Reviews for To Make Her Mine by decentofthemoon
Tess- Sat 17 Nov 2007
Megan Consoer- Thu 06 Sep 2007
midnighthaven- Tue 21 Aug 2007
Catherine- Tue 14 Aug 2007
midnighthaven- Fri 10 Aug 2007
marquishawright- Sun 29 Jul 2007
Megan Consoer- Tue 10 Jul 2007
toni- Sat 07 Jul 2007
Fortunesque- Sat 07 Jul 2007
I learned lemons from reading many of them. My advice would be to read lemons and pick out ideas you like and scrap the ones you don't (ex: I hate it when people say Sesshoumaru 'howled' his release... it's so stupid and cliche).
Your characterization of Sesshoumaru in this fic makes him sound like a seducing serpant. I don't know if that's your intention, but I like the kinda' sleezy factor.
Leafeknight7- Sat 07 Jul 2007
DreamingPisces- Sat 07 Jul 2007
whiteinu1- Sat 07 Jul 2007
al- Sat 07 Jul 2007
good luck with the next chapter.
i'll check it out,the more you write.
kudos to your beta.they're doing a good job.
Slm_candle- Fri 06 Jul 2007
Chaos_Queen77- Fri 06 Jul 2007
Chaos
Kagomes_Inner_Beast- Fri 06 Jul 2007
K_I_B
elvira- Fri 06 Jul 2007
Akina- Fri 06 Jul 2007