hey this is good, i hope your okay and i hope you well finshes this soon i would like to know what going to happen to them and how well she and lol inuyasha take it lol i like it why sess and kag get togetther i think they may look good to getther

i like this one please update soon i would like to see what happens when she wake up lol. and it really good thanks for you hard work but please up date soon
Bobbie

goodness! I thought i'd never get to read another chapter in this story!
You have been truly missed.
Thank you for updating. Even being short, it was worth the wait!
tilayha

OMG I am in love with your fic. I do have my ups and downs about it but thats just me. Keep up the wonderful work.

Well, that's been a long time coming!! I wonder what Kag's reaction will be...Ah well, I'm glad that it's finally happened, and that you updated. Hope you don't let things get you down, if he wants to be that way it's his problem. Great job, keep writing!!!!

HI Lore!!! Love this new chapter!!! Hope you update soon!!! I luv u ^_^
i hope your well,
Holysinner

p.s i really hope your alright. breaking up over the phone is low...way low. LUV YA!!!!
Hugs an Kisses,
Holysinner

Sorry about the fact that you're going through a rough patch. And I won't offer any platitudes....just hoping that you start feeling better soon! And by the way this last chapter rocked!!! Poor Yasha though! He ain't gonna be happy knowing he's lost Kagome forever!

ohh she is going to be pissed!!

Eeeee! I love it.... you should write more, and quickly too! This is a wonderful fanfic...

hey! just wanted to let ya know that I've been reading your fanfic for quite a while now. I've always loved it. I lost the internet for a very long period of time, but i'm back now and have read up on your fanfic again. I've been wanting to leave you a review so now i'm happy that i can finally do that. ^_^ I judge books by their covers and just the same, i judge fanfics by their titles. Your title is alluring in all respects though to some people it may sound a lil cliche. But it actually puts a great amount of feeling into how epic this story may be. And it is definitely epic and very well written. I hate reading fanfics by naive beginners because either they don't think things through or they have a very bad format. And since i keep coming back even after losing the net, i hope you get the idea that YOU are one of the fanfic writers that i do respect and I very much enjoy reading your work. ^_^ Just thought i should say so since i keep reading but never review. Oh and thanks for clarifying the spelling of some of the words. It was starting to get confusing.

Mucho Luv!!!!! And NEVA stop writing!!
~Rayni~

dude! you tottally kick ass!!! your fic is one of the best ive read.you better take it all the way to the end or i'll hurt someone. please update soon. lov ya, bbbbbbbbbbbbbyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHERE ARE YOU??????
The story is close to the end and your fans have been 'patiently?' waiting for the final updates. What's happening? Please let us know something and end our frustration.

Please please please... PUT UP ANOTHER CHAPTER!! Cmon Lore, we're all dying to know whats happening here!!
Also... I agree that it would be very difficult to go back through the story and find every single mention of the words that I said were wrong, and you're right to say you'll just continue as you have been. But if you ever want my reasons for believing the other spellings are correct, lemme know.

Gods I love this story. Please continue soon! What was going through Sesshou's mind when he heard Kagome call for her mate? Does Inuyasha know what the howl meant? I can't wait to find out! Please update soon :)

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

i love this story please continue it. its wonderful.

Well, wow! I haven't ever read anything like this, and though you may get this all the time, this truly is an amazing story and you are an amazing author!
I envy you, really, I've been getting ideas in my head for various fictions and only jotting down the base of them, never fully writing them out.
And this...
This!
This is so well written, the story is compelling and I read the last chapter tonight and nearly had a tantrum.
-=Insert groan here=-
I do so hope that you will update soon! I cannot wait to see what happens, it seems like it is so close to the end.
I actually do have one question, something that I wasn't quite clear on, did Midoriko die? I was so into it I suppose I didn't really think about it. Oh well! I'll go back and read it again.
I excitedly await an update and hope that you will consider writing another story. (Hehe, yes, I was dissapointed that this was your only story, I would love to see more!)
An ever-loving rambler (as you can clearly see)
Rach

well done!! kagome's struggle with her emotions and defeat of midoriko was brilliant!
cant wait to see what inuyasha does when he finds kagome and sesshoumaru
tilayha

On your words I believe that they are the correct spelling because that is how I see them on all the Japanese spelling for the anime and maga. Anyways just thought I would tell you I love your story and have no problem with your spelling.

bubbles2187

On your words I believe that they are the correct spelling because that is how I see them on all the Japanese spelling for the anime and maga. Anyways just thought I would tell you I love your story and have no problem with your spelling.

bubbles2187

Evening Lore, I just wanted to post a note to your...note.

Your spelling of the three words, like you said, cannot be considered wrong, and neither can the alternative spellings that were presented to you.

Actually, Tessaiga is technically correct in that, although the true translation of the Kanji is Tetsusaiga, the Japanese language is often fused and the sounds simply 'known'. It's like Sesshoumaru - technically his name is Setsushoumaru, but not a single author would even dream of using that spelling. There are, in fact, two ways to correctly write out the words you are struggling with in Romaji (the americanized word - abc's). Though, to be quite honest, a linguist would spell as the word sounds because that is the only 'true' way to translate a language - so they would stand behind your spelling as 'tessaiga'.

Kirara, however, has been correctly spelled as both Kirara and Kilala. The reason both of these are correct is simply that the Japanese words do not have an 'l' in their romaji characters - they use the 'r'. Hence, both spellings are correct. Though, I've never seen that word spelled 'Kyrara', all of your readers (I am sure) know to whom you are referring. It is quite obvious!

And as for Taiyoukai vs. Daiyoukai, the correct term is 'Daiyoukai' as you have been spelling it. Taiyoukai was actually adopted from a set of facfictions and poor closed captioning for the english reader with some Japanese movies/anime/etc that simply made it popular by lack of knowledge. However, it is so widely accepted...and no language can ever possibly be 'perfectly translated'...that it really doesn't matter which you use. Don't get me wrong, some scholars would translate the Kanji for Daiyoukai as Taiyoukai - again, this is due to pronunciation and inflections on certain syllables that can confuse non-native Japanese speakers.

In essence, there is nothing wrong with the way you spell things. Besides, if anyone throws a tissy, just claim author's creative licensing ... it's your story.

By the way, hurry up with the next update will you? I want to see what happens to the poor creature you have portrayed as Kagome. I thought I made her go through hell.

plz,plz post more chappies
ur fic rox the sox
arigotu,
Forbidden-san

I hope to read more of this story soon

I read the spelling comments. I've seen his title spelled both ways. Kirara has been spelled every way imaginable; same as his sword. Personally I don't think it takes away from the story either way, but that is just mho... In this last chapter was it Daisuke's body or Midoriko or both that Kagome destroyed? At the end I couldn't tell if Midoriko got away or not. Great chapter though.

If I were you I wouldn't worry too much about it anyway. Daiyoukai just means great demon instead of demon lord. It can pretty much be interchangeable.

i dont care if ur spelling it wronge or right please update please if they have a problem tell them to either pretend or shove off, ur a great author, have a great story and plot please hurry up with next chapter please.

i dont care if ur spelling it wronge or right please update please if they have a problem tell them to either pretend or shove off, ur a great author, have a great story and plot please hurry up with next chapter please.

On these 3;
1) Taiyoukai not Daiyoukai
2) Tetsusaiga not Tessaiga
3) Kirara not Kyrara

on 1, I'd rarely seen Daiyoukai so I can't say if it's right or wrong just that I have seen it before.

On 2, both are right it's just which version you're using, the English translators goofed & didn't go back & fix it so that's how you got the 1st spelling & the 2nd is the Japanese version.

On Kirara, I've see it done as both Kirara & Kilala but never with a y until now.

Hope this helps.

i would just like to point out that both taiyoukai and daiyoukai are feasable as are both the spellings of tessaiga

Oi!!! I was frwaking out that entire chapter!! For a while I wasn't sure that she was going to make it. Ah well, Sesshy will be able to help her. On the spellings, the way Tessaiga/Tetsusaiga differs in the English and Japanese versions. Kirara is the correct spelling, and Daiyoukai and Taiyoukai are two different words with different meanings. Or at least they are in everything I've read. Sometimes a taiyoukai is refered to as a youkai lord, or simply translated as great demon. Daiyoukai is used in the manga scanlations. That's all I know. Great chapter anyway!!!!

the spelling of spacific names don't matter as long as us readers know who you're talking about.

ex: in d. gray man, there's a guy named Lavi. his name is also know to be spelled Rabi, Ravi, Labi. I looked them up and they all work.

The spelling that some other readers are sugesting might've came from the subs in the show or the spelling in the book. it does not mean that your spelling is wrong.

Oh gosh, i just love your story, the action scenes and the thoughts/dialogues are fantastic! I eagerly await the next chapter.


P.S. You're right, there's no clear way to spell it, but we all understand what it means, so it doesn't matter. :)

you got me all excited for nothing i thought this was an update you could have added the autgors note at the end of the update

Dude, just ignore it when people correct you on Japanese. Really, I've seen both taiyoukai and daiyoukai used. Same thing with Tessaiga and Tetsusaiga. They're both valid spellings for the words and really, I think it depends on the Romanization system you use.

There are just lots of pocket fanboys and girls who have their favorite spelling who are just itching to correct you, because, evidently, they have nothing better to do.

So don't let it bother you. Just brush it off and laugh, because those reviewers who flame you or get snotty with you only reveal more about their character than yours.

Love ya!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Wow, that was a powerful chapter. And, it would seem, MOST difficult to write. I can see why you might not be totally pleased with it, but I think that it accurately conveyed all the elements you expressed leading up to this point. Midoriko is gone and it was the yokai within Kags that finally sealed the deal.

With their plea to their 'mate,' they did the only thing possible to harness her miko powers and keep them from destroying a half that Kags has come to accept and rely on... so, necessary things happened and that, alone, makes this chapter a GOOD one!! The imagery, as well, added to the power of the action, so I do believe you need to just sit back and accept this one as it came out. Sometimes writing goes like that, ne?

Thank you for sharing this exciting and unusual story with us... and thank you for sharing your doubts, although *I* believe they are rather unfounded. I think it works just the way it was supposed to!! SMILE!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

Three mistakes you keep making honey:

1) Taiyoukai not Daiyoukai
2) Tetsusaiga not Tessaiga
3) Kirara not Kyrara

Please, acknowledge the real spellings of these words and name.

i like this fanfic but i would like to know what going to happen to them so please update soon thank you

What a way to leave us all hanging. that was so mean. Please post the next chapter soon. its going to kill me until its up.

Chaos

oooh, update update update!!!

Finally, Kagome has some self-worth. To me shes always seemed stubborn and slightly pig-headed but lacked confidence and self-respect. Probably has something to do with what you described, shes always felt inferior and incapable. Anyways, usually I don't like big battle scenes, but the way you write them is more of a discription of the emotions and feeling of the warriers, which I do enjoy, it builds characters when you see how they react in these situations. By the way a beautiful evaluation of the relationship budding between the two youkai, and at the risk of sounding stupid that was the youkai helping her understand and not just Kagome herself riiiight? Oh well, you better update soon, I mean what a place to leave us hangin!

The battle sounds like the youkai are fighting against overwhelming odds. I'm glad Inuyasha, Miroku, Sango, and Kilala (or however you spell her name) joined Sesshoumaru and Koga et al. I would like to see Kagome kick some butt.

i have loved this story so far. one thing though, 'kirara' is actually spelled as 'kilala'. in japanese l sounds like an r. anyway, please update soon! thanks!

OMG!!!!! That is so utterly evil!!! AWFUL CLIFFIE!!!!!!! GRRR!!!!!!!!!!! *smack* OW!!!!!!!
I hope you update soon, or you may well wake up to bags of flaming chimpanzee turds on your front porch!!! Muahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!

Oh MY!!! While I can understand the writer's block and all, I SINCERELY hope that doesn't happen for the NEXT chapter! What a place to LEAVE us! Of course, I'm sure dozens of other readers are doing the same thing I'm doing... large sweatdrop and probably a few *head-desk* motions as well!!!!

I'm so glad that Kag's youkai have finally agreed upon a course of action with the all-too-human side of the girl. This can only help as the relationship with Sesshy progresses. Of course, said demon Lord isn't gonna be too happy when he finds out that she faced off w/Midoriko in her human form. I'm betting on a few explosions then!!

All in all, a terrific chapter, leaving us with LOTS of good stuff to contemplate as we eagerly await the next EXCITING installment!! Thanks so much!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

enjoying the fic very much. those make out scenes are pretty hot and sexy.! lol

Hey! It's not fair, Sesshomaru can't just kiss and charm his way back into Kagome's good graces, she'll never win a fight! It seems you've found my weak spot, any fanfic that is well written has a good plot and includes Sesshomaru purring is instently in my good books lol. I'm so pleased you've updated, I mean I was scrolling through my favorites list and clicked on Lore and Ta-Da I got to read another chapter. Finally something is happening between Kagome and Sesshomaru and they're willing to aknowledge their 'feelings'. I wonder how Inuyasha will react when he finds out about the scent mark on Kagome. I mean he may be a hanyou but he must at least know what it means right? GAHH! Update soon, for my sake please!

wow thats so good! in one chapter i was close to tears then laughing then "aww"ing....you have MAJOR talent to get all that from me! pleasse can you e-mail me when you update i think u had something about it in an authors note so i'll go back and check...and i'm babbling aren't i? well keep up the great work =]=]

*claps* Yay, new chapter! Heheh, Kagome seems a bit star-struck when Sesshou shows her what it means to belong to him, eh? Nice. Keep up the great updates! I love it. :)

Can't wait til your next update!! Update soon!!

Very nice chappie I love the fluff between sesshy and kagome keep it up I love it

Arry

Ok, so first off, this is great. I'm not going to comment on anything other than that I like it, cause its 2 am and if I start in on anything other than that I'll be writing till 2:30! I just wanted to say that I was looking on IMDB today for a movie, and I somehow stumbled across one called.... Go on, guess! ... All right, I'll tell you. Its called Immortal Beloved!! Apparantly, it was a vampire movie! I didnt really look at the info on it, cause I was desperately searching for The Polar Bear King, which bears several resemblances to the story of Cupid and Psyche (we were discussing it in my lit class) to show my teacher. But it was an amusing '...eh?!' moment, so I took thought, hmm, should mention this. So here I am, saying so! (See why I'm afraid to do more than MENTION anything? I ramble like CRAZY) Anyway, gnite!

poor kouga. silly wolf. sure she might get a little mad but only cuz sesshoumaru didnt see everything that happened. kougas gonna be heart broken again. poor guy. once again on the edge of my seat. i really thought sesshoumaru would hurt kouga.
glad he didnt though.
tilayha

omg.... when i think it can't get better.... It Does!!!! Excellent!! Pure awesomeness!!!! Keep it up!!

Wow. I mean, wow. I can't believe I missed this fic before. It's really great! I don't think I've ever seen another that included Kagome taking in the youkai and becoming one with them in such a way. Brilliant! And I love how the plot is going. The love story is coming along slowly but surely, which makes for a terrific read. I can't wait to see more next time you update :) I will be keeping an eye on this story!

Once again....that was absolutely GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE...and please don't keep us waiting!!!!!!!!!! lol

Uh oh , Sesshomaru's staked a claim on our favorite female. So Kagome didn't understand what Sesshomaru meant? WIll her inner beasts clue her in as they have before, or will she have to wait for Sesshomaru to tell her? Something tells me Kouga's only gonna make it all more complecated, the poor ookami, he should know not to touch what belongs to the Daiyoukai. Anyways as always it's been a pleasure to read.

oh ho! poor misguided Kouga. poor jealous Sesshoumaru! Keep up the good work, and please update soon!

Wonderful, two canines chasing after her!

-Dani.

god I love this story! It just keeps getting better and better. hehe. I love it when Fluffy gets jealous. keep up the excellent work

First i would like to say thanks for mentioning me it makes me feel special... XD! Any ways... again a good chapter but i can't wait until the next one to see the shit hit the fan. Keep up the good work and Post again soon.

Chaos

It's been a while since I've been able to sit a read a fanfiction. Yours was one of the first I returned to. What a great developement! It seems that our favorite couple is working their way through different types of confusion and Kouga is going to get adjusted. I love the way your plot is slowly unraveling to revel a very satisfying fiction. Keep going! I'll be waiting with barely contained patience!

Uh-Oh!! Koga better lose that idea, and send it scurrying somewhere where it will be eaten by something big and hairy. If not, then I hope he gets the crap beaten out of him by Fluffy. *snicker* Oh, and how long do you think this fic will be? I hope, VERY long!!! Keep writing!!!

well worth the wait for this one!! your discriptive words even had the hair on the back of MY neck standing on ends. i really like how this story is evolving. you leave my greedy imagination wanting more with each chapter.
tilayha

I very much enjoy this story please update again soon. Youe work is very good.

Chaos

wow awesome chapter! I loved it!

I hope you update more soon!

Ja Ne!

Please update soon. The story is just getting more and more intriguing.

ok I am down with the latest update uh uh I wouldl ove for you to email me with a n update but I need to know how to get you to do that. This story is so unique I am in love with it lol. My email is disgracedworld@yahoo.com

Thanks for such amazing work

Chelsea
Magnificent Chaos
Disgraced world

for chapter 20 I KNEW IT WAS MIDORIKO I KNEW IT AHHHH!!!! lol sorry had to do it kick ass story still reading by the way only on chpater 20 thanks peace you

Chelsea

kk down on the first chapter. i am enoying it actually it seems like it will be elongated and I LOVE THOSE! So good story please keep it up you will see a review from me in a later chappie

Chelsea
Disgracedworld
Magnificent Chaos

wow my thoughts were right this was an awesome fic!

I meant to start reading it a month and a half ago but was caught up lol if you know what I mean.

Well I'm glad I read it now and now I have one thing to say...

UPDATE!!!

I wish to know how Kouga will react to Kagome's newfound abilities lol!

Ja Ne!

I absoloutly love this story; enchanting, wonderful and wickedly awesome. You're an amazing writer... P.S UPDATE SOON!

i can only imagine what koga is gonna do when he sees kagome. will sesshomaru be able to control his beast?? hee hee
tilayha

poor kouga i hope sesshoumaru and kagome get there before anything really bad happens. and thanks so much for letting me know about the update!!! i was out of town on vacation and couldnt get to my computer for 10 days....so thank you very very much!!
tilayha

Houri - a seductively beautiful woman with black eyes. A nymph of the Moslem Paradise, thought of as always young & beautiful......Thats our Kag & to think that Sess thought of her that way. That's just so sweet. (goosebumps)

I've got to tell you, I am very impressed with your story. It is not only well-written (some typo's and spelling, nothing serious), but it is creative and fresh. The concept of Kagome being a shell for the youkai of the Tama is seen often, but the idea that they allow her the ability to shift into different youkai forms was pretty damned unique. Nice job! I look forward to reading the upcoming chapters. I did have one question, in Chpt. 28 you used the italicized word, 'houri'. I was wondering what that is. I wasn't able to find a Japanese translation. Thanks!

Don't worry about the occasional misspelling, word useage, or omitting a word. I did secretarial work for 24 years & find it uncomfortable typing on a laptop keyboard. Give me a plain old typewriter any day. In reading fan fics, I've learned to mentally correct any mistakes. The few you make are easily overlooked because your story is so entertaining and has such depth to it. Keep on punching those keys with those creative juices of yours & give us more.

i must admit that i LOVE your fic!! i cant wait for the other chaps!! update soon :)

Kagome is immortal, ummm... an immortal can't die.

Jaken needs to get his head cut off by tokijin. lol or at least sesshy should have used tensaiga to get his point across. lol
tilayha

My dear, you have little to worry about with this chapter ... except that hordes of readers may want to lynch you for Jaken's interruption!! I think you've done a wonderful job, even sans beta! And to have written such a wonderful chapter, even with WoW stuff going on ... well, I'm impressed!

I only caught one or two niggling little things ... one being 'illicit' instead of 'elicit.' The other being 'free reign' instead of 'free rein.' Usually when one wishes to indicate that something has been allowed free, it is in a riding analogy, as in allowing one's horse free rein.

Aside from that, I saw nothing much wrong with what, I feel, was a perfectly delightful chapter. Knowing of your other difficulties, make that a perfectly WONDERFUL chapter. Thank you so much for going to all that trouble to update while you were in the midst of so much other activity!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

I hope that ALL of her has to agree first. Look out Midoriko! hah!

It was great. It had me reading page after page! I loved it! I just couldn't stop reading! Whic got me introble a lot but it was worth it!I hope you write more soon! Immortal Beloved is one of the best stories i've read in a long while!

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE it OMG plz tell me your gonna update sum more

Beautifully written as always!!!! Sorry about the computer crash!!

Yummy ... I love the way this is developing oh-so-slowly ... the anticipation is half the fun, isn't it? Please, just don't make us wait too very long for MORE fun, ok?

Sorry to hear of your 'puter problems ... crashes are NOT fun things, as I know from my own bitter experience. Backing up is EVERYTHING!! After having to pay an ungodly amount to have my hard drive (thus, my life) resurrected by a professional company, I've learned my lesson.

This chapter was beautifully done ... the mystery surrounding what Midoriko will do, the 'developments' with Kags & Sessh ... GOOD STUFF!! Eagerly looking forward to more!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

AWESOME!!! I love the way Sesshomaru behaves in this fic!
please update soon!

great chapter! you definatly go indepth with your discriptions, of the characters emotions and the surroundings and what not. splended! update soon!

i thought kagome would have been mad at sesshomaru a little longer but she did get the better of him by the end of her rant. hee hee. i see many many fights between these two in their future. most of them just for sport ofcourse.
tilayha

Oooo *points* a new one!! I likey... short like you said buuuuuuuuuut i love the fluffyness!! keep it up!!

Ah, so the light is starting to dawn on the mighty demon lord, huh? I love the interaction between them and the way you have portrayed Sesshy's attraction and confusion. *I* feel it's very much in keeping with what would have happened if Takahashi-sama had gone that route in the manga.

How nice of you to help your cousin with the firstborn while they are awaiting the birth of the next!! I sure wish I'd have had someone like that around when my second child was born ... I'm sure all your loyal fans will (mostly) patiently wait until such time as you can devote yourself to writing again. At least, I'll TRY to be patient, but curiosity is getting the better of me, you can be sure!

Thank you so much for a very enlightening and entertaining update - you helped make my worries melt away for a short time and I appreciate that more than I can say!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

OMFG!!!!!! That was one freakin awesome battle scene! Awesome!

such an evil being he is. but soooo hot. lol if i were kagome id be very pissed off at the fact he cheated and forced out an inyou that he knew he could beat just out of pride.
hope to see more soon.
tilayha

omg omg omg!! That was awesome!!!

Loved the fight but I can't help but wonder will it hurt her everytime she shifts during battle or will the next time not hurt like her first transformation hurt but not later

OH! I was desparately hoping that Kagome and Sesshoumaru would find some equal footing! I believe I see what point you are trying to get across with his strength being her strength. But, at the same time, part of me is still crying over Kagome's beating.

This Fic is seriously twisting into a mass of tension that involves a lot of emotion from the readers. I love it all. Even the parts that make me wince! :D Keeping going! I hope they will eventually meet on level ground!

Wow good story can't wait for the update.

WOW, that's quite the twist ... him managing to fight her into submission! I can hardly wait to see how this works out when she wakes up ... I'm betting SOMEONE isn't gonna be very .. um .. happy??

I love the twists and turns in this story, as well as Sesshoumaru's grudging attraction to Kagome with her new powers. I am eagerly looking forward to seeing where things are going from here. Given the story thus far, no doubt that things are going to be heating up even further, huh?
:D
~~Wiccan~~

absolutely amazing!!!!!

a human besting the demon. ha ha i love it!! is she gonna be a good girl and do as shes told or is she gonna fight him again?? cant wait to find out
send update message if you care too. ive put this one on my fave list.
tilayha

omg, I love this! great job! very well done and planned! I would love and cant wait for another chapter, please update soon, I know no one can get enough of that fraze, XD lol. ttyl

yay!!! another awesome chapter!! can't wait for the next!!!

absolutely beautiful!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!

I can't wait for the next chapter.
I am jumping off of my seat trying to contain the excitement of what sesshomaru will do to kagome when she gets back

UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!!!! THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY AND I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW IT PROGRESSES. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!

yayness I love this story and I can;t wait for the next update. so update soon and keep up the good work.
sakura

Very interesting twist in this chapter. Look forward to seeing how this works out with Sesshoumaru. Please update soon.

this is so amazingly good!!! i am hooked!!! please finish and email me when new chaps are up. Thank you!!!!!

just ...wow! Loved the update!

oh my gosh!! this just keeps getting better and better! I can't wait for the next one!! Sesshoumaru is going to be mad.....^.^

I absolutely love your story. you've had me hooked onb it and i've been reading it all morning, and even last night when i was dead tired i managed just over a chapter. LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE it and keep it up!! ^^

You shouldn't hurry to update! You'd get dead tired then the chapters would [No offence meant] suck. I know it might seem like I'm just saying this for thew story but, you should rest! If you work goes till 1pm you shouldn't push yourself so much! I mean what would happen if you were ever to get sick? Then you wouldn't be able to update at all, right?

Anyways, enough sounding like a mom! I really really REALLY love your story! My parents are getting mad at me for having my eyes glued to the computer soooooooo much times! Teehee! I can't wait for the next chapter! And by the way.. YOUR TITTLE ISH AMAZING!!!

--Lady T.

[P.S. Don't mind the typos please!]

You shouldn't hurry to update! You'd get dead tired then the chapters would [No offence meant] suck. I know it might seem like I'm just saying this for thew story but, you should rest! If you work goes till 1pm you shouldn't push yourself so much! I mean what would happen if you were ever to get sick? Then you wouldn't be able to update at all, right?

Anyways, enough sounding like a mom! I really really REALLY love your story! My parents are getting mad at me for having my eyes glued to the computer soooooooo much times! Teehee! I can't wait for the next chapter! And by the way.. YOUR TITTLE ISH AMAZING!!!

--Lady T.

[P.S. Don't mind the typos please!]

hi lore-chan,
plz post a new chappie!

luv ya,
night

still love it waiting patienly for your next chapter.I hope things get better for you at work. just breathe for a while and it will give you rest and strength to deal with work.

i very much like this story. i wish this chapter had been longer but hey beggers cant be choosers rite. cant wait to see more of kagomes youki surface, maybe even have one stronger than sesshomaru. that would put him in his place lol. and poor inuyasha.......he doesnt stand a chance.

I just knew that the soul was midoriko! Hehe! And ooooh i cant wait to know how sesshou is gonna 'seduce' kagome! ;) hope u update soon n asap! Gahaha

Hey! love your story. I like how you showed the strenght that love gives to someone. As seen in the the chapter titled "Brother Against Brother". What I like too, is that the romance is progressing slowly and how it's Sesshomaru who falls in love first. Oh! and another thing that I love about you is that you update almost everyday. Bye! And keep up the good work.

I love it please shoot me an email when you update ok. thanks.

Freakin aye! Whoda Think it.....I had my suspisions but for it to actually BE Mido.....Wholly magical magpie-ibis hybrid bird!Wowza...

Wow! Love it! Talk about your plot twists! Can't wait for more!

Oooh! I am so in looove with this story! Its brilliant!! =D hope u update soon =3

May all the has-been's careful planning come raining down around her ears.

AHHHHHH!!!

I swear if you touched that little girl, priestess or no...!

I love how you have Sesshomaru justifying his feelings. Another very vivid chapter.

Yay! So good, I want more. Haha, no, I really like it, plus the whole you updating with two chapters just makes my day =D. Anyway, can't wait for more, thanks for the update!

If she DARED!!! (crush all who hurt little girls!)

Here's hoping you step on a spiritual landmine whoever you are! (the spirit, not you)

Animals can sense when you love them. I had a little dog run across a street to lick at my hand when I just caught sight of him. Granted, not all have had circumstances or breeding that will allow them to trust it easily, but knowing how they work/the language helps too. I can't blame Sess' youkai. Affection has been in short supply for both aspects of himself.

Won't work. Big surprise. Sometimes her self-sacrifice makes me want to smack her silly.

Oh good. I always preferred Inu over birdies. Screechy things. Now she'll get lessons that 'Yasha needed all along.

Stupid 'Yasha. Does 'personal space' ring any gongs in your mind?!

O_O no...the spirit...thingy...(midoriku?? I think I spelt her name wrong but oh well) didn't take over Rin did she!?! T-T sniffles. Aw, but man, such a good fic!!! It's amazing, and so well thought out..gez, you must be brilliant ^_^ haha. Thanks for the update, please post more soon!!

I just came across this story, and I'm really enjoying it! It's very well written, the characters are very real, and I'm completely intrigued.