| this is wonderful! i love this you should continue! i will be expecting another chapter!!
Nokiatwinsis- Tue 10 Jul 2007
| I agree, that better be a 'fin' to the first chapter. I need at least 49 more chapters till I'm satisfied! Better get to work with updating!
luna- Sat 09 Jun 2007
| ok what do you mean FIN? that better be fin tot hat chapter and not the story. cause im already hooked and hope to see more chapters.
Solaira- Fri 08 Jun 2007
| Excellent first chapter. This is such an intriguing story and has already captured my full attention. I look forward to reading more of this story.
cala- Fri 08 Jun 2007
| I love it, the characters are fully developed and you actually made Kagome something other than a sobbing mass of angsty emotions.
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