wow.....simply wow. i am in awe of the simple elegance of these words. i had to read it twice. beautiful
tilayha

awesome! I loved it. It was very deep and revealing about their relationship and kagome's maturity. hmm, I definately think you should elaborate more on it. like make some more chapters! :-D haha, yes I loved it! My personal opinion would be to continue it in a more chapter/novel format. I think that while this is an awesome stand-alone piece, that it would make an equally awesome opening piece for a multi-chaptered fic! but either way I give this an A++ !! keep up the awesome work!