Oh, this fic makes me all warm and fuzzy inside! ...not that it is, in itself, particularly warm and fuzzy, but I love it. I can't wait to see you continue it.

If you're still interested in having someone help with a lemon, I'm always good for that. There's nothing that I love more than Sesshoumaru/Kagome smut. ^^

i really love this
plz continue soon ^^

While I'm glad you explained the part about the Northern Lord, I was disappointed with the way you started the second chapter. Was it necessary to write that part with Sesshomaru leaving the bed of a woman he used? I hate stories that do that, and it seems you just put that in there to fit in with other authors who seem to think that is the way to write his character, as a ladies' man. No offense, but you just turned me away from your story.

ok, so are sesshomaru and kagome going to meet up in the Northern Lands? Is sesshomaru over his hate humans attitude or does he even have them? What happens to rin?

I like this story so far. It's engaging and I would love to read more. Please update when you can...I will check often for updates. You are doing a wonderful job (a few minor spelling/grammar errors but they really don't count) I just like reading this story. I gave it a full 10 rating.

Looking forward to more...well done :-)

Great story, I love the consept and am glad that you have taken up this challenge. I do have one question though. How did Rin die in this story, she has always been one of my favorite characters. Please email me at stumi71@aol.com only if you are not going to explain this in the story. Thank you and I look forward to your next update.

Wow, so good. Haha, oh man, okay, ya the second chapter was shorter but it was still so amazing! I love what you're doing with this and I can't wait to see where you go next. Hope you update soon.

I can't wait to read more and see what happens next, so I hope you update asap please.

this is getting intresting at each chapter please hurry ^_^

I like this stroy very much. The idea is unique, and your writing style is very well developed. Keep up the good work, and update soon please!

That beginning definitely had some potential. I liked it, even if it was a bit sad. I hope you'll be writing while in Spain, you can at least do rough drafts or even just outlines on paper without a computer, right? Anyway, I hope the next chapter has Sesshomaru in it!! Keep writing!!!

Good start, except for one thing. Kagome doesn't seem to be the least bit bothered that the Northern Lord is already mated. She doesn't seem to be the kind of person who would 'steal' another woman's man, so why would she readily agree to such a thing? I would think she would ask Myoga for more suggestions, before jumping to such a quick decision. I'm not saying she can't be selfish to want to see her family again, since everyone is a bit selfish, but I don't believe she would be that selfish to come between an already mated couple. Just look at the way throughout the series how she never wanted to come between Inuyasha and Kikyo. She always 'let' Inuyasha go to Kikyo, because she knew what happened with them and didn't want to get in the middle of that. So why would she put herself in a similar situation of being the 'second woman'? She deserves better than that. It's just an opinion, so don't take it the wrong way please. I do like the idea of the story, but Kagome could use a little more 'depth'.

Well, I can safely say that you have an amazing talent for capturing the feelings and thoughts of the characters! Haha, it was really good and I can't wait to see what you're going to do with it. So are you sure you can't update for a while? Cause man...I don't know if I'll last that long, I'm going to go insane not knowing what happens next! Haha, great job, you have a real talkent, keep it up.

An interesting start. The hints at the past preceding this chapter, as well as what will follow are intriguing. Excellent work!