WOW! This is such a great start to sequel to this story. You set-up this story up very well and I can't wait to read the journey you will take us on through the journels of Kagome's.
Violetcarson- Sun 01 Jul 2007
O...M...G. I'm actually crying. I started crying when I figured out that Kagome and Fluffy were dead, and I'm still crying. Waaaa!!!!!!!! Well, if it is depressing, I like it already. I just hope that you make the actual story of how the youkai came back (which is the story I assume you are telling) really long, so they have plenty of time to live. Either that, or bring them back which would RULE!!!!!! I mean, the don't have to be alive, but if they could somehow talk to them, I think it would be really cool, and sweet, and make a really nice ending. But hey! I'm just a fan, so I don't get a say in the matter. Keep writing, and good luck on your novel, if you get it published, I'll buy it!!!!!
youkaihime- Sat 30 Jun 2007
Wow, great start. I can't wait until the next chapter, I know it won't be for a while but I'm anticipating the update.
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