who said ur dismissed?, kagome?

aaahhhhhh please don't leave it there make a contune sotory please................

aaahhhhhh please don't leave it there make a contune sotory please................

oh please update i want more

OMFG i cant believe Sesshomaru said that to her.............. so can you plez write a sequel???!!!!!!!!!!!! i really wanna know what happens to Sess and Kags!!! (puppy face) :)

DAMN, You make Sesshomaru sound as an out right good for nothing emotionless jackass.
So, yeah but your story is good

:o! I cannot believe you just ended there! Rawr! Bad bad bad!

But the lemons were good :)

You should make an epilogue, a sequel, or something!! This is really good! I do hope you do many an epilogue/sequel!! PLEASE?!?!

And if it doesn't trouble you - is it ok if you sent me an email about it?

The ending was unexpected and excellent. It is very good. So...Don't you dare add more to this no matter how much others beg. Keep it the way it is and don't change it. Also, the lemons were entertaining as it should be. But you spelled "tounge" wrong, it's tongue. ^^ Loved it. Ciao!

update or i will be foreced to kill you plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz~ that was great!!

**Falls to the floor on her knees.** NOOOOOOO!!!! XD It was such a good fanfic. I say you should leave it at that! It's an ending one doesn't see very often..it's refreshing! Love the lemon...sweet sweet lemon!!!

I lOVE YOUR story u have to write more you cant just live me hanging wanting more plz write more

awwwwwwwww

THERE HAS TO BE A SEQUEL TO THIS!!!!!!!! PLEASE??????? **on knees begging**

Irihi-chan

Well.. that certainly ended abruptly. In the end, though, it could only end this way, couldn't it? Good for Kagome! She did the right thing... so glad to finally see a story like this ending with a Kagome that has a pair of brass cajones., rather than a wilting Kagome that relents. I like it!

man wow that was goood i hope you make a sequal to it!!!

Please make a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

now that is a good story she told fluffy and i am happy will their be a sequal to this story

sequel plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!! it ended so sadly T.T

That Was A Wonderful Ending ... Go Kagome!!!

it's over!?!?!?!

WHAT! Your' going to leave it there! oh come on Sehpy would not go for that, her having the last word, oh hell no. But then again you have left this open for a seqal. Please think about... and sorry for my out burst.

Oh no!! I thought there would be more. Like Sesshomaru realising he can't live without her and all that fluffy stuff. He deserves some suffering after his awful words!!

Thanks! We're still not sure as to what to call her though, and yes, it's kinda over due too....a month over due...
I'm wondering, how will sesshy react once he notices what she did? will he become angered? or will he become understanding? And maybe you should edit that fourth chapter, and write down that kags left a letter explaining that it was only lust on his part, so she will never feel anything for him again -which will be a complete and total lie- until he feels something other than lust and desire for her or her body...ya know?
well...ttfn;
joanne!

I love this fanfic! great job and keep updating!can't wait to read more.

wow...you got one hot fic here! it's good you're continuing the fic. it's really good. can't wait for the next chapter!

Super HOT story can't wait for more!!!

Great story, quite the citrus treat, and you can't just leave us hanging not knowing what ole Sess is thinking! Hope to see your update soon!!

awwwww yay i love the new chapter i can't wait to read what happens next keep up with the awesome writing and please update soon

Oh wow! I wonder what Sesshoumaru is going to say and do once he figures out that Kagome went against his rules... Hmmm. Anyways great chapter and cant wait for the next one to come out!

Humm... I do love lemons. I really do. Though the dirty talk got a bit out of hand in there XD More please

DAMN

That was hot and steamy. UPDATE SOON!

Irihi-chan

Please, please, update. This is great.

I thought you were going to end it loke that you awful girl!!! Well, anyway, as I said before I hope you make him suffer and beg for her!!!

aaauughh, decide how many chapters you'll make! i'm so anxious to see the rest

No complaints here I'm glad your continuing the story i think it's awesome and I definitely can't wait for more chapters.

I feel so bad for KAgs! ok...not really, i mean, isn't it every girl, and bi/gay guys dream to have a sexy hunk like Sesshy-kun after you for something more than your blood!? :Pmy hubby an't to happy about that...but oh well!
I do have to say, this chapter was deffinatly active! but...if you had split the supposeably 'too long chapter' (which is impossible, there is no such thing as a too long chapter!) if you had really split it in half, then the last chapter should all ready be done, right?
Also, i feel bad for kags date, but not kagura, that slut can get a ride from one of the waiters she was eyeing, though now i'll feel bad for the waiter....*shruggs*
Up-date again soon!
TTFN!
joanne
(also, i had my baby Girl! first one in the bunch! three weeks! sweet huh!? ok...not really three weeks, though it feels like it!:P)

it's good! Update! Now! grrrrrrr

omg i absolutely love your story and i am dieing to read the next chapter please please please update soon

Wow! I hope you update soon! I cant wait to see what happens next! Maybe his eyes are actually red... OHH! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! LOVE THE STORY!

Wow! I hope you update soon! I cant wait to see what happens next! Maybe his eyes are actually red... OHH! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! LOVE THE STORY!

*GASP* u updated!

yay!

loved it!

Finally!!! I loved this chapter, and I loved that Kagome is making things difficult for him, the jerk doesn't deserve better. Can't wait to hear his reasons for cheating. I hope you don't make us just as long for the last chapter!!!

OK, so glad that you've updated. i love this story (and some of your others... so i'm REALLY glad you're back!!)
but that was mean! ending it there? *huffs* well, i have to admit i loved it until it ended suddenly. ^_~

please update soon, i can't wait to see how the fight ends... then on to the make-up sex! *sits not-so-patiently and waits*

The awesome summary drew me in.

Keep up the great work!

ok this is getting good.....can you write more please

LOL

That sure was hot n rough. I CANNOT wait for the next chapter. **wink wink**

UP DATE SOON

Irihi-chan

lol... now that chapter was funny. I love this story. Can't wait for the update. You guys are great writers

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Aye yai yai! Sooooo hot! 'Fans self' I love it!

I love your story! it gives me heartache...Can you please email me when you update? Please? My email is anime_nutty@hotmail.com. I love the way Sesshoumaru is jealous. He deserves it for being so mean to Kagome lol.

I love your story! it gives me heartache...Can you please email me when you update? Please? My email is anime_nutty@hotmail.com. I love the way Sesshoumaru is jealous. He deserves it for being so mean to Kagome lol.

Hey love the chapter can't wait for more. I really love the twist in the story I mean god they broke up. And lol now of course fluffy is jealous.

I hope kags has been getting some since sess was for the last yr. I never thought it fair to make to woman seem like she can't get over the guy for rediculous amounts of time. Sure she said she loved but still nothing for a yr...

Oh Yes!! Make him suffer all right!! He desreves all the punishment he can get from Kagome! What a jerk!! Next time he will realise his real feelings as soon as they appear! I hope she gives him a big dose of indiference!

I love this story! Keep up the great work!!!!

I love this story! Keep up the great work!!!!

He Caught her eye And.... Now thats a mega cliff but it keeps all the suspense so good job and I can't wait to read more

wow.

amazing. i really enjoyed this piece. update soon please!

thank you for giving us both his view on their relationship and stuff! Oh, and thanks for giving how they both felt about the seperation...and, will he corner this...Yoshi-whats-his-name guy? or...what? and what was sesshy wearing?
Also...why would he stoop so low to date kagura? desperation is not a good answer niether...
I love the details, and hate kaguras dress! actually its sounds more like a slutty swim suit...lol
Up-date soon!
TTFN!
joanne

hmph... serves him right. i hope kagome doesn't make it too easy for him to get back in her good graces. *wink, wink*
moment of honesty here... i never really liked Kagura, she always seemed like such a scheming ho.
anyway, i can't wait to read more!

fanfastic!!!!!!!!

that's rly koo, you have to update soon plx & thx!!! ^^ i want to know what sessho will do next and who kags chooses...i think you should make it hard for sessho to win her back since that other guy seems so awesome like that lol

HEY I THINK THAT THIS STORY IS GREAT SO FAR KEEP IT UP:=)

Oh man update soon plz and thx!!! This is getting so good, i rly want to know what sessho does next!

I love it. I can't wait till you update again.

Oh My God!! what a wonderful story!! I love it cant wait til you update so update soon!! ^_^

-Katherine

Ok, i've read fics like this one before, but not when they're exclusive with their sex life...or 'relationship'...and they ALWAYS show the females perspective, never the males,...do you think you could show/tell sesshy's view on their 'relationship'? i'de really like you two for it!And, i think this story has REALLY, REALLY great potential, and you can definatly expect my rapt atention on it! though i am two months til i give birth....so it may not be a review for Every chapter...but pritty close to it!
TTFN!
joanne

wow it sounds really interesting and i can't wait to read more chapters please update soon

sounds interesting so far, sess is kinda freaky, he has some issues that need to be delt with, good stuff keep it up!

Wow can't wait to read more chapters.

Well now that was interesting. Sounds like a one sided abusive relationship. I'd love to see her leave him for a while just to see his reaction. Like her go on a vaction or business trip without telling him.

DAMN THAT WAS HOT!!!!!

hmmmm... im starting to understand this friends with benefits kinda relationship. lots of author are writting bout this, but i have to say...

URS IS THE BEST!!!!!!!
I LOVE YOU!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!

MORE LEMON MORE LEMON MORE LEMON MORE LEMON MORE LEMON MORE LEMON MORE LEMON MORE LEMON MORE LEMON MORE LEMON MORE LEMON MORE LEMON MORE LEMON MORE LEMON MORE LEMON MORE LEMON MORE LEMON MORE LEMON MORE LEMON !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That sounded wrong .

AHHHHHHH my minds been corrupted by Miroku!!!!!!!

Irihi-chan

I love it It's passionite at it's peak, and it's angery, it's seesy done right. I love it continue deary please

Fire and Desire is great. The idea of Sesshomaru being the unstable one is a really nice change. You've got a fantastic idea and the writing to match. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Good luck.

Ooh! I like it! Totally interesting! I'm hooked! It would be better if the chapters were just a little bit longer. -hint hint - poke poke-

But no pressure though!

Nice lemon. Really...intense.

Umm...just wanted to inform you of somethings. Men do not have multiple orgasm. (I'm pretty sure that's right. Someone correct me if I'm wrong.)

Just wanted to let you know. (unless you are making that some special little feature of being a demon!)

Any way. Keep up the great work and update when you can!

Ta ta!

--Ashley