Please continue...I'm Loving This

Please continue...I'm Loving This

Please continue...I'm Loving This.

charm me your story,
Are you going to continue when? I ancioso by reading the next chapter

soory the lack of spelling but I am using a translator

ooo can not what of a up date please up date soon

dude, i heard that ss has to close down- you gotta post the fic on another site man!! please!
alot of the others are posting here http://www.dokuga.com/
maybe you can to?

getting tense now are we, im liking this very much so far continue!

MoniQ

Are going to update at the other website too?

Oh, please update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens the suspense is killing me!

WHAT HAPPENS NEXTWHAT HAPPENS NEXT :D

ooh...sesshomaru is in for it. if you haven't found a beta reader yet, i'll take you on. i'm sorry but you desperately need one.

FL

love it. can't want for the next chapter keep up the good work.

OMFG O.O hope u update soon

the story is good so far...
i like it...
im interested in what
is going to happen next ...
continue updatiing...

Yuor story is so Great! i was jumping up and down when i read it!
I hope you keep puting out wonderful Chapters/Stories!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I hope that u will update this story..
I give u my blessings...

o i hope u do finish dis fic. i really want 2 know wha happens 2 kags and sesshy-sama

PLEASE UPDATE THE 5th CHAPTER!!!!!!!!

This is very good. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I realy want to read chapter 5 soon. So please for your readers update. Only you can.(Sad puppy eyes)Please?

A+
I love the story.
Will you continue the story????

A+
I love the story.
Will you continue the story????

awesome story please update soon

what is sesshoumaru gonna do now?? will he remember or will he be able to tell the pup/pups r his when he sees her again???? cant wait for the next chapter.
tilayha

oo so my question is does or does sesshomaru not remember what he did?

is sesshy ever going to know about what happened?...anways!!keep up the writing!!..

I LOVE IT! I got soooo into this story! What will the mother to be do will she go insane or will Inuyasha help her through these hard times. Who knows? YOU KNOW!!!PLEASE update soon.PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

i like your story alot and would like to be your beta-reader

that was soooooooooo emotional ! poor, poor, poor kagome that is soooooooo sad TT.
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i love this FF though. please update

I'm emjoying the story. Update soon.

I seen you were looking for a new beta. I am interested my name on here is Teh Smexii Dictator you can message me there or email me at LoveMehTender@hotmail.com

i can be your new beta reader.

i can be your new beta reader.

Hei^^
I really like this FF . It#s a great beginning, very emotional!
Poor Kagome...I'm very curious what will happen next, so, pleease update soon=)

hey, i'll beta for you, i've done beta work before

someones interested here! me! me! me!

YAY!!! Finally you post another chapter!!!! I love this story and can't wait to read how Sesshomaru reacts when he finds out who he mated. I'm sorry I can't offer myself as a beta, have you checked the beta readers section?

I vote that he FIND'S OUT and TAKES RESPONSEBILITY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice chapter!

I haven't done any beta-ing in quite a while but if you would like I would love to help out!

I see it as a good to help those who need it and am willing to help you!

If you find another beta then I wish to see that next chapter up soon!

Ja Ne!

ur story is awesome

and if u still need a beta i could beta for u

I LOVE THE STORY YOUR WRITING
WHEN U UPDATE PLEASE E-MAIL ME
^_* THANX!!!

You have left us all hanging on the edge of a cliff by our fingernails! Please release us from the suspense and give us more! I'm panting with anticipation. My beast is wanting more, more, more! It's been too long. My beast is howling.

Whoa! Damn! This is tight. Can't wait for the nex installment. Great story telling! Peace!

I think that the little pre-ep on sango and kags's talk was not really needed, we pritty much all know how sango, the brash warrior, would act, afterall, if we're reading these fan fics then we should understand the actions characters may do! lol, but it was nice to see how she would view sangos reaction, of course!
I am full of dread and silent expectation on how he will act...and was her dream a premonition? like...a vision of some sort? And i wonder what sesshy will feel when he finds out...and if he will kill her to 'get rid of the evidance'...i sincerly hope not...And, uh....OH! thank you very much for giving us both of their POV on what's happened so far...and will the other spiritual/hanyou/youkai in her group be able to tell what sorta happened and sense that she has youki in her aura?
We!!! TTFN!
joanne

aww poor kagome.. hurry and update i want to see her make it through this all!!

Ja Ne!!

Sesshy baaaaad demon!

NOOOO! I hate you! Jk, the story is awesome. Just PLEASE finish it. I was all into it and BAM it ended. Finish, finish, finish. And I shall love you forever and ever. 3

hey could Kaede hit Inu with a wooden spoon....like Resmira's(sp?) tales of the house of the moon..'s..miko did??

what will sess do....will he regret abandoning her 500 years from now....I wonder...

please update soon!!!!!!!!!!

Keep it up.

This is still a very interesting story. I look forward to seeing you update soon. You might want to consider proof reading your work, however, as you are using some terms in the wrong context. Below are a couple of examples:

'...It started to 'irate' him, so he...' = This should be 'irritate'...

'...she 'mesmerized' his aura....' = to be mesmerized is to be hypnotized, which I am sure is not what you are trying to say. The term here that better fits is 'memorized'.

Keep up the good work and please update soon.

Very interesting start. I hope you update quickly. So many of the "bodice ripper" mating season versions of the Kagome/Sess fics have been done. Its nice to have Kagome go "whoa! I've been raped. I don't care if your beast was in control." I've been fantazing Inuyasha saying "what do you mean, you won't come back to the feudal era. What can I do to change your mind." and Mama Higurashi saying "bring me the head of your brother, and I'll consider letting her go back."

awesome, i can't wait for more.

its great

Wow..poor Kagome..at first she got raped, and then pregnant..and Sessh donÄt even know!
Please update soon, and let m know^^
Want to know, how the story goes on^^

Wow that's a pretty intense chapter I hope you update soon !!!

I think this is a very nice plot! I hope you will be up-dateing very often, cause i will be checking to see if this story has another chapter or two added to it! I am sad that he reaped her, but i know it was apart of the plot, and needed for the story to work. Please, this story is a atention getter, and can progress into a very lovly fully capable story!
TTYL;
joanne

wow cannot wait for a update pleases update soon ok

oo shit will sess's beast escape and go looking for her or will sess remember? and what of kags will she go live in the fudal eral out of shame of getting pregnant at such a young age? or will inuyasha come barging in and take her to the past without realisatio of what had happened.

SO if they could determine after 2 days she's pregnant does that mean the pup is growing kinda fast........
.........so if it's hanyou or youkai it's gestation time should be shorter than a human's right??

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!

Oh wow please add more chapters soon

oh I just can't wait to see what happens

At least Kagome isn't permanently physically damaged and she knows that Sesshoumaru was not in his right mind at the time. Her mom is a saint. She is always so loving and understanding. As for Sesshoumaru, apparently his beast is able to keep this a secret so far.

hmmm, interesting. please update soon. I am eager to find out what happens next.

wen r u writing the next chapter? i like this story lol

oooo shit! so plz continue i cant believe you did a cliffy right when it was getting soo good. i wonder what will happen next?

I like!

It's really good so far!!!! Please write more soon!!!!!

I saw this when you posted it to AdultFanFiction. Although there are some grammar errors, this is a really good start to your story. Please update soon.

i love this story please please please update soon please

oOo intense intense...luv it ^^

OoOoOoh interesting story plot I've seen it before but I like your the most I think very interesting I cannot simply wait for the update.

-Katherine

The story is really good. If you want I'll beta it, and help out. Peace be with you

The story is really good. If you want I'll beta it, and help out. Peace be with you

I'm really enjoying this fanfic already! I hope you update soon! ^_^

-River

ohhh boy.....this is gettin good.

will kag be able to go back into her time when she's preg?? (after sess disses her)

I wonder if her pup will be full youkai.
I wonder if she'll have a literal litter of pups.....
Her mom would definately work on spoiling them.....

so if sess disses her she could go back to the future where it's safer for a preg miko and her family is there....

I wonder if sess will say all humans are worthless to kag but rin overhears and wants to go with kag....
of course shippo would want to go with kags too...

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!

ohhh boy.....this is gettin good.

will kag be able to go back into her time when she's preg?? (after sess disses her)

I wonder if her pup will be full youkai.
I wonder if she'll have a literal litter of pups.....
Her mom would definately work on spoiling them.....

so if sess disses her she could go back to the future where it's safer for a preg miko and her family is there....

I wonder if sess will say all humans are worthless to kag but rin overhears and wants to go with kag....
of course shippo would want to go with kags too...

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!

Pretty good so far, you've got something here! Haha, um, one thing that really stuck out to me was that you were changing your tense from past to present a lot...I don't know, it might have been your intention or it might not have been, just thought I'd let you know ^_^ But I like it, I can't wait for more!

Nice beginning :] If you still need a beta, I would be happy to do the job. Just email me XD

I like this so far, I looks like your story is going to be something really really good... can't wait to read the next chapter....^____^

Kagome always forgets her bow! this story is awesome can't wait for more chapters.

I loved it hope you update soon+