i like it keep it going, im curious to see whats keeping him, knowing how much we all know he loves rin

I hope that you will get to update soon. Your story is off to a good start.

This fic seems good so far. i can't wait to read more

This fic seems good so far. i can't wait to read more

This fic seems good so far. i can't wait to read more

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

interstng pls... update soon.....

i cant wait til you come back and write another chapter!!
you write very well for this being your first fic.

This story was well written and it has a very original plot. I think that it would be a shame if you were to end it here, so please continue, thank you.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

WOW.. it IS pretty good.. i'm liking the story so far, very different and unique from other stories i've read so far for sure. keep up the good work! and.. update ASAP! onegai shimasu!

WOW.. it IS pretty good.. i'm liking the story so far, very different and unique from other stories i've read so far for sure. keep up the good work! and.. update ASAP! onegai shimasu!

Oh no! Today is the 16th!!! Well I liked the story alot so I hope when you get a chance you update it.

GAH! You had to end it there! lol but i realy like this! I haven't heard of a plot like this and i really like where it's going! please update soon! i love it!

omg! what's going to happen?

o.0 pretty damn good.

im excited for the next chappy!

Love your story and can't wait to read more so I hope you udpate asap please.

I love it. I wanna find out what happened to him...why he hasn't picked rin up yet. Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!! >.