that chapter was cute. please dont feel rushed, just take your time. to hell with writer's block.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ASAP!- Fri 24 Aug 2007
This is a very good story. I really hope that you update soon! I cant wait to see what happen in the next chapter. I also cant wait to see how Sesshoumaru will win Kagme back after all the shit he has out her through. How will Kaogme forgive him after all the pain she has suffered? And with the added husband? Will Takamatsu let go of kaomge wilingly or does he have a hidden agenda? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
for one... yay new chap... next question, will that woman that sessh gotten involved in the first place gets her ass kick... next, what will happen to the fox demon kag is involve with... feel bad for him if kag goes back to sessh... are they really involve or is it just an act... more questions but only updates will tell us so don't keep us waiting too long..... good luck and thanks
serasvictoria666- Thu 23 Aug 2007
Rin is so cute!
I still think Sesshy is a jerk and doesn't deserve a second chance. But then again, he is Sesshy. And I want them together. XD
He just better damn work his butt off to win her back. lol ^-^ Now I'm thinking about his butt! What a great mental picture! XD
Anyways, can't wait to read more!
Tana-san- Thu 23 Aug 2007
You're doing great. I personally liked this last chapter. Sesshoumaru deserves what he gets from Kagome and quite frankly, I think he needs a long, hard lesson before Kagome allows Rin to know he is her father. Does she even know or understand that the kitsune isn't her real father? Hope you can continue this on a more regular basis. I'm really curious to see where you go with it. JEN
Come esta?- Thu 23 Aug 2007
Awesome Awesome AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMME!
Sweet_Dark_Silence- Thu 23 Aug 2007
Ooh, poor Yasha! Thanks for the update!
elvira- Thu 23 Aug 2007
poor inuyasha..he got it bad...more chapters please!!
*A-Kay*- Thu 23 Aug 2007
that last chapter was funny. Rin is so cute... as usual. I like your story so far. I like how you have everything going and falling together. Please update soon.
HA! Thats what Sesshomaru gets!
Good work; its fabulous already. And its only the first chappie.
clavira- Thu 23 Aug 2007
aaaw, rin's so sweet! but sesshoumaru is an asshole, why the hell would kagome ever take him back? i mean, seriously, he had no good reason to divorce her, he didn't even visit her after they got divorced or otherwise he'd have know she was pregnant. and then he just decides that -bam- he feels like getting her back so everybody has to suffer for it.
i'm looking forward to seeing how he will get kagome to break up with her current (very nice, sweet and good looking) fiance and get rin (who thinks of Takamatsu as her father) and Kagome to live with him. and then there's shippo, as far as i understood he's Takamatsus son and rin likes him very much....
hopefully you'll update soon (sooner than this one anyway ;))
i'm looking forward to it!
Hello back!!! I'm glad to read another chapter of this awesome story (in lack of a better word to describe how I love this fic). I hope you don't keep us waiting for longer, I just can't imagine how Sesshomaru will gain Kagome back. Too sad that she won't as long as him though...
Ook. Okie. Erm, I LOVE! I won't say all that I want to say, but all in all, I can't wait for the next chapters!
Review dammit! ......Please?
update update update please
update update update please
Jennifer- Fri 01 Jun 2007
AWS0ME ST0RY! Y0UR D0iNG A GREAT J0B S0 FAR' kEEP UP THE GREAT W0Rk. UPDATE S00N.
Happy Birthday my Little Kitten! I truely love you, so very much! Remember to update for your fans!
Inu-Yasha is either gonna die or get his but kicked big time. He should know never to keep some thing from the alpha inu.
Extremely well written, my Love. It seems like everyone who reads it think so as well. Keep up the good work my Little Kitten.
al- Tue 08 May 2007
well,at least you've got some awesome timing.because you left it on a cliffhanger.
so,i'm gonna check up on this story because i wanna see what happens next.
take care,and good luck.
clover_babe- Mon 07 May 2007
really like this fic. hopefully sessho learns from his mistakes.
elsy- Mon 07 May 2007
I trully hope you update soon Its a shame that you wont be able to make it longer but is perfect.
Noacat- Mon 07 May 2007
To answer the question you posed at the end of chapter two. No, I'm rarely satisfied with what I post. Almost always, I think what I've written sucks and I agonize over how to make it better.
Also, this last chapter was interesting. You're keeping me on the edge of my seat! I must know what's next!!
OMG! This is some serious stuff here. I can't wait for the next update.until then chaps... ja ne
what will sessh do to get kag back... update soon and let us know....
I Love Sessomaru AKA FLUFFY- Wed 02 May 2007
Continue as soon as you can please and thank you
Noacat- Wed 02 May 2007
And big thanks to you for writing a story made of awesome!
tonia- Wed 02 May 2007
Wow!!! This story has the makings of an excellent soap opera!! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!!
I really enjoy reading your work. It's really really good. I love it. Great job! ^_^
-River
Clover_babe- Tue 01 May 2007
wahhhhh.
that whorish bitch. gawd. i hope she gets her just desserts and even more. karma is a bitch.
loved it!
Rymsie- Tue 01 May 2007
very nice... i like your style of angst. tho i really hope this will have a 'happy' ending, i really hope you put sessho through hell to get there. bravo.
blkwolf1- Tue 01 May 2007
Hey I love your story so far!!! Keep it up!! Update soon pease!!! ja ne
hitoribotchi_no_yoru- Tue 01 May 2007
love love love it i couldn't stop reading it. but i'm not supposed to be on thhis in class so i ahve to go ^_^ ja ne
Drianax- Tue 01 May 2007
Really good fic! Just one question though: Why did Sess go see Kagome after 4 years apart -- it wasn't clear as to why he showed up? And you should tell more about Kag's kitsune fiance. I take it he is Shippou's birth father? Oh, yeah. How can Rin be fully human, if she is Sess' biological father? And where does Kag's rape play into things? Was it just a random act of violence or a premeditated act? Please update soonest!
oh Please- Tue 01 May 2007
Oh, I like this story. Not that I like Kagome having to suffer such betrayal and abandonment. But I like how he finally realizes what he lost. And I like the part about her doing all the things he had promised, on her own.
As much as I usually like Fluffy, I'm glad Sess is suffering for his arrogance and ignorance. I like that he is haunted by the things he said and did. You never know what you've got until it's gone.
I'm glad Kagome moved on and didn't just sit around pining for him.
Great story, Keep up the good work
Ava 365- Tue 01 May 2007
Sniff, Sniff! what a story. And what a jerk Sesshomaru is. I'm glad Kagome didn't wait for him! That jerk! And her beign raped and Sesshomaru thinking less of her for not being virgin!!! GRRRR!!!
elsy- Mon 30 Apr 2007
Oh I will keeep up my reviews IIFFF and only if you keep updatind once a week. loved the chapter!!!!!
serasvictoria666- Mon 30 Apr 2007
I am totally liking your fic. Can't wait for more.
Sesshy definitely acted like a jerk. I'm actually rooting for the other guy! XD Okay, not really. But yeah, he definitely has a long ways until she forgives him. But I do hope that she lets him see Rin, though.
Anyways, I really can tell that I'm gonna enjoy this fic, so I look forward to the next chapter.
itachiiyoubastard- Mon 30 Apr 2007
Sesshoumaru is such a bitch! Why the hell would he cheat on Kagome fo-for Kaguya?!
*sigh*
Men.. Awesome job, update soon!
Noacat- Mon 30 Apr 2007
OH. Not to be a snot, but the Italian word you used is spelled "Piccola". I happen to have a good friend who speaks fluent Italian and I asked her about the word. I just wanted to give you an FYI, because I know as an author myself, that it'd bug me if it was wrong. Then again, I might be the only one who's weird like that.
Additionally, if you'd like to check it out yourself. (And believe me, I wouldn't just take my word for it. Always verify a reviewer's correction.) Here's a link!
http://forum.wordreference.com/archive/index.php/t-4888.html
Anyway, my mental illness aside. ^_~ This is a really great story, my heart aches for all the characters in this because you've painted it so realistically that I can't see how anyone wins. Same time, I"m on the edge of my seat just hoping for a happy ending. Good work!
It's gonna be a loooooooon week waiting for the next update.
Wow! I think I found another favorite to add to my list. Excellent work with both chapters my dear. Good grammar, interesting plot that promises lots of interesting turns and twists (already you stepped out of the normal by having Kagome wanting to inform Sesshoumaru of their child) , great characterizations, long chapters and promising original characters.
*starry eyed* I'm going to keep a close eye on this story I'm sure. The drama...she compells me! *grins*
jestergirl- Mon 30 Apr 2007
Wow that's great....I cant wait to read more.. Though I do wonder why Rin is human, shouldn't she be a Hanyou?
pah, serves him right. arrogant jerk. may he suffer for a long time and then (after looooads of suffering and heartbreak) have a happy end (BUT ONLY AFTER HE SUFFERED!!!!!!)
elsy- Mon 30 Apr 2007
you really need to update !!! Lo ved the first chapter hope you update soon.
TheHellChild- Mon 30 Apr 2007
u have to update! this story is really good plz update. and don't take so long!!
Extremely well written my love. I fall into the story when I listen to you read it to me. It seems that you have quite a few fans that are hooked on your work as well, keep up the good work my Little Kitten.
Wow! That was really good! I've never seen one quite like this...keep up the good work! I can't wait to read more!
jenn- Sat 28 Apr 2007
i love your story so far, but please dont make kagome's fiance into a bad person like all the other stories.
clover_babe- Sat 28 Apr 2007
love it!
i thought it was supa well-written! continue please!
Noacat- Sat 28 Apr 2007
DUDE! What douche bag rated you down?! This story is awesome. It's intelligent, adult and basically it pretty much is teh win! I can't wait to see what's gonna happen. How will Sesshoumaru win her back... or won't he? Whatever happens, I'm hooked and it's only the first chapter!! You are made of awesome. Just so you know.
grilka63- Fri 27 Apr 2007
I like the story so far! Introducing a fiancee for Sesshoumaru to compete with was a neat twist. Keep writing please, can't wait to see more from this story.
Miyukiyama- Fri 27 Apr 2007
ooooh! something gonna get started!
oh my god that was it was wow
lindsey- Fri 27 Apr 2007
omg, i love ur story. its awesome. it is like so real i was just really into it and i was sad to see that there wasnt another chapter. plz hurry and write the rest. i love ur story!!!!
love lindsey
Konnichiwa Taiyoukai's Lady!!!
I liked yous story!!! Please update soon I can't wait to know what Sesshoumaru will do!!!
Bye!!
Asiaa- Fri 27 Apr 2007
I really like your fic! ^_^ Keep up the good work!
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