I love it! I love it love it love it love it love it ! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really like the ways Sesshoumaru is and that he's not the exc. of some company-
please update! i love your story- if you hadn't guessed.
plz update--
There are only a few stories i really like.
-G.G,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Koiishi_Beloved- Wed 21 Nov 2007
MAN! It took me forever to catch up on the last four chapters. It was worth reading though, of course! ^___^
-KB
arielle langley- Mon 19 Nov 2007
THank u so much for updating! Boy has it been awhile i thought u forgot about us! Keep up the good work n update soon please thanks
Lilith-sama, you've outdone yourself once more. Lol, Kagome is going to be good now hu? That's funny. Update again soon. ^_^Ja ne!
frowzhibitt- Tue 17 Jul 2007
i like this story so far. its very nice, keep up the good work!
Tsukiko~*heart*- Fri 13 Jul 2007
Are they like pure candy, or pure crack? xD Anyways, I love you. I really do. >. You're writing is so wonderful! -takes a deep vreath- Geh, must stay calm..
Tana-san- Thu 05 Jul 2007
I only just finished the first fic this past week. I was really impressed that you were able to write a fic in the first person and actually keep it that way. I'm not a fan of first person fics because most cannot keep the story from straying between perspectives. One can actually feel as though they are living this through Kagome's eyes. I can see why it was nominated for awards. I'm enjoying the way you are portraying the characters. This isn't the Feudal Era and there are no demons to make me feel you should keep them in total original character. I like Naraku alot. He's a moocher and a freeloader but he truly loves his sister enough to protect her and take care of her. InuYasha's not a bad guy...thank you. It is getting quite repitious I agree. When we're young, we're not so aware of what our feelings and actions will have in the long run. Plus, many males allow their sexual urges to lead them...he damaged Kagome psychologically for many years as did Kikyo but Kikyo was her sister and that's an entirely different kind of hurt to fix. Especially because Kikyo did it to Kagome for most of their young life. Kikyo had that broken nose coming to her. Not that it was right but it was understandable and also self defense. Sesshoumaru is perfect just the way you are portraying him. He is her ying to his yang. Their personalities bounce off of each other nicely. He still has his edge and he's dominating without degrading her spirit. I like how he handles her moods and emotions without making a major fight for dominance everytime but I do agree that one can only take so much and given a push at the wrong time can lead to disaster...I am awaiting a fallout. No man can always keep his temper in check. Kagome may not like it but she needs to get a clue that Sesshoumaru may indeed love her deeply but he was a well known yakuza member for a reason. You aren't making him too sappy. He is a man that's finally gotten to be happy, he's in love, he's getting the kind of family he dreamed of and doing the work that he dreamed of, in peace. It took a long time, alot of money and planning but he freed not only himself but his brother from a life that neither asked to be brought into. They could only get away from that for so long if their family is as powerful as you lead us to believe and you made us believe that their father was not one to toy with. He must be really ticked off that his number one son whom he was grooming to take over left and was able to stay hidden for so long or maybe was Daddy waiting to catch both sons together? Yes, I like the way your handling your fic. Very well done...many possibilities for twists and turns both happy or sad. And though I have come across some of the errors you speak of, I tend to let them slip by as it doesn't seem to me to be so nitpicky if it's not too distracting from the story then why make you go back to fix it...but that's me. I do have a blooper for you though...in the breakfast scene Sess gave Kagome coffee and then scolded her for drinking too much caffeine and took it, giving her a much smaller cup. He should have thought about that before handing her the first cup and caffeine addiction is not an inherited trait just because mom consumed it while pregnant. It is just better for the child's developement if the consumption is reduced to two cups per day preferably less to none. A girl needs her vices in some amount. Sorry this is so long but I tend to ramble when I get involved with a fic. Great, great job! Jen
RedRoseRuby- Wed 04 Jul 2007
yah thank you sooooo goooodddddd!!!!!!!!!! i love how u broke her nose the girl had it coming! please update soon
RedRoseRuby
I was thrilled to see that you decided to do a second story. I loved the first one, and this one is turning out to be just as good, if not better!
Kagome Did Good! Go Her! Poor Sesshomaru Has A Mad Woman On His Hands ... Well Update Soon ... Me Loved The New Chapter!
RedRoseRuby- Thu 28 Jun 2007
yah new chapter love it. god i love the laxitives. you should have placed it in there the end results are halarious. Trust me the choco. lax work the best in any cookie. lol anyway thanks for the babe's age i understand now.
keep posting
RedRoseRuby
luna- Tue 26 Jun 2007
I love this story its just soo funny especially about the part with the getting away with murder.
darkmoondarklight- Mon 25 Jun 2007
Ahhhhhh...laxatives..you know there was this one time at school when the seniors put laxatives in cookies and gave them to the freshmen (don't try this at home kids) of course at the time I was a Junior so I just had to help...ahhh the memories... Anywho I love your story!!!! It makes me chuckle...
I was so excited when you updated! -claps happily- Great job as always! ^__^
-KB
Sesshoumaru's Fiend- Mon 25 Jun 2007
Hello!!
Great chapter! Kagome is so evil. I was grinning wildly while reading it. She gets away with everything!! I wish I could. Pssht.
Any way, excellent job and keep up the fan-freaking-tastic work!!
Ja!
--Ashley
Man this chapter cracked me up. It just added to my really good mood. I like nice Yasha...Update again soon kay? ^_^Ja ne!!
RedRoseRuby- Fri 22 Jun 2007
wow i love it but you confused me on the age of the babe. is he two or one. at the begining it seemed as you said two but then later on you said that he was one? i might be wrong but thats ok. anyway im begging you please update your story. have fun
RedRoseRuby
luna- Fri 22 Jun 2007
ok how many years do sess and kags have together? since the baby is 2 does that mean 2 yaers right or has there been some weird time lood thing going on since i get the feeling that more yrs than that have passed.
anonnie mouse- Thu 21 Jun 2007
uh-oh Kag had too much coffee!
wonderful chap except you got the bro and sis-in-law part wrong....Kikyo isn't Kags sis-in-law
here's the messed up part [“Your brother and sister-in-law. Something has happened and they must come here for safety,†he mumbled, despair in his voice. I began to tremble.]
other than that it was wonderful!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
Lol ... Poor Rin She Is Scared Of Her Adoptive Mother ... Thats A Little Sad ... So Kikyo And Inu Are Coming This Should Be Quite Interesting ... Cant Wait To See Whats Going To Happen Next ... Update Soon Pwease!
Shana- Wed 20 Jun 2007
I luv the word arse to:P update soon
sesshous_girl- Sun 10 Jun 2007
Love it and loved your other story. Can't wait for more chapters.
nene- Sat 09 Jun 2007
i luv it
Suicide- Fri 08 Jun 2007
I'm so happy that there's a sequel! I'm loving it already. ^^
twiknham- Fri 08 Jun 2007
I enjoyed Love in a Library, but I'm a horrible lurker and don't review often. You're off to a great start here!
It's interesting to see your use of "all right" and "alright." It's correct, but says a lot about where you hail from.
bluemoon_175- Fri 08 Jun 2007
Loved your story "Love in a Library", and can't wait to read what all happens in the sequel. So I hope you keep up the good work, and update asap please.
luna- Fri 08 Jun 2007
oo are you going to actually bring sesshomarus father into this story and make him, make and aperance?
HuntressForLove- Fri 08 Jun 2007
really good starting, it would be pretty interesting if Kagome could meet sesshomaru's father. She sounds as if she hates him before meeting him, so if they had met and on different terms would she have hated him?
I loved the first chapter. I hope to read more really soon. I read the fanfic before this sequel and I loved that one just as much! Great job and good luck! ^_^
-River
Me Love ... Im Soooo Happy U Came Back With A Part Two ... I Think Inuyasha And Kikyo Should Make An Appearance Since They Are Livin In America Too And We Need To Do Somethin About Maru's Father In Japan I Think Kagome Should Be Able To Go Back And Live There With Her Family If She Chooses ... Awww And Rin Has A New Boyfriend Kinda Thing ...
laura- Fri 08 Jun 2007
I love the fact that you are writing a new Love in a Library story. The first one was great and I have no doubt that this one won't be as good. I also understand the whole pairings issue. If people didn't like your story then they shouldn't read it. I look forward to the rest of your story. Later!
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