| awsome story cant wate for the next chapter
savewolf the angel of death- Wed 31 Oct 2007
love the story so far please write more nd please make it so that the nexy chater theres a lemon and more lemosn after that oh and please write more i just love this story its great
You have an interesting story here but like you said your grammar and spelling needs help.
I would like to see where this story goes and will be looking for all future updates. I hope you have the chance to finish. There was a part in this story (forgot the chapter) but after Kags finish telling Yasha off about Kikyo, Yasha had Kuro go look for Kikyo and report back to him about here current where abouts...what was that all about because you never finsihed that part of the storyline up?
Well anyway, keep plugging along and good luck with your school and job. Education is number one priority.
*hugs and smiles*
| I want to see the end!!!!
elvira- Thu 06 Sep 2007
| that was sad!!.more chapters please!!
K,T,M- Fri 10 Aug 2007
| dat was great u HAVE to update soon o and is koga and da others going to be alive i think they should be
elvira- Thu 09 Aug 2007
| this was an awsome chapter!!..more chapters pleasE!!
Solaira- Wed 08 Aug 2007
| Awesome chapter, I really enjoyed it. I think Sesshoumaru should join Kagome and InuYasha on their search for Kouga and his little followers, that way Sess and Inu would have a chance to LEARN from each other. I see so many conflicts here. lol. Hope to see an update soon.
| It matters not the length of the chapter but the quality, I find I am entranced with this story. Well done...looking foward to more.
swtdrm01- Mon 23 Jul 2007
| Please let them be alive. Kagome deserves some on-going happiness instead of on-going pain.
evelyn- Mon 23 Jul 2007
I really enjoy this story and I think kogua and comrads should live.
elvira- Tue 17 Jul 2007
| wow..this is good...please more chapters
kirsten_aka_yukia- Tue 10 Jul 2007
that was so beautiful! i am such a marshmallow for this kind of thing i almost started crying!YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
c ya-yukia
Slm_candle- Tue 10 Jul 2007
| Cool but don't rush this story and don't make it too slow either and don't let it end too fast. I want another at least 10 chappies outta you and not on other stories PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ I beg of thee. lol UPDATE
elvira- Tue 10 Jul 2007
| this chapter is awsome!!1more chapters please!!
Megan Consoer- Tue 10 Jul 2007
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
elvira- Thu 05 Jul 2007
| more chapters please!!!this is soo..good..one ?...who told her to tell her friends how she feels?...
Solaira- Thu 05 Jul 2007
| Great chapter. Inuyashas maturation was excellent, very well written. I loved seeing him open up and become a man. Kagome and Sesshomaru's relationship is coming along very nicely. I like that you are taking it slowly with them, makes it more believable. It is especially nice to see Sesshomaru acting like an actual brother to Inuyasha. I have two older half brothers and I hate it when someone calls them my "half brothers", to me they are my "true brother" whether we share only one parent or not, because blood is blood, no matter how much you would like to kill them on occation.
| Leomon plz!!!!
elvira- Sat 30 Jun 2007
| so awsome!!...this chapters was cool..and sesshy finally got to be a big brother?..so cool...more chapters please!!
elvira- Sat 30 Jun 2007
| this was awsome!!!more please!!!...
Dante- Fri 29 Jun 2007
| hay i thought that was great but you do need to work a little bit more on your spelling.well I still thought it was great and please update quick.
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