please update!!

Another lovely chapter - but huge cliffy! Come on, please update! Please please please?

Anyway, this is an original and believable take on the Sess/Kag relationship. I could totally see Kagome sacrificing her virginity to save Sesshoumaru.

I sense an interesting conversation coming up *evil grin*

Ghaa!

Big cliffy!!!

Hurry and update soon!!

I have to know what's next!!

Hurry!!!

Ja Ne!!

aw, i love the way you write! please continue soon, i get excited when i see that you've updated

That was really great!!!! I'm so glad that you updated!

wow this story was different rare to come across one so original! i loved it but i hate you for the cliffy! you have to update soon!

Arrrggghhhh, a cliffhanger!!!! I hate cliffies!!! Please update soon.

yeah u finally update!!!!!!!! arigato

Me Like This Is A Realli Good Story Update Soon Please!

An udtate! wonderful! It is soooo hard for one of these stories to be interesting after the lemon. You are doing an excellent job!

ACK!! CLIFFY MUCH!! I agre with July Vincent, you need to update and soon! I wanna know what happens next!! Wha'd he say?!?! PLEASE?!?!?!

Yay, new chapter! It's no surprise that Sesshoumaru is intrigued by Kagome's behavior - it is so unlike what he expected.

I wonder what he will say to her... update soon, please:)

bitn sya grabe... maganda...
i hope you continue the story...
where both sesshoumaru and kagome fall for each other....

;_; That's so sad.

Please update soon...I love reading this story.

darn you and short chapters!! hurry and update another since that one was short i have to know what's next!!! Hurry and update soon please!!

Ja Ne!

great story! i xan't wait to see what happens next. you did a very good job.i hope you post the next chapter soon. this story is soo good that you've got me hooked. thanks for the good reading.

I believed someone stoled your story and put it on adultfanficiton.net

1 word describes that: wow! that was amazing will there b ne more?

hehehe... lecher cashier! i've had a few of those in my life. they're always fun to annoy.

anyway, i loved it, but i think it calls for a second act. like, sesshy's not happy she's not there and decided to "punish" her. lol.
please update again soon

omg wow update update or ill be forced to kill you muahahaha plz!!!!

omg wow update update or ill be forced to kill you muahahaha plz!!!!

you know for some weird reason i dont think that the spell was not "removed" correctly because of the condom. but then again that is just my thoughts trying to get more lemons out of you- ok that sounded weird! IT WAS A VERY GOOOD CHAPTER!

It's a hit and run! *giggle*

nice story u have here im really lookin foward to the other chapters

keep updating ^_^

I am glad you allowed her to have safe sex and the fact that she was wise enought to walk away afterwards...i can't wait till he wakes up though > update!

I feel sorry for Kags since she can't seperate feelings from sex good idea to make it safe sex though

Ooohhh...finally some action between the two of them. I love it...that was hot!!! Please update again soon. I can't wait to read more.

wow nice chapter... hurry and type the next chapter... please ^-^

Ja Ne!!!

WOW! your story is really interesting and somehow quite unique. i really loved it, and i can't wait for you to update the next chapter for your really interesting and cliffy story. XD

keep updating ^_^

Pwease update soon!!!!! i need Sesshomaru!!! What happened i know he didnt die please update!!!!!!

poor poor sess

Arggg! I can't believe you did that to me! Just leave me hanging like that so not fair.

Ooohhh...I hate cliffies!!! I hope you'll update soon...pretty pwease :( I can't wait to read the next chapter.

awesome chapter! hope you get to typing and update the next one on any fic soon lol!

Ja Ne!!

Yeah Kiska's story started being posted a while after I first posted the challenge so I kinda thought the same at some point, but the potion theme IS very common, the only thing I did in the challenge was add the "life and death" situation, hehe. In "Spark" I think it is Kagome who gets herself into the whole mess, sin't it? Not someone from the outside... and it also has all the subplot with Rin, which makes it a very different story. Besides, there's a world of a difference between the ways they chose to write it.

This story has it's own style and I keep wanting to read what's gonna happen next...specially now that Kagome knows what might happen unless she does *something* about it! The next chapter promises to be most relevant, that's for sure.

wow this reminds me of kiska's "spark" maybe you guys picked up on the same challenge or something lol but anyway I love your story keep up the awesome work.

Chelsea

awesome!! hurry and update please I wish to know what happens next!! ^-^

Ja Ne!!

awesome fic! I hope to read more updates from you!

Ja Ne!

STALKER!!!!


LMAO

Yay you updated!

ah she dreamt she was nekid! i dream that all the time i can totally understand Kagome.

lol that was great please update again soonb lol

You better forgive me or my friend Suchiya is gonna kill me *shudders*

Jay you idiot you disrespected your own rule: never get carried away when reviewing fics answering your challenges.

Jay is my friend she didn't mean to sound bossy please forgive her.

I really like the story and it's a LOVE POTION for crying out loud. Keep writing it dont matter as long as your happy with it. Shit I'm happy because I want to know what he whisper to her.



come on tell me!! lol

I think I know! I think I know! I'll wait for the next chapter to find out.

awsome plot and story. I can't wait for the chapter.

YES!!!!! That was perfect lol I don't think I could have imagined it any better then how you presented it....GREAT job and update again soon please.

Chelsea

Nice chapter... I enjoyed reading it..
This has been a good story so far..
I too wonder what he whispered too her too... Something Kinky.. I hope.....LOL...
Oh well hurry and update so we can find out...
Take Care
Mari

I love it. it's getting more and more interesting. Please update soon.

Oh... I LOVE I LOVE I LOVE!! Thanks for taking the challenge! ^__^

Wow awsome fic, don't worry about Akina. Akina: get over it! *laughs* some people can't handle waiting.

Damn you for not updating >. I need to know what happens.

im beging you plz moor

hn interesting even more she may not get his love but she wil have her revenge hehe

kool nice start can you make it a bit longer you dont have to its ok anyway please update soon bye

Sounds interesting. Please update again soon.

omg that was great. Jay always has the greatest challenges that Jay does. I myslef am doing one. Magnificent Pandemonium yet it isn't as good as your because it was my first story lol. I hope you update soon and if you get some sory of list that allows your readers to know when its updated put me on it lol my email is disgracedworld@yahoo.com. I loved it.

Chelsea