Well I can defiantly tell you that the description caught me.I like this.^_^Ja ne!
serasvictoria666- Fri 06 Jul 2007
So there's more?! Yay!
I really liked this second chapter. The begining was kinda funny, them having drunk sex. But the whole thing was still kinda hot. Me like!
Slm_candle- Fri 06 Jul 2007
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW That was sad and somewhat pitiful on their parts./ Lets have some more rough things. lol NO more sadness there's far too much in the world as is.
elvira- Fri 06 Jul 2007
how can they forget them!!...they helped kill nuraku off...well at least them helped each other...it was awsome!!....more please!!
Kai- Fri 06 Jul 2007
I happen to love your stories, if it makes you feel any better. It's good to have a place when you need to write some one-shots. No harm there. Keep on writing. People will catch on, I know it. :D
Ok Usually I Don't Like Fics w. a Lot of Sex In Them But When I Saw It Was About Rape I Was Like Eh....Maybe I'll Try It Once and I FRICKEN LUVED IT!!!! PLEASE Try 2 Turn It Into a Story Not Just a 1-Shot. It's So0o0 Good!! Even If U Don't It Was Still AMAZING. AMG I Just LOVE U! ^_^
Peace, Luv, and AMAZING Sex Scenes,
Kagome-Chan
Nikcole Jones- Tue 26 Jun 2007
Dude!!! This ficci was like major sweetness to da max!!! one of the best i've eva read;actually to be quite honest. The brutal sexaliciousness was awesome.
Megan Consoer- Tue 26 Jun 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
( ~ ' . ' ~ )- Tue 26 Jun 2007
awwww, i really think there should be a sequel :3 but thats up to you i suppose (but it would be nice)
what a freak!!!
wow kagome...just wow....
i really enjoyed this fic!
Mitsubaki- Sun 24 Jun 2007
OMG this wahz fawkin amazinggggg
LIKE OMG
YOH why is this only a one shot it could be sooo much more bah AMAZING work
I enjoyed that lol. I suppose it's because my mind is twisted like that lol. I hope to read more of your writing!
-KB
Slm_Candle- Sun 24 Jun 2007
OMG!!!!!!!!!! that was HOTTT i loved it. i guess i'm sorta like kaggies
elvira- Sun 24 Jun 2007
wow....this bitch is crazy!!!...but also i can see way..anyways...who wouldnt want to fuck with him...but love this ....anywayz...keep up the good work...
WOW is all i can say that was WOW i did enjoy it it was WOW
Define-Naughty- Sun 24 Jun 2007
WOW!! I love it plz update
candy- Sun 24 Jun 2007
loved it, your amazing.......one question though, did you get the "choke me" bit from the movie Pool Hall Junkies, cause there was a funny scene where a girl said that. Good movie I highly recomend it
ger- Sat 23 Jun 2007
WAHT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK!
THAT WAS THAT WAS GOLD AND DONT YOU FORGET IT!!!!!!! that was the best fanfic I have ever read and if all your storys are as good as this then I am your new number one fan!!!!!^_~
serasvictoria666- Sat 23 Jun 2007
gotta admit, I liked it. I'm kinda sad it's only a one-shot. Any chance of adding more? Even if you don't, it's very good like it is.
Vin- Sat 23 Jun 2007
Hmmm, surprisingly good, considering the fact that I'm not really into the whole brutal rape thing, but hey, whatever works, ne? Keep it up! ",
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