I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

ok it moves quick and i like it!!! More please!!

hey yeah Fluffy again so um update when exactly? dont mean to burden u or anything but yeah so upadte plz

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

loved the lemon!!!!! keep it up!!!!!!!! ^_^

PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!!^_^

P.S. more lemons =)

Hey, I love your story, It`s just so interesting. keep writing OK. bye

Hey I like your story write more so I have something to read.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

yeah i like it its friggin awsome! and um lemons are cool.

hey its great but wat up wit the hentai sessho i mean its good but different ...thanx ^_^ pleze update

Hey that's good but ere is spelled heir. and there are a lot more mistakes.

Its a good story...but its spelt heir not ere. Sorry but that was bugging me.

hmm I likey the story but maybe you need to correct your errors in spelling and grammar other than that please make it longer please consider this I am awaiting the next chapter!!

K_I_B

Hey, this is a very interesting story! If written correctly, it could reach TOTAL FABULOUSNESS!
The only things are the spelling/grammar. There are quite a few spelling errors, and in my opinion, the first chapter could do with a little less '...'
Don't let that discourage you, though! I'm not saying this to be mean. I just want to help you. I hope you update soon!