O: Lol, you're insane when it comes to epilogues. I got confuzzled a bit here and there with your craziness xD Awesome -b

6/5

O: Lol, you're insane when it comes to epilogues. I got confuzzled a bit here and there with your craziness xD Awesome -b

6/5

you know what you shoulda done when Kagome had to drag the fat fluffy around? O: -its true though, his fluffy is HUUUGGEEE.. to me that is :] The bigger, the more fluffier~! O: - she shoulda dragged him through some garbage or something! xD

Great start, I haven't finished reading yet but I just wanted to suggest that you get rid of all the authors notes that you placed in the first chapter. They are unnecissary and annoying. If you want to put the disclaimers in, I suggest doing it at the top. And if you say that the characters say something jokingly there is no point in having an authors note to say that they are joking. Sorry, I don't want to seem like I'm flaming you The story is really good so far. I just wanted to offer some friendly advice. ^_^

Absolutely loved the karaoke. Though I had a hard time picturing Sesshoumaru singing milkshake, I could definitely remember when Peter Griffin did. (family guy, in case you don't watch it) And Aqua! I actually have that CD. Definitely a great duet for the very interesting couple!

You made me laugh my ass off. Ch. 2, the fart during the kiss. You and I share the same sense of humor. absolutely hilarious! And then Chapter 3 with the 'bloody' tampon, I... I don't even know where to start with that. Juvenile humor at it's best! You'll be hearing from me again since I'm not even done w/ Ch 3 yet.
Christina

omfg tat fukin funy you r the devil twin sister you r evil and you rule at makin awesome story please make another one

funny. i really enjoyed it. but the a/ns in the middle of the story were distracting. and i really had a huge urge to proof it for you. however, the story was good and i laughed so ur cool.

OMG!!! I still love your story and the ending was so funny! I give you MAD comedian props/skillz! I love the 'RUN MOTHER F***ER!' part. I laughed so hard. You have GOT to start another story soon! GOT TOOOO!!!!

pretty good beppy, of corse now you know that u have to keep going so i canind out what happens next,lol. u just had to prove ur point and get me hooked right,lol? anyway really good story so far, kep it up, and congrats!!!

Kags and Sess dancing to Barbie doll: $1,000,000.

Sess actually knowing the words to Milkshake: $1,000,000,000

Milkshake sexiness: priceless

OMG FREAKIN HILARIOUS... Kagome is a riot... but poor Sess

Shit! OMGTWF!!!!!!!!!! Luv it! couldmt stop craking up!!!!!!!

this was an awsome story!!!...haha...so funny!!!..espeacialy the shaving of the eyebrows hahaha...classic

i love this story its soo funny i have already told all of my friends about it

I they that chapter resembled halloween town but muving on, i could have sworn that kagome would have shaven sesshomarus eyebrows off seriously that would have gotten him to dump her but then again who WOULD cut sesshomarus eyebrows? they are too perfect.plus i dont think he would let the person live, that is something that maybe inuyasha might do. anyway great chapter cant wait to see how sesshomaru reacts

please continue when you can This is So FUNNY I have to laugh when I read this and it also explains how they continue to build a relationship with out noticing and I think that is really cool how you where able to make it that way you really are a good author:)

well...i wasn't expecting that to happen...wow....poor kags, she's woried about sesshy....and im woried about their relationship...
it was somewhat cruel of you to not tell us his thoughts though....i would have really liked to have known what he was thinking...ah well, i can wait till the next chapter, i think.........
Up-date this very funny and yet completely real like story sometime soon...
and about her purse, my mom has one just like it, its this medium black purse that has everything from pads to sunscrean, including an extra change of clothes thats been in a bag,.....yeah...
again, UP-DATE SOON PLEASE!
ttfn
joanne!

hey!!!...no fair!!!...keep writing!!!...this is really good!!....more chapters please!!

great chapter

great chapter

you know kagomes purse reminds me of the purse from halloween town- were the granmother comes home for halloween and her bag just has everything you can wish for.

the three chapters were so funny!!!...i loved them so funny!!!...the sugur high!!!...lol...more please!!!

Well, I read the first chapter. I was going to read more. Then I was bitched at and ordered to review. Here's my review: I won't read the rest and gave the first chapter a complete rating of 1, because I don't follow orders very well.

i am so danm retard! w3aa! i never knew u just updated! wa! im busy with school too much and havent checked my accounts! waaa! im sooo danm danm danm retard! but please! updates soon! ok?

OH, on a side note, I sooooo hope that a video of Sesshy's drunken booty shakin karaoke 'mysteriously' pops up sometime. I would so giggle my butt off! Happy writing :o)

Lovin it, keep up the good work! Please tell me there will be more crazy funnyness ahead, I just love it.

funny as hell...keep up the work...more chapters please..

Your story is so refreshingly hilarious! I nearly wet my pants when I read the police cop part. You have such creative ideas I hope you update soon!!!

HAHAHAHAHA!!!
I didn't think you would really use any of my ideas... ^.^
But you DiD!!!
Please update sooooooon...

P.S. Us readers need to know your address...for purely innocent purposes of course. (like convincing you to update...soon.)

omg... too funny... -holds sides while crying with laughter- write more -gasp, laugh- please!!!

This is a really good story please continue when you have the time

OMG!!!
I LOVE YOUR FIC!!!
I LAUGHED MY ASS OFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I Just have a few suggestions...please consider them!

- Kagome puts parental control on Sesshoumaru's Television so that he can only watch *ahem* SPECIAL shows...

- Kagome begs to play with his beautiful long hair...his hair ends up to look like a mass of pastel colored ribbons and silver peeking out every so often...

-On the bus (because she somehow messed up his car) she "accidentally" pushes himinto a little old lady and yells "SESSHY!!! How could you? The poor old woman is so fragile and you PUSH her??? I know you think men are supposed to show their strength and prove that they're better than females but...how could you???"

-At a fancy resturant while Sesshoumaru is trying to make it up to her... she slurps REALLY loudly while eating soup, drags her fork along the plate to get some pasta off her plate hurting all the youkai at the restaurant.

- at the amusement park. instead of having a romantic moment on the ferris wheel she runs around yelling everywhere like a kid then when they finally get to the ferris wheel shejust keeps looking out the window exclaiming about different things.

^.^
any of them ok?
LoL

that was a movie plot

i have seen the movie. my sides hurt for 2 days after from laughing so hard. sesshomaru can deffinatly play off mathews roll. and kagome??? i think shed be a much better kate. lol so far so good.
tilayha

WOW, SOOO COOL! i luvd the movie and i'm luvin the fic! it's sooo frickin hilarious! my family keeps bargin in my room often coz they said i was laughing like a deranged lunatic (which is only partly true, i asure you ^_^) anyhow, please update soon! oh, and uhm, yah kinda uploaded "day five" twice, just tah let you know... well, c yah, i'll be keepin an eye out for the update ^_^ luv yah!!!

i love it lol write more

i love it lol write more

ROFLMAO!!!!!!! OMFGOMFGOMFGOMFGOMFGOMFGOMFGOMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sesshomaru *snort, hiccup* milkshake *iggle, fart* OMG!!! That was absolutely Beautiful!!!!! Were you can come up with such insanity is far beyond me, but I LOVE IT!!!!!

well it's going on 2 am now and i must go to bed. that was fun^.^ can't wat for a new ch!

NO BAD SESSHY! *THROWS SHOES AND RANDOM PAYLESS EQUIPMENT* you NEVER!! EVER!! get things down from the top shelf of shose! NEVER!!!! i work at payless and i would like to kill any one who trys and get stuff down by themseves'!! it make
smy life so much harder! and all the work i have to go through b/c some stupid person thinks oh if it falls on me its no big deal! WRONGE!!! what about all the shoues that are right behind that stack and fall into the next set over?! BAD SESSHY, BAD!!! i never before had reason to want to hang Sesshy, now i do. now then after my rant, sorry about that, just hit to close to home there. ^.^ if its not to much truble would you be so kind as to put *do not atemp tis at local payless' do works wishing you ham* well maybe not the last part ^__^ . you don't have to i've made my peace now ;3 any way, i just about saw red there and almost kill the computer. x_X that would not be good!love the ch but i think sesshy should be in tuble for that seen at payless ^__^ it would make me happy! and i know your farther in the story now and i'm playing cach-up but ifyou can slipp something like that in there in a later ch it would make me very happy!
thank for the fun i go to read on !!^__^

ah yes the fated 100 hits and but 4 or 5 reveiws. i my self don't have to deel with it for i normalle don't post my rambelling tales. ^__^ so i am most happy for those that do! thank you! it gives me something to laugh about ^.^
KUDOS! to you though i may not reveiw ever time i'll try ;3

Ok...so I've never read any of your fics but seeing as you so graciously asked for any type of review...here goes...I watached this movie last weekend on cable and I really liked it alot. So, I'm going to go on this ride with you just to see what you come up with. I so enjoy the different twists that can be created from someone else's plot. So far, so good. I'll be back for more. Jen

HAHAHAHAHA~~snort~~HAHAH!! OMG, you're hilarious! Love it, can't wait for more!!!!!!

continues! i love it! onegai, its so funny! arigatou!

I love this story...though I wonder what Sesshoumaru was thinking when he pulled her in bed with him? Hmmm...oh well, in the end, someone will win and someone ill lose...

Please continue soon I Really like your story and can't wait to read more bye bye

Love the story. LOL So evil. Hope to see more chapters soon.

rofl. Hilarious story, I support you all the way! xD *Laughing so hard*.
Mucho Amour~
Libido

This is interesting but...there is just one thing that kinda annoys me....you put an AN after every few sentences telling how YOU feel about what YOU wrote...those are kinda unneeded...it would be a lot easier to read if there wasn't an AN after almost every sentence. Normally, authors don't do that.
Sincerely,
`QQ

PS: This is NOT a flame.

OMG! i did that sun bern trick once in high school! my old bf -now husband- had pissed me off, so i had sweetly asked him -we were at a beach party- if he would like me to put sunscrean on his back....i wrote 'nice hot body, great equiptment, loves fat chicks, and FREE!!!' then i wrote his number! it was HALLARIPUS! i then stole his shirt, so her had to walk around, with that on his back, total laugh fest! he never knew why those fat chicks kept on calling him either.....:D muahahahahaha!!!
Up-date soon you evil genious you!
TTFN!
joanne

That was freaking awsome. I saw the movie How To Lose A Guy In Ten Days but this is so much better. Please update soon. ^-^

That chapter was cute...and I can't wait to see sesshou's reaction to his back!!! keep up the good work...but how are all the others in the story fairing?

That chapter reminds me of the time we did the same thing to the bus driver...he wouldn't let my friend get off the bus at the middle school to use the bathroom, so being the sick person she was she actually pulled out a tampon, smeared all this red crap all over it, and chucked it all the way across the bus to the front and hit the bus driver in the bak of the head...it was so damn funny...Im still laughing! Keep up the good work!

I was going to wait until I read all of the chapters to review, but this is just too funny. Keep up the great work!!!!

your story made me laugh so hard it made me cry..... can you write more please

OMG your story is great. i havent been able o find any good comedy stories in a while so keep up the good work! :}

F***ing B E A U T I F U L !

i luv dis movie; ur story will make it ven better

Kagome is so evil!!! I feel bad for Sesshoumaru... Please, make him get his revenge, update soon! ^_^

I like it. It's a funny way to pass the time, and I enjoy the interactions between Sesshoumaru and Kagome.

The 'playtimes' seem to be where the 'real' relationship will develope, so I'm interested in seeing how you plan to follow through with that aspect of the plot.

LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!! its so hilarious i like it!!! update soon onegai??!!! i an interested on what is going to happen next!! thats all!!

*imitating obsessed fan-girl* OMFGOMFGOMFGOMFGOMFG!!!!!!!! Its HIM!!!!! And...it says his number!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *faints* Hm, I womder if anyone will actually call that number? *evil grin* No! I shall resisit the temptation... Muahahaha!!!
Greatchappie, the frilly pinkness was a nice touch! Ja Ne!!!!

That was great! I'm going to go to sleep laughing now because of this. That was fun-nay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And ya know, I adore interesting disclaimers. Those and authors notes are, if they're funny of course, almost as good as the actual story sometimes! So please, I don't give a flying mushroom taking a crap on main street if it sucks! If its funny, I like it!!!! And I think I like this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like this so far. It's hilarious, and it doesn't seem so far fetched as other stories that I have read. It is really good. I can't wait until you update next.