| yeah you should do a 3 shot
Violetcarson- Sat 05 May 2007
| Yes!! You HAVE to make it longer!!!!! I'll be waiting, very impatiently!!!!!
Any9- Sat 05 May 2007
I think it's an wonderfull story as it is but if you decide that it should have an sequel I can't argue with you because I believe that this story can only be good. (That is because you are an realy wonderfull writer and because this story has an realy original plot).
So if you decide on a sequel I promise that I read it and that I'll tell my opinion on it.
Olso I think that I'll be happy if you will decide to continue writing.
| I think you should make this in to a story it would be so awesome
I Think That Was Pretty Good!!!! You Definatly Have Style!! But I Think You Should Add More 2 the Story, Either B4 or After This Chapter. This Is a Great Fic In the Making! Just a thought, also, everyone has spelling and grammer mistakes in there fics, but this one has a lot, so i would revise it if i were you. all in all i give this fic a 16/20! ^^ Keep it up! I Hope you continue to write, U know i'll be the first to read them!
With Love (And Support),
Kagome-Chan
wow that was awesome and you could add more chapters if you wanted
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