| what is going to happen!!!...more chapters please!!!
captaintori88- Sun 23 Sep 2007
| Your fic is really good! I enjoyed reading it. :)
| Very interesting story line. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update when you can.
| Please update ^_^
| Nice start i can not wait to see where you go with this.
| This is good it has I nice plot , good flow ,and great charater interaction. I look forward to reading the next chapter. : )
| This is good it has I nice plot , good flow ,and great charater interaction. I look forward to reading the next chapter. : )
| This is good it has I nice plot , good flow ,and great charater interaction. I look forward to reading the next chapter. : )
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