I revewed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i love your pome ^_^

i love your pome ^_^

I's short and sweet,
And very neat!!

Loved it true,
Do not be blue!

Its was a nice poem cute and fluffy

i like it very much so continue the good writing

I agree with MomoDesu. Clean up your summary and more people will read your poem.

It's not that bad. But I have to admit, when I read the summary, I almost didn't read it.

You don't have to say all of the extra junk on the end; you could say something lik "A poem of secret love ... blah blah blah" Something along those lines...(but without the 'blah blah blah")

It would make the poem more appealing. I also think you marked this wrong. You didn't mark it as 'poetry', which you should.

Good luck on your future works!

--Ashley

It's not bad at all.

I just want to give you one little tip; if you clean up your summary more people would take the time to read it. They probably expect the piece to be written exactly like the summary.