I started reading this story and couldn't stop. While you kept Sesshoumaru in character, you had him out of character at the same time which is a hard feat in it's self.

I completely enjoyed this story. Not too many with this many chapters can hold my attention for a long enough time to finish but this one did.

I look forwards to reading more of your work and I love how you were able to keep the sex scene to the very end. I found myself crying every now and then with some of the circumstances in the story.

However, I did notice one small name issue.

In the chapter where Kagome wakes up in Sesshoumaru's house after she ate the rum cake, you called the girl Rin for the paragraph, however when you said Rin left, you gave a diffrent name. I don't know if that was Rin's last name or not but you didn't mention it before.

Just wanted you to know and I love this story, it's one I can re read over and over again and not get bored.

Happy Writing
Reeks

heya
that story was amazing.
its rare for a stroy to make me cry...that 1 did.
it was beautifuly crafted
better than anything i know how to write.
i pretty much got addicted and have spent the last 5 hours reading that....lol

well man your goos lol please keep writing lol.
Sharilynn

Ur Alive!!! Yay! That Was A Cute Ending It Was Short. Sweet. To The Point. Well Of Course I'll Be On The Look Out For More Of Ur Stories I Mean This Is Me We're Talkin About ... Love Ya Hunny!

I loved dis whole story n i cant wait until i can read more of ur work it wuz i wonder will dere b a sequel n if so u can count me 2 read

Awesome. Can't wait to read the final chapter.

Lol ... Oh I Loved The New Chapter ... More Lemony Goodness ... So Next Chapter Is The End ... Awwww I'm So Going To Miss This Story!!!

AAW!!!! That was so cute. More, like and ending! Please *begs on knees***

chaos

AWWW ME LOVE!!! ME LOVE!!! It Was So Worth The Wait ... Dont Take As Long On The Next Chapter Honey!!!

man it was an awesome chapter. i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!
love liz

love your story its so sad but romantic but sad i love this story its so creative and beautiful i can't wait to find out what happens next update soon thanks your biggest fan Inuyashalover161

love your story its so sad but romantic but sad i love this story its so creative and beautiful i can't wait to find out what happens next update soon thanks your biggest fan Inuyashalover161

Nooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!! Thats so unfair I was really getting into that chapter please please please update soon.

I hate you. I was soo looking forward to it and I was soo exited and then it stoped I wanted to cry. ~sniffles~ maybe I will. Well post soon ~sings~ so I can read lemon, lemon, lemon so I can read your lemon yeah yeah yeah. LOL sorry. post soon.

hugs and puppies

So I'm Officially Mad At U!!! How Could U Do That To ME!!! Me Of All People ... Didn't We Just Have A Conversation About The Damn Lemon Like Yesterday Night ... Goshness This Sucks ... U Betta Update Soon Honey Or There Will Be Mucho Problems!!!

about time Kagome realizes her stupid mistakes!!!!!!!

That Chapter Depressed me a bit. Poor Sesshomaru. I could cry for him. But i won't. Please post the next chapter and hopefully it will start to fix the heart ache in the story.

Chaos

I'm Sorri But Kagome Should Get Jap Slapped On A Real Serious Tip ... Grrr ... Sesshomaru, Kikyo, Sango Somebodi Needs To Find Her And STRANGLE HER TO DEATH!!! Hm Never Mind I'll Do It ... Anyways Loving The New Chapter, Hmmm A Lemon Can't Wait!

Quickly get them together dont let sess die of broken heart.!!!!

OMG!!! I LOVE UR STORY!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE!! PLEASE!!!!

I love the chapter. I can't wait to read more. I was so moved by it. Please update really really soon.

love your story its a bit sad but in a romantic good way besides making up is alot better after a fight well i hope you update soon i really love your story i hope kagome and sesshomaru both find some happiness at the end its a very romantic and emotional story please update soon can't wait to find out what happens next i cried alot lol well update soon ill be waiting thanks Inuyashalover161

YOU cried I balled like baby. oh well kagome hopfully will come back in time and we all know she loves him. well post soon.

hugs and puppies

YOU cried I balled like baby. oh well kagome hopfully will come back in time and we all know she loves him. well post soon.

hugs and puppies

more the story is real good and i cry on this chapter and can not wait for the next chapter of the story and see if kagome come back to him.. up date soon. love the story.

OMG!!! I SWEAR TO GOD THAT THIS IS MY FAVE STORY EVER!!! IT MAKES ME CRY AND IT MAKES ME JUMP FOR JOY AND EVERYTHING. PLZ HURRY AND FINISH
LIZ

I THOUGHT THAT SESSHOU NEEDED A MATE VERY SOON?? OR the fight with naruku prevents that?? u r drawing out the story!!!!!!!!!!!

YOU SUCK!!! YOU SUCK SOO HARD!!! HOW ARE YOU GOING TO DO THAT ... U MAKE SESSHOMARU CRY ... ARE YOU SERIOUS!!! DAMNIT MADDIE ... U BETTER UPDATE SOON!!! Lol ... You Know I Love U Mucho!

OH poor sesshoumaru and kagome I cried they went through so much and know this happens. well i hope she see's the light aka love for sesshoumaru soon..

hugs and puppies

wow...i really like ur story. i mean i like almost cried everytime kagome did. it was a very good story and i hope that u finish it soon so i can read the rest.
-liz

Awww Ur Lovely Fans Love U Too!!! Lol ... Kagome Needs To Stop With These Damn Episodes ... I'm Tired Of Them ... Damnit! Update Soon Maddie!

hurry and update i cant wait to see whats next.

Kinda of short but i loved it update again soon this story is really good.

Chaos

Lol ... How Do U Do That?! Jus All Loving And Then Sesshomaru Die! Thats Awesome!

WOW.
*Keels over backwards, grabbing chest*
* Feet twitch in Morose code:*
PLEASE UPDATE SOON - STOP. LIKED YOUR CHAPTERS - STOP. AFTER YOU UPDATE PLEASE SEND FOR AN AMBULANCE - STOP.

oh please huury up and update! i love this story

I really like this story please post the next chapter soon i would love to see what Kikyo has planned for Sess and Kagome.

Chaos

I Like The New Chapter ... Kagome Better Be Careful When She Goes To That Wedding! Update Soon Pwease!

i love the story and can not wait for the next chapter of the story and see what she have in mind for kagome sesshumare. good luck/

Me Love! Go Kikyo!

Those chapters had my heart hurting!! I had literarly pause half way through the chapters to make sure my heart hadn't just K.O!! That was so good!! Update soon!!

I love the chapter. OMG!!! I'm about to cry right now. I have to admit so far this is my favorite chapter. It send chills through my heart. I can't wait to read your next chapter. Please update really soon.

Goshness ... The Emotions ... I Felt Like Cryin For Both Kagome And Sesshomaru ... Damn Naraku And Kagura!!! This Is Sad Ur Story Has Made Me Dislike One Of Mi Favorite Characters!

Hey Gem_fluffs...

I had just finished reading your fanfiction and man, I'm soooo inlove with your fic!!!! I was soooo into it that when I got onto the last chapter, I was pissed as hell...Shoot, I loved it sooooo much I even told all my friends about your fanfic. I strongly suggest that you should continue writing this fic and finish it!!! Please, do finish it!!! I'm really desperate right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If I was a judge in some fanfic contest...I'd nominate you for BEST OVERALL FANFIC!!!!! Damn straight I would!!!!! But please, I beg of you to please...continue with this fic and finish it!!!!!!!!!

hwo is he? I think it would be fun to make kogome date a girl and say she has no faith in men for a while.
I love this story.
PS: I was just making a sugestion you don`t have to.

hwo is he? I think it would be fun to make kogome date a girl and say she has no faith in men for a while.
I love this story.
PS: I was just making a sugestion you don`t have to.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT RAT BASTERD!! IF I COULD GET MY HANDS ON HIM.....
If you have one shread of human decency, you WILL update before the day is through.
... please?

Damn Sesshomaru!!! Damn Kagura!!! Damn Naraku!!! Damnit All To Hell ... Cant Wait To See Whats Going To Happen Next!

Wow...like totally WOW! I love this story. It's absolutely wonderful. Please update soon. ^_^Ja ne!

Totally addicted!! 0.0 Update soon!!

more please...

The last chapter was great! Although I was hoping for a little more action between out favorite couple. Either way, I cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter!

Lol Poor Kagome And Sesshomaru ... He's Scared ... AWWWWWW ... Update Soon Chika ... Muah!

Lol ... Good Chapter ... It Was All Emotional And Teary-Eyed ... Hmmm Soo Nu Nu{LOL} Has A Few Tricks Left ... Great More Problems When Things Are Just Gettin Good ... Damnit Nu Nu!

yes that was a good chapter and i can not wait for more and see what naklu have to them is he going to try to take kagome from sesshumaur i can not wait for more. up date soon. love a

I LIke That Chapter It Is Good ... Poor Inuyasha And Ummm Kagome Might Wanna Tell Sesshomaru About Naraku If She Values Her Health!

The last chapter was great, but a little short. I can't wait to see what happens next between sess and kags.
Not to mention, sesshoumaru's reaction to narku is going to be interesting.
Keep up the wonderful writing!

love the story and can not wait for more . up date soon and what is naku going to do to kagome. up date soon.

Okay I'm Going To Tell U The Best Way I Can ... U SUCK!!! U SUCK A WHOLE LOT!!! HOW ARE YOU JUST GOING TO END IT THAT WAY!!! GOSHNESS ... I WANT MORE!!! UPDATE SOON!!! Lol ... I'm Soo Slow ... Like The New Chapters!

this was good really got into it. if it continues let me know.

Your story kicks major ass!!!! I haven't read such a good sess/kag story in so long!

I have to say that i love this fanfiction!

Its wonderful, and i cant wait for your next update. keep up the great writing!

Wow!!!! I can't wait your story is very interesting, Please update soon!!!

I just read all of your story this morning & I really like it. I was really suprised when Naraku and Kagura showed up for the wedding, they were the last people I expected and I usually dont get suprised by stories I end up guessing so good job & I cant wait for the next chap.

Lol ... Me Likes ... Sesshomaru Was Moving Rather Fast ... Poor Kagome She Is Jus So Confuzed!

love the story please write more :)

D;!!!!! update please please -sniffles- we readers/reveiwers love youuu

I Must Say That I Am Soo Happy That You Realli Like Me ... You Realli Realli Like Me ... LOL! Well I Like The Chapter ... Hmm Surprise Surprise Naraku Is Here ... I Wonder How Kikyo And Inuyasha Know Him ... Anyways I Would Realli Like It If We Became Friends So E-mail Me @ ilovemuzic09@yahoo.com Or Add Me On Myspace at Myspace.com/Texas_Babyboo ... Gosh Ur Thanks You's Have Realli Brighten Up My Day And The Rest Of My Week ... I Am Honored! LOL ... Goshness ...

This Was A Good Chapter ... I Wonder Were Sesshomaru Is And Who Inuyasha's Special Friend Is ... Well Please Update Soon Okay!

Good Chapter ... Short But Good Update Soon ... Hmmm I Wonder Who This Friend Of Inuyasha's Could Be ...

Damnit I Was Looking For Another Chapter! I Wanna Know What Happens Next! Does Sesshomaru Show Up? Does Kagome Tell Inuyasha About Sesshomaru? Damnit I Wanna Know UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

This is a lovely story. I like the ways that you have utilized canon elements, like Inuyasha and Kagome meeting under the Goshinboku.

I wonder if we shall ever find out what happened to the rest of Sesshoumaru's family?

And I love how tongue-in-cheek Sesshoumaru is:).

As for the fight, Kagome should have realized that she wasn't just asking Sesshoumaru to come to Tokyo. She was asking him to go to his own brother's wedding - the brother that he had left. Talk about impending drama. Not to mention that if Sesshoumaru returned, the people that I think came after the family would return for Sesshoumaru.

Hmmm... update soon:)!

ohhhh i love it!~ i cant believe you don't have more reviews. please please write more!~ ^.^

Hey, this is really good, update soon plz!! Also what does Whuit mean in French? I looked it up everywhere and I wanted to know what it meant before I broke down and emailed my french teacher!! I know all the rest of it though, Au Revoir!!

Much better! Thanks!

"All rise for the Honorable Judge Sweet_Dark_Silence," Stares down at Gem_fluffs and screams, "Guilty, guilty, guilty!"
Her cry is echoed by a jury of various Inuyasha castmembers.
Sweet_Dark_Silence: "I hereby sentence you to be chained to your computer until this story is finished."
*bangs gavel*
*Gem_fluffs is draged away*
...
...
...
lol
great story! PLEASE update soon!!

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! Favourite story. Nice cliffie too.

omgsssssssssssssssh update plzzzzzzzzzzzz soon soon soon hurry or i'll ,,,i'll ,,,i'll kill u! muahahaha plz!!

Pretty good for a begining! It makes me want to read more... very interesting...

I wonder though, you didn't put anything about how Kikyo reacted to the incident?....just curious! Write more soon!