This story is so deep and amazing that I am speechless.
I don't know how to praise you.
It's simply beautifull.
Thank you.
Please continue to write so, you are realy talented.

Deep, omg that was deep. I totally loved it. That was almost as good as some of the long fic that has won awards.

All tens. Excellent story.

It seems they have found their light.

When I was reading both of your chapters I couldn't help but be sad. I know you said you were dealing with death and other family issues but I really did feel that in reading this short story. It was very well written and I am glad that even in the mist of darkness and grief there is always light in hope that we find in our Lord and Savior. I don't know if that is where you were going but that is what I got out of it. I have been through a storm and it nothing better than seeing the light at the end of that storm. I think I told you before that I enjoy reading your stories and I look forward to reading more of your work.

that story made me cry and i rarely cry it's just the death of inuyasha and everybody just shatered my heart. i'd like you to do me a favor please just consider. look ast the chalanges on page two look for mary or on page one look for hanyou from hell. thank you.

Wow. That was wonderful. I don't know where the summary came from, but I'm sure I've heard it before, so I'm kicking myself, lol.

Anyway, I really liked the story. It was very well written!