Can't wait for you to update, that was a very good chapter!

i love your story! i love all the angst the characters feel :) Maybe you can put the fluff and the real romance later? hehe.way way later i hope XD update when you can!

I'm just glad you're gonna update.
Is sess really wanting to kill kag...or did I understand some parts wrong....

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hey, can't wait for the fouth chapter, love your work!

I just finished chapter 3 and I must say I do like what I've read so far. Looks like you got a few betas waiting to be hired, although I didn't really see the need for one. I guess it's always best to have a second opinion in all things. The only thing I would say that I think needs changing is Sesshoumaru's dialect in the Feudal Era. He wouldn't use slang and contractions whereas the Inutachi being in Kagome's company on a daily basis would indeed pick up her ways of speaking. Especially InuYasha. But I am told that I am nitpicky on that aspect but if you want a fic to be as believable as you can make it, why not go all the way? Kaede's speech pattern is another one and quite a hard one to keep in check. I give praise to those I read that can keep these type of things in line with the series. Other than that, all looks great to me and I'll be looking for more. Jen

i just read the first chapter and i have to say ummmm wow... great start can't wait to read more

WOWWWW! this is SUCH a great story! :) i can't wait for the next chapter to come out! as for the beta, i would LOVE to be urs if u doni't already have one. i've already done some stories before and my name is in the beta reader section. i really hope that u'll choose me!:) update soon!

I Like Ur Story Its Realli Good ... Its Sad Too I Mean Kagome Has Been Through Hell And Back ... Well Please Update Soon ...

wow, thats good stuff.

I love this story and would happily be your beta if ou want. If you still need one please e-mail me at: artist_angel88@yahoo.com Keep up the good work!

there are no words to do justice about what i feel for this story. i mean i already love your work. but i think this one is the forsting on the cake WITH the side of cold stone creamery icecream! it's absolutely perfecet.


i refuse to see a flaw.



kudos.

























and i'm damanding the next chapter asap.


or expect stephen king monsters in your nightmares. (=

Man, for some reason this site isn't working for me, I had to try literaly five times to be able to review =_=. Haha, but who carees so long as I review right? Okay, man, I'm in love with this fic, it's absolutely amazing! Although, I think I might go cry since this chapter ended in the same lace as the last one!! Haha, I'm kidding, but poor Kagome, it's so sad, but this is so good. Okay, well I'm done now, I just thought I'd let you know how much I love your fic, please update soon!!

this is absoluetly wonderful so far. You must update again soon! I can't wait for the nect chapter! ja ne

ooo shit i think i know why didnt go back. well i g2g to sleep since its 11:30 and i got SATs tomorow morning.

Hey Kanela!! I love this story! It's just.. WOW, what can I say? Awesome work!

If you still need a beta reader, I am all for it! My name on the site is *~Little-Feather~* (I deleted most of my older stories just because.. eh and I currently have one story up before I switch over usernames.)

You can just email me at the address in the review if you need anymore information and such!

GREAT! i love it so far

you must update again soon!!! I absolutely love this fic so far and can't wait for another update. until then... ja ne

Oh yes, you must continue this. I especially liked that they had no real feelings for each other and the sex was just what it was, lustful,angry sex. But whether he admits it or not, he did have some type of feelings toward her to have been there in the first place. Sesshoumaru never does anything without a reason and we can't blame his beast as it could be seen that he was in full control of himself. He allowed himself to get lost in what they were doing BUT he knew. So, I'll be waiting for more and until then...you did fantastic in capturing my curiosity. Jen

That was great! Oh man, I can't wait for the next song..er..chapter I guess. Please update soon this fic is amazing and it's...human...I know that probably makes no sense what-so-ever but it is. Your fic is human, it deal with charachters that aren't all powerful beings, their human [or as close to human as Sesshomaru can be] and they have flaws. It's great and I can't wait to read more.

Please continue this story! please! I mean it would be great to do. And yes I like the song idea. Go Go Go. You go write till your heart content.

that was ummm.........interesting?no really, i liked it, but t hend was a little wierd............sesshomaru siad he'd kill her??????? hmm.........i think i need more caffine to think correctly now............

please continue... It looks too good to make it just a one-shot.

Pretty Please?
~zen