~Blinks~ On hold? Oh, bother. I was going to threaten you by saying that I would drown all the chocolate bunnies you get for Easter under masses of lime flavored Jell-o... Oh well. Update as soon as you can. Please, PLEASE don't forget about it...
Love and fudgesicles~ Tainted
-Growls-
You will update. Soon. Now. NOW, DAMNIT!!!
Great story so far. And yet.. it's been almost a year since you last updated. Why? I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
If you don't update within a month, I swear I will start to send you angry emails and empty threats!
Please?
snowbird- Sat 20 Oct 2007
Please---where are you? You've not updated since June! I check this story almost daily and keep getting disappointed. I hope you've not abandoned it. Please let your fans know something.
knife thrower- Wed 17 Oct 2007
Please hurry! Write More!!!!!!
snowbird- Sun 02 Sep 2007
I like the plot of this story. I very much like that finally Kag is learning to become a warrior instead of a wimp relying on others to protect her. I love the anime except for that. She's always yelling for InuYasha to come to her aid. Yuck! Also, I'd put more of Sess into the anime. Too bad it doesn't belong to me. So hooray for you making her strong and letting Sess be the one to teach her. I wouldn't mind having a teacher like him. Please take pity on your fans and give us an update. I'm greedy and would like more than one chapter, but, alas, I'll take whatever you give.
Could you possibly e-mail me to tell me when theres an update?
I love your sense of humor, this story is incredibly entertaining! Keep up the good work.
Wiz- Fri 27 Jul 2007
holy crap!!! that is awsome!! you have GOT to update and SOON.... or i will eat your face... *smiles innocently*
Rein Manson- Mon 23 Jul 2007
update...update UPDATE OR I SHALL KILL YOU AND LEAVE YOU IN MY BASEMENT MUAHAHAAHAH please !!!!
Tana-san- Mon 02 Jul 2007
"SUCKER" that was priceless!!!! She outwitted Sesshoumaru, a great strategist and warrior...you go girl!!!!! You've got me hooked on all your fics now so I'll be waiting. Jen
Kai- Mon 02 Jul 2007
Sesshoumaru totally just got pwned by non other than Kagome herself! Haha! Take that! :D
kotainuchan- Thu 28 Jun 2007
very good, update soon please!
Yea!
An update in less than 2 weeks!
I'm so glad you like exploring your lighter side. ^_~
*Waits impaitiently for next update...*
Sesshy's gonna make he pay for getting one up on him.
-aura
Chaos Queen- Tue 26 Jun 2007
that was a good hapter, please continue on with the good work and post again soon.
ty,
chaos
naru- Tue 26 Jun 2007
Update!!!! Can't wait.
Solaira- Tue 26 Jun 2007
I loved this chapter, I was hilarious, the ending was great. Sesshy of bested by LITTLE Kagome, that was just great. What woman wouldn't want to be on top of Sesshoumaru. hehehe
Hoping to see an update soon.
HA HA HA he so got owned!!! That was Great. Sesshomaru didn't even see it coming. Please update soon I can't wait to see what will happen next!
inumaru_rapture- Tue 26 Jun 2007
LMAO! That's a great last chapter. I hope you update soon!!! 3
Me Likes This Story Its Nice ... Ha I Cant Belive Sessho Fell For Kagomes Little Trick That Was A Prettie Nice But Dangerous Idea ... Hmmm Inuyasha Is Not Going To Be Too Happy Is He ...
Lady Nya- Tue 26 Jun 2007
Go Kagome! Perhaps his fluffiness needs lessons instead of her.
Carley- Tue 26 Jun 2007
I LOVE THIS STORY!!
MORE!!
i demand more!
grr.
ah!
sorry.
spazzed.
hmmmm.... I vote that this leads to something....
hmmmm.... I vote that this leads to something....
shadowchick- Tue 26 Jun 2007
oh i hope there's a big reaction from Sesshou about that trick it would be totally hilarious
Girl! You have done it. I have no idea why, but I happen to like this story and The Telling and Much Needed Healing...and your darker puppy as well.
This chapter was great! I loved it, and I particularly liked the ending. It made me smile. Now that is my Kagome! Well done, so very well done!
...Well...That was entertaining...lmao! Kagome getting the best of Sesshoumaru. That's funny. Update again soon. ^_^Ja ne!
Ana- Tue 26 Jun 2007
YAY! ONE MORE CHAPTER!! and here i though it would've been another week or so for the next one ^_^ so what happens next ? update soon, kei? please?!
Ana- Tue 26 Jun 2007
Yowh, where's the rest? updates man! Uhm, Please? ^_^
Megan Consoer- Tue 26 Jun 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Heather- Tue 26 Jun 2007
this story is awesome! It is so cool that you have Sess training Kagome because I hate it when she is portrayed as a weak fighter(she kinda is, but this is fanfic. anything goes).
ElegantPaws- Tue 26 Jun 2007
silly girl all this making room crap....I have a good mind to come back later and look for an update...oh...okay...see ya heheehehe
inufan- Tue 26 Jun 2007
LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!!! its brilliantly funny and a nice take on the whole 'sess trains kags' story. so keep it coming, can't wait for the next chappie!
shavostorm- Tue 26 Jun 2007
I liking the story, I know it will be good. Please update as much as possible, I hate when I get into a story only to have to wait for weeks or months for it to continue. I can't wait until you finish the next chapter! Good job!
Violetcarson- Tue 26 Jun 2007
Yay!! Cliffy!! Wait a sec, did I just celebrate a cliffhanger? Weird. Anyway, iit STILL rox, and you had better update soon, or I will slap you over the head with a wet noodle dripping in soy sauce!!!! *shudder* Ew, I LOATHE that stuff!!!
Isis- Fri 22 Jun 2007
I am so glad to see this story updated, it is such a burst of sunshine...it really is, it's light and airy and does not take itself too seriously and full of humor...I still laugh over last chapter's kiss my ass comments...lol..Why would I want to do that? Yep, it still brings a smile to my face! You are just wonderful!!!
kotainuchan- Sat 16 Jun 2007
cute! update soon.
kotainuchan- Fri 15 Jun 2007
cute! update soon.
kotainuchan- Fri 15 Jun 2007
cute! update soon.
Cloey- Fri 15 Jun 2007
I really like this story i think its really quite amusing. Im looking forward to reading this as you put out more chapters.
Flightoffancy- Thu 14 Jun 2007
Your story took me by surprise. It is funny and sweet. I think Sesshomaru would have this kind of menacing dark humor, the bashing quips that make you forget what you were going to say and just growl and get mad.
That would definitely provide some entertainment. But I forsee all this touchy feely hand-to-hand combat training is going to be her (and his) downfall. I love it.
I really love it that you aren't making Inuyasha the bad guy. I really love him. I don't think he is the one for Kagome but he is soooooo cute. You have given Sesshomaru that sexy, dangerous edge with a sense of humor...deadly.
You are good with that suggestion board. I love all the stories that you have going so keep up the good work and have fun.
Til next time, Deb.
i love reading your fics, please continue updating them. hehe... i wonder, what will inuyasha say when she's been out all night?
*grabs duct tape* i'll hold yasha down so Sessh and Kags can get some 1 on 1 time.
XD please update soon
I love reading your fanfics. I hope you'll update again soon.
NeoYoukai21- Wed 13 Jun 2007
your story is great!!! keep up the great work. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job.
ElegantPaws- Wed 13 Jun 2007
Shut up! I happen to love this piece nice to see it resurface *chuckle*. What I love about Kagome is her fighting spirit and you show it well here. It is getting rather interesting...hand to hand eh? Hehehehe..I wonder which of the tachi will finally succeed in following our little miko just the shock alone is worth the wait. Nice update.
oo... i like this. i especially like Sesshy being all playful.
i wonder if he ever would kiss her ass. hmmm... *ponders*
I Love Sessomaru AKA FLUFFY- Sat 12 May 2007
Its not crap its really good so don't say that got it Now Whens the next chappie up??????
Isis- Sat 12 May 2007
I love this story, it is amusing, fun and very well done! "threaten the tree by growling" " Something against the flora" I was literally laughing out loud! You have a wonderful sense of wit and timing. I cannot wait to see more of this story!!!
mizu- Fri 11 May 2007
i really like this fanfic. i've never read one like this. cant wait till the next update.
ElegantPaws- Fri 11 May 2007
First it is not crap and we are all enjoying the hell out of it. Loved how Kags handled that little puppy earred boyo. Silly ass, he does have the best intentions...but his manner leaves much to be desired.
Sesshy is quite humourous in this work. Loving it...
Tana-san- Fri 11 May 2007
Sorry to annoy you once again but an afterthought accured while sending my review....Your little "burst of crap" as you call it is truly an "burst of sunshine" to those of us who have no other source of amusement than to read the wonderful fanfiction you talented writers share with us. I would be totally lost without the adventures you all give me everyday as I am mostly bound to my home. So I thank you and every writer out here in this world of fanfiction for giving me an escape from my life when I need it most. Jen
Tana-san- Fri 11 May 2007
Ok, so I admit to really liking "Unforgettable" but I do like this one too. I was very amused at Kagome's "uncouth" words she shot at both brothers. I'm not big on her getting totally into the whole potty mouth terminalogy too often because when you do have her blow off steam it just makes it all the more hilarious, you know. Each fic's storyline dictates where you are going with her personality and in this where it's close to cannon only InuYasha has such an uncontollable mouth. I am also quite happy to see that you keep Sesshoumaru's vocabulary so close to cannon. I don't recall who I said this to before but when Sesshoumaru speaks he doesn't have the knowledge of contractions and the modern slang we use, so when I read where someone is actually trying to keep him in character speechwise I'm impressed that you've taken the time to do that. InuYasha, Miroku, Sango and Shippo would more than likely pick up Kagome's speech patterns and slang after being with her for so long but not those that she is not in constant contact with. And Kaede's old world dialect is another I am always amused with. So many have tried to keep her in character but that style of talking is hard to keep up. Nile-sama just started a new fic that has Kaede's character and speech done to a T and I just had to comment on that. So, I truly think you are doing a great job on all the new fics you have started and although your name has changed your talent still preceeds you. Have a good night. Jen
I LOVE this story so far! Keep it up! I can't wait to see more. :)
Vulcana- Fri 11 May 2007
It is amusing ;)
Sometimes you don't want the fancy stuff.
Violetcarson- Fri 11 May 2007
Well, if its crap, then I adore crap! I can't wait for more crap! Please update your crap agin soon! lol
This is entirely your fault, maybe next time you won't be so inclined to call your amazing work crap, cause its not, its junk! And junk ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I should shut up now.
Isis- Tue 08 May 2007
lol...Dirt kicking? He deserved it! I love reading your work..and this story show promise to be something really fantastic! I cannot wait until your next update!!!
kotainuchan- Tue 08 May 2007
like it so far
Tana-san- Tue 08 May 2007
You know, only InuYasha can pull off so many swear words and insults and live to see another day. That Kagome has more patience than I could ever have. It's about time she put up a fight. I would have kicked him instead of kicking dirt on top of his head. She's a shard detector, medic, cook, supplies officer, moral officer, mother, sister, friend...the list goes on. The only thing she is not is a lover and soon Sesshoumaru will amend that!!! Great going and I can't wait to see Kiska's twist on the same challenge.
Violetcarson- Tue 08 May 2007
No, you rocked first! Muahahahaha!
*fireworks* Go Kagome!! Way to tell him who rules!!!! Can't wait for more!!!
serasvictoria666- Mon 07 May 2007
wow, you have a lot of stories up. Well, I like this one too. And can't wait to read the next chapter.
Slm_candle- Mon 07 May 2007
Oh sooooo cool update now please.
So far so good...as always.
Wow...another story. I like it. It's getting more and more interesting. Please update soon.
Heheh, I like this story so far. Keep up the good work!
Violetcarson- Sun 06 May 2007
You rock, your stories rock, everything about this sight rocks, and I love FAN FICTION!!!!! Power to the fans man!!!! I also greatly enjoy author's little 'stress relievers' so I would LOVE an update from you!
Isis- Wed 02 May 2007
I cannot believe the treasure trove of stories I discovered in you. I feel like a should just settle back and enjoy the ride. Your humor is delightful, and your stories vary greatly but you still manage to pull them off wonderfully. I look forward to the continuation of this tale, it shows promise to be lighthearted, amusing and chock full of a great plot!
W.D.- Mon 30 Apr 2007
This story is just great, can you please write more on it?
don't worry i wont make any ramen jokes at your expense my son loves it too. Of course he is only 3...
hee hee hee
I started working on this challenge myself. Haven't posted yet...I'd like to finish What a Mess first.
I really like how you've started this! So different than what I thought up!
Dendelion- Sun 29 Apr 2007
It's awesome :) and even is this plot was already used once, you make it sound as brand new xD
And Gosh, I loved the 'I suck' joke.
continue it ^^
xoxo
poppet- Sun 29 Apr 2007
more!!! it got my attention from the first paragraph, but then, you always get my attention and it reads so intriguingly. can't wait for your next instalment.
ElegantPaws- Sun 29 Apr 2007
“It is difficult to blame the tree as it is incapable of movement. One would question however, your reasoning as to why it must perish. Has this tree somehow injured your person?â€Â
And so it begins. Some of my favourite pieces have both in intense dialogue for most of the story. They usually give us as readers the best opportunities to understand and be highly amused at the ying and yang of the duo and hence enjoy the crap of the story. I love it already. This story promises to be a lot of fun as they grow into full understanding of one another. Already my favourite Sylvan God remains in character but shows another side to his nature. Well done Omizumaru. Looking forward to the next chapter. Wow ...Indeed.
Tana-san- Sun 29 Apr 2007
I don't know if you're crazy or what for taking on so many "stress relievers" but I know for sure that you have talent. This one cries out to be a story and not a ficlet. And from what I can sense from the summary they'll be doing the mad,wild,passionate monkey dance...oh yes, smut...hmm...maybe I'm wrong and I should say tastefully done sexual encounters???Heck, who am I kidding, sex is sex anyway you put it and I love reading how you writers put this couple in the most interesting positions...that has a meaning on so many different levels. Well, I guess you can tell where my mind is at...my husband teased me all day and now he sleeps. Glad I have you oh so many wonderfully talented writers to add to my frustrations. You get all 10's for the start of this and a promise of many more if you continue. Jen
lady fairy goth- Sun 29 Apr 2007
i have no idea wat a epic is but anyway your writing good and there is not to much discription but just anough. AND you have chemistry in the first chapter i fucking love you and your story. 8)
oh sorry for the language. and in your profile it said that your from the sunshine state did you ment you come from QLD or is it another place in America that i havnt heard of you can email me if you want fairy-of-beauty@hotmail.com
ok thanks bye
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