You are meditative by nature...that is not often found and you have a wonderful gift for the descriptive. Never ever belittle your own voice, there is a place for all. I enjoyed. Please carry on.

I love this so far, you should definately continue. You seem to have a touch at writing, I've really lost my touch, honestly. Looking back at my old work, I truly fail at writing. You should contact me, I think I understand what you're talking about at the end :[