing different.

Very interesting. I wonder what will happen when Kagome meets with Sesshomaru to get to know Rin. Update soon!

This story sounds really good and I can't wait to read more so I hope you update as soon as you can.

ok to tell the truth i normale don't read storys form the very start b/c it seems to take for ever for the next ch to show up. hope that won't be the case with this. any who this sounds like a every good story and i can't wait for more! and if you do Kag as a strong woman it would make me happy. i've been seeing a lot of fanfics that have her looking more helpless than ever. in short i can't stand it when she's falling all over Sesshy after just one kiss. i get very invalved in the storys i read. so anyways, after all that, i really liked this ch and i can't wait for more!
KUDOS TO YOU! on the ch!
Leira ^.~
P.S. if you have a mailing list for the story i would love to be on it! my e-mail is FrookyLeira@aol.com

(>~-~)> awesome story!!! very diffrent and i love it so update Soon!(~-~)

I like it, i cant wait to read the next chapter. And your right, it is different from a lot of the other stories.

I love this, just wished it would have been longer. You should definately update soon :] I really can't wait to see the next chapter. Thanks.