I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

nice chapter, i hope to read more soon! ^-^

Ja Ne!!

nice story line so far keep up the good work and I hope to read the next chapter soon!

Ja Ne!!

ok, we really didn't get to know the two boys that well in this chapter, and it wans't very well described, and it didn't inform us about the girls training, or tell us what the name of the company was or what the the company does!
I do like how you told us the description of the four of them, and how the two girls each have a job...but could you do what i said above, please? it would make your story a whole lot better!
PLEASE up-date SOON!
TTYL!
joanne

I really like you story! The idea is VERY original!!!!!

PLEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE N THANK YOU!!!!! ^_^

P.S. lemons pweez

i relly hope that u finish this story

This is a new and different way to approach Sesshomaru and Kagome's relationship. I like it very much-- and update as soon as you can.

Peace out.

I am ok with the chapters being a while to get posted...and as long as you dont stop this nice and very unigue story all together i wont mind. Now, can you explain this -OH! And thank you for answering my questions as well!- does their 'uncle' believe that if the police think that the two are dead that he'll get the money? if so, he obviously wont, cause, as you said/told us, their parents, in their will, said ONLY their daughters could have access to the money, NO ONE else. No matter What! lol, gettin into hatein him...eh, can ya blame me?
And i am glade that you've given more detail and history! Also, shouldnb't the cops be able to tell by fingerprints, Who they are? and Where they are from?
welll....sorry about the newest questions...
until next time!
joanne

i really liked it and i can't wait for more

oh wow that was horrible what the uncle did. The chapter all and all was very good. Hope to see more chapters soon.

ok, this fic is nice, but if you could explain their ages, cause from what i understand, they are children...am i right? and if they aren't could you tell us what their age is? please?
And, could you use more detail? like...what do they look like....hwere in the world are they? and what time period...i expect our, since you mentioned police...
also, do they both share the powers? are they twins? cine it says 'thier paretns' and 'their uncle, who isn't really their blood uncle...' are they twins then? or is one older than the other?
and could you just explain that for me? thanks!
Other than that, this fic sounds really promising!
TTFN!!!!!!!!!
joanne

wow new chapters plz

it sounds pretty good but can you write more in the chapter please to make it more exciting thanks