This story sounds really good so far. Glad you updated to another chapter. I'm really interested in finding out why Kagome was found in the trash with only bandages covering her. Update soon^_^

Umh, I didn't read the manga Chii and I only watch the 1st eps of the anime so I won't comment on how similar or different your story is to those. I really like this story, it's slow and peaceful, I guess. However, there is one problem: nee chan means sis, nii chan means bro. Just thought that you would like to know

i love it i relly love it and i relly hope that u finesh it

it is very interesting.

i am curious, english is not your native language is it?

thank you,
ginny

Nnnnnnnnnnooooooooo! You wouldn't be that cruel, would you?
*looks with big puppy eyes*
I like it, has a few grammar errors though.

sounds like it could be a good story so far!... but your english is a little fractured so you could ready use a beta. it wouls make the story much better ^-^

this is a giid start for ur story your only missing the next chapter :) so update asap :)

It was ok, but you put way to many commas where the periods should have been. Other than that, it was ok.

It was ok, but you put way to many commas where the periods should have been. Other than that, it was ok.

Great job on your first chapter but there were a few spelling mistakes.
Keep going b/c the story is good.

it's awesome plz update

it's awesome plz update

it's awesome plz update

it's awesome plz update

dude.. I love it. it might be cuz I love chobits tho... oh well can't wait for the next chapter. does move quick tho